Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
FB was awsm.. Iss Iswari ka to kuch karna Padega!!

Hahaha thank you dear! Don't worry ishwari is not as evil in my story😆

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Curlyhairdiary

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Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: bookworm123
The story is moving along very nicely indeed!!
Ish's insecurities cannot vanish overnight even if she accepted their marriage. The relationship between the three characters was very naturally portrayed.

Eager to read the next part of the story.

Keep writing!!

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked this part! I was particularly nervous about this one and the next part.

Will try to update tomorrow :)

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: awesomecouples
Loving it! Continue soon! :)

Thank you so much😃

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_RS_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Meko laga update aagya..😒

Uaan I m waiting for it

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: _RS_
Meko laga update aagya..😒
Uaan I m waiting for it

Kal aa jayega update😃 Promise😳

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautifully put my lady!! 😊

Thank you 😊😊

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_RS_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Kal aa jayega update😃 Promise😳

Oh no I won't be at home tomm... College..😭😭

PM me pls if you have written it

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: _RS_

Oh no I won't be at home tomm... College..😭😭
PM me pls if you have written it

I'm still editing it dear will probably finish by tomorrow.. you can read it tom? I'll pm you as soon as I update! Don't worry, the story isn't going anywhere😃 and thank u soo much. You don't know how good I feel right now to know you are so eager to read it. I'll finish it ASAP😳

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saumiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

"Was it better to be unhappy during the day, cherished at night, and silent in between than it was to be alone?"

These lines👏 Summed up the entire part for me😳 How typical of Dev to completely ignore his mother's actions and Again, so very Ishwari to avoid going out with Sonakshi and being possessive about the time she spends with Dev🤔

I could visualize the entire conversation bits, the part where Sona leaves early and comes back to make Pasta😆 Sneaking to see him in the hospital, You have stayed so true to the characters, Malvika😳

And thanks for adding the romance too😆

Everything about this is perfect🤗

P.S I am officially the late-reader for your ff updates, If that term even exists😆

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: saumiee
"Was it better to be unhappy during the day, cherished at night, and silent in between than it was to be alone?"
These lines👏 Summed up the entire part for me😳 How typical of Dev to completely ignore his mother's actions and Again, so very Ishwari to avoid going out with Sonakshi and being possessive about the time she spends with Dev🤔
I could visualize the entire conversation bits, the part where Sona leaves early and comes back to make Pasta😆 Sneaking to see him in the hospital, You have stayed so true to the characters, Malvika😳
And thanks for adding the romance too😆
Everything about this is perfect🤗

P.S I am officially the late-reader for your ff updates, If that term even exists😆

Hahaha.. as long as you read it, I'm happy😃

Thank you so much! I'm trying my best to not deviate too much from the show, but I do tend to get carried away sometimes😆

I'm gonna try my level best to redeem Ishwari in my story. I just can't connect with her character as shown on the show right now. I can't accept that she's become this evil. I'm trying to keep her in a saner frame of mind as far as possible.

Again, thanks a lot for reading and taking the time to comment on the story. Hope you like the next part :)