SS :Pathjad Saawan -last part pg17, imp note pg23. - Page 11

am loving this one kavya... just realised the title makes so much more sense now 👍🏼

Promo

'there cannot be another person in my life' as he said these words, arohi felt she was falling down, not in those endearing feelings, but falling down in her life, once again. Tears of prickling pain filled her eyes and she quickly turned her face to the window. 'it can be only ..' and he had stopped, who else can it be other than the girl, he was so choked that he could not even finish his sentence. Did she invoke his loss one more time with her persisting questions. Not hearing a word from him afterwards, made her feel guilty. She too could not say anything.

'Arohi we are here' he called out to her when she did not get down even after stopping in front of the gate. Only his voice brought her back, 'thanks , good night, and sorry' she hurriedly uttered and went in without looking back.

nai shona , I just started writing, and came to this point, thought it will be good for a promo.

Originally posted by: kavyasam

nai shona , I just started writing, and came to this point, thought it will be good for a promo.

lots of thoughts among themselves by the way. hope ppl dont get bored after reading. 😆

ok np prob I've to read it after my exams r over...but will try to sneak peek btw tht...😆 n abt getting bored nah di we'll not get bored just write in ur style we'll adore it😊

First I'm sorry for commenting late...
now back to the SS I love the title 'Pathjad Saawan'
I just read all the three parts... the story is sooo amazing... Loved It..


Now Part 1:

Amazing start... so it was love at first site for Arjun.. well anyone can fall in love with the chulbuli Arohi... I loved the way he would sit in the balcony and would look at her... i felt soo sad for Arjun when he got to know that Arohi is married... i wish he would have said it...it was really a sweet bitter pain for him...

When you first mentioned about the sweet pain i really thought that they would have been in love and something must have happened and then they must been separated... but it was completely different its like silent love kind off... Arjun really have suffered a lot in three years...

Part 2:

So finally now Arohi know that Arjun knew her from before but not that he loves her... loved their talk about Poona... Aww Arjun he has a handicapped leg... Arjun noticed that some spark was missing... this is called true love...I love his concerning nature..Wow Arohi could read his eyes... amazing...

When this line came 'so you love this girl and she is married. but if she wasnt and she loved you back, and your parents wanted you to marry someone of their choice, would you do that for them? leaving the girl you liked?' I thought Arohi must have been in love with some guy but again it was opposite, it was her so called husband... how can a guy do something like this to a girl... in real world the girls life is ruined the boy does not have to face any consequences its the girl who has to face it.. but Arohi had really been strong she fought for her right and I loved it...i really felt bad for Arohi... both Arjun and Arohi suffered sooo much and craved for love... and Arjun said right she'll find the one that will love her... he's right in front of her...
Amazing Part!!!

Part 3

Good that she spoke to Arjun about past... its always good sharing problems with someone rather than keeping with ourselves.. I'm sure Arohi must have felt better...

Love their growing friendship... Arohi have finally started feeling for him...Wow...Arjun has completely occupied her thoughts... Loved the talk between Shefali and Arohi... Shefali made Arohi realize that she loves Arjun'Saawan jo aag lagaye , aag woh kaun bhujaaye, ... Saawan jo aag lagaye use... Saajan ka pyaar bhujaye..use saajan ka pyaar bhujaaye'. Amazing lines... cant wait for the next part...

And the Promo... OMG why didnt Arjun said her name... Arohi must have felt bad and now that Arohi felt bad Arjun will feel bad...

Update Soon...

@ Vedika - thank you so much for the lovely feedback. It was so good to read and am glad you liked it. yeah the promo is about arohi trying to tell how she feels and he is saying the same :). The saawan jo aag lagaye song, is from some movie, cant remember it's name, probably it was a mid 90's movie.

Originally posted by: ShilpaLuvsKMH

🤔 I Dont Understand The Promo 🤣 Sooo Update QUICKLY :)