Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 16

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

It was lovely as always 😳 Specially the way you write Malvika 👏 The characters are kept intact as in the show👍🏼 Typical Dev Dixit who won't listen anything against his God This made me remember the halwa episode where he blamed Sona for overreacting. And he is acting so oblivious and trying to cheer her up with materialistic things. Ohh Dev

The rose shaped foil flashback was cute 😳

Loved these lines:

If she were honest, she'd own up to being slightly pathetic. Was it better to be unhappy during the day, cherished at night, and silent in between than it was to be alone?

Originally posted by: Suvika.

The flashback part is so natural Malvika. Something that happens in a lot of households. The guy stuck between the mother and the wife. The mother unwilling to let go an inch. Wife struggling to be accepted into the fold but ending up feeling like an outsider more often than not.

You have brought that out very well. 👏

Waiting for the next part already.

I really liked the flash back part . Its so very true. In the initial days of marriage the lady just tries to adjust so that she gets some acceptance from his mother...The part that mom behaves so well in front of the son is 100% true...and because of which son thinks that his wife is over reacting ...spot on..

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Awww thank u so much rasika😃 I always wait to read your analysis of every part. the things you liked, the things that could be better.. its a pleasure to read!

Thank you taking the time out to do it every single time. I'm very grateful for that. Your support makes me want to write more and more😳 Big hug to you.

P.S : Those were my fav lines too😃

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

I really liked the flash back part . Its so very true. In the initial days of marriage the lady just tries to adjust so that she gets some acceptance from his mother...The part that mom behaves so well in front of the son is 100% true...and because of which son thinks that his wife is over reacting ...spot on..

I liked the flow and pace of the story...well done..will eagerly wait for the next part

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Awww thats so so sweet of you dear for liking my analysis😳..big jhappi to you too 🤗 and you know its our pleasure to read the stories from you. You write so beautifully. Keep writing and giving us such beautiful stories😳

Awsm..just loved the Flashback...wating 4 the next part Eagerly..

Feeling so bad for Dev n Sona. Her memory loss is a blessing in disguise. Did something worse happened in the last year? May be that is why she is suffering from a short term amnesia. But these flashbacks will make her re- live those moments and her pain will be fresh. Waiting eagerly for the rest. Loved it.👏

Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Awsm..just loved the Flashback...wating 4 the next part Eagerly..