Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 35

Oh damn! They lost the baby, didn't they??

'It reminds me you lived' ... Why am I getting a feeling that they will need much more than memory to remind each other of this...!

It seems you are living the story itself - It is so visual, I could actually be a fly on the wall watching everything happen before my eyes...

The passion, the giddiness of the first attraction, first kiss to first love story and the memory of first loss!!?? (I guess) ... Beautifully sketched...

I fully intended to get here much earlier but now is when I could...
The story is settling in so nicely that I don't mind the wait now. I know the updates are well worth it 😊

Awesome work my Friend!

Originally posted by: purnima17

Really hyper awesome yaar no words may be i dont have any words to describe 👏 and thanq sooomuch for da PM

Originally posted by: masooma98

Oh my God! Could it get any better?

Simply breathtaking... The passionate parts were out of this world! And the revelation, wow, smooth and BEAUTIFUL!

Eagerly waiting for the next part!

Thankss soo much for writing this yar!

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

This actually seems like a novel...so well wrtten...please update soon

Just when you think it can't get anymore interesting, it does. Your writing is magical. 👏 Soo excited for the next update.

Wow!!! I feel like I am reading a Novel! Great writing skills!!

Originally posted by: ARCH21

Oh damn! They lost the baby, didn't they??

'It reminds me you lived' ... Why am I getting a feeling that they will need much more than memory to remind each other of this...!

It seems you are living the story itself - It is so visual, I could actually be a fly on the wall watching everything happen before my eyes...

The passion, the giddiness of the first attraction, first kiss to first love story and the memory of first loss!!?? (I guess) ... Beautifully sketched...

I fully intended to get here much earlier but now is when I could...
The story is settling in so nicely that I don't mind the wait now. I know the updates are well worth it 😊

Awesome work my Friend!

Originally posted by: ssimmy

Just when you think it can't get anymore interesting, it does. Your writing is magical. 👏 Soo excited for the next update.

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

Wow!!! I feel like I am reading a Novel! Great writing skills!!

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Yes! They lost it :(

I was waiting for your comment. It was a big twist and will bring some drama, drama, drama!

Thank you soo much my friend for your very kind words and honest encouragement. They make me want to update a bit quicker :)

*HUGS*

You have pulled me in (along with many others, I know :) ) and that's what any writer hopes for. This is a lot of effort and time investment but you have a natural flair...
Ok! Drama ahead ha ;) ... Waiting to see how you handle this. Now seems the crux of the story and am expecting intense, pain & strength...
You increase my expectations with every update 😃

The sweeter parts are appetiser but the core defines a story...

Ok! That's pressure enuf 😃 but as Dev said once, 'I trust you' ... 🤗