Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

purnima17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Very Nice when is da next update

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_RS_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Very nicely written..🤗

You are such an amazing writer..

Koi ni..yeh nai toh agla Romantic sai..😃

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

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So, Dev is still clueless and Sona needs to endure physiological pressure from Ishwari...you brought out the essence of the story...the story flow was superb...if fact, in reality too this happens more times then we would like to admit...Good job

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: LiveLife321
I was waiting for this...thank you but post the next one soon and dont make us wait for long since you know this wait will be killing us.🤗

Awww thank you so much dear🤗 I will try my level best to post the next chapter as soon as possible😊

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: purnima17
Very Nice when is da next update

Thank you!😃

Will try to post the next one soon😊

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: _RS_
Very nicely written..🤗
You are such an amazing writer..
Koi ni..yeh nai toh agla Romantic sai..😃

Thank u so much dear🤗 Means a lot!

Yes, I promise to include more romance in the next one😃

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LiveLife321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Awww thank you so much dear🤗 I will try my level best to post the next chapter as soon as possible😊

Will be waiting...

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: JazzyM
So, Dev is still clueless and Sona needs to endure physiological pressure from Ishwari...you brought out the essence of the story...the story flow was superb...if fact, in reality too this happens more times then we would like to admit...Good job

Thank you😃

Yes. you're right. I wanted to show what would happen if they just went with the flow and got married without dealing with their issues. Situations like these would arise which is why the separation track was so necessary. The main incident that Dev wants to hide from Sonakshi is still pending to be revealed. Thanks for your support😊

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Amazing part!!😊

Thank you so much😃

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

It was lovely as always 😳 Specially the way you write Malvika 👏 The characters are kept intact as in the show👍🏼 Typical Dev Dixit who won't listen anything against his God This made me remember the halwa episode where he blamed Sona for overreacting. And he is acting so oblivious and trying to cheer her up with materialistic things. Ohh Dev

The rose shaped foil flashback was cute 😳

Loved these lines:

If she were honest, she'd own up to being slightly pathetic. Was it better to be unhappy during the day, cherished at night, and silent in between than it was to be alone?

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