Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 34

Originally posted by: _RS_

You are just so gud at writing

Brilliant brilliant..

Completely loved it

So yeah major thing out

And they got intimate, making new memories.

Lovet it!

Originally posted by: rash2222

beautiful writing... part 8 was superb... waiting for next part eagerly plz update soon...

Originally posted by: awesomecouples

Its getting better by the day! Cant believe I'm saying this but its actually much better than the serial its self!

Loving it more and more

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: taara113

I'd be lying if I say i had not guessed this (and the photo frame had been a trigger fir thoughts) but as i said before its the way u write it...how u put it across...how seamlessly you let the words flow...its just WOW... absolutely loved it...that moment when she says we were going to have a baby and he repeats...its like ur in dat moment and everything around is still...few words said and so many emotions flying arnd... amazingly written...

And ya thanks for the good time that happened before...this is one sin he wld love to commit time and agn...and u wen brough up the marriage part i almost thought ders a new post -it ready but well it turned out to be an amazing build up for something bigger...

Next part ...jaldiii plsss...

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Part 8

Fantastic and Shocking !

I kept on wondering what was so bad that even Dev felt it to be a sin surely their fights couldn't be it and it's revealed she was pregnant when the accident happened and that's the photo that was missing probably her sonogram of the baby , surely this news will dampen the situation but at least she remembered so now they can slowly deal with it

Originally posted by: LeslieKnope

OMGGG!! This is riveting! I wonder if Ishwari had a role in their lack of a baby. But I'm over thinking things! Aah great, excellent, awesome writing skills! Perfect grammar and syntax :)) thank you for sharing your talent!! 😊