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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all thnx for da pm di...this update made me speechless as u keep updating I'm getting more drawn to the story...it doesn't even feel like fiction to me...if u can define love dis beautifully then how much loving person u wud be...n da update has such a amazign flow...without her knowledege Arohi is feeling insecure tht he loves someone because she is in deep love wit him...well now i imagine when she finds out tht she is da girl wht wud be her reraction...their love is so pure and so selfgiving...there is no give n take...di seriously wht shud I say I don't ve words to express my feelings...ur writing is something tht doesn't deserve comment or is not bound to comment but it only deserves standing ovation cauz comment is seems very little in front of ur work...the way u wrote i can't ask for anything else cauz it cudn't be done any better than u wrote...after reading dis I was so overwhelmed n felt a knid of peace...n truly wht I'm saying is from my heart cauz I just felt so good after reading the update...I wish u were book writer so I cud ve read it constantly n it never came to an end...in a few days my exams coming up so will not be regular on IF ~~ plz update soon na di😊 luv u di❤️ n a big 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika


Di again smthng wrng wth ds like button..
Anyways lved d promo..
Aww she s thnkng abtarjju all d tymm
Yes arjun,hs love n hs gl s very spl

yeah appu some problem with like button. error bolta hai but refresh kiya toh u can see the like.
thank you for the lovely feedback for promo and the update 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
🤗 such a sweet response , and I agree with your take on the promo.
love the emoticons, they are choo sweet. muaah.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: KaranKittu4eva

Awww soo cute!! Waiting for the long updated!! Can't waitt!
Update 7 yr Itch too plz. Thanks love:)

thank you meera 😳.
seven year itch was only one part , if any other idea comes to me to show in their married life, I will add another part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: cherry227

this arjun truly is special 🤗 hes actually almost a fantasy 😍 a man with such a large heart, most sensitive and totally broad minded! who would not fall in love with such a man ❤️ his short coming is negligent compared to the human that he is! - thank you for loving this arjun, arjun just makes any story more adorable.


but his heart beats only for arohi and that makes arohi special too 😳 now that she knows how awesome he is and has fallen in love with him makes me wonder "kaash they would've met before" then arjun would've had his love story and not spent these two years alone, also arohi would not have to go through a bad marriage and have her dreams of happiness shattered 😭 😭 😭 - arjun's arohi and arohi's arjun both are special , just love them ❤️. yep I want to put a line about that as well in next part that why they could not meet earlier :).

but then i guess life has other plans... this way she is more appreciative of arjun than she might've been two years ago... also arjun got to know her as a person, as a friend before taking their relationship to the next level 😊 life is giving them a second chance at happiness with their true love ❤️ like arjun even i miss the bubbly bossy arohi, i hope his love brings her back!
- Exactly!! she would not have felt love the way she is feeling now,

i was upset seeing arjun so disturbed... i wished he would comfort her instead of wallowing in his own unhappiness!! but then thats arjun, her problems are his as far as he is concerned... it was almost as if arohi had taken all her burdens and placed them on arjuns head ☺️ this true and selfless love is such a pleasure to read kavya 👏 - you write so well , feels good to know that what I wrote came across as intended.

She chided herself for that, if he loves some girl so much why is she feeling bothered. She felt bad that he could not get his love. She wondered how special that girl would have been that Arjun loved her so much. As she focussed on that another thing started to occur to her, if Arjun can love the girl still even after he knows she is married and he cannot have her, then how special Arjun must be. now thats what i call falling in love!!! loved the way you wrote this entire process and the aru-shefali convo ❤️ - Shefali's angle was introduced in last minute, I was thinking how to make her realise. these lines when I wrote I felt kind of emotion that I immediately wanted to put it as promo.

im just wondering who will confess first and how... will be waiting for the next update 😃 - yep small twist about confession and then it will be done :)

Super duper loved your feedback. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: kkian

i love ! i love it ! i love it !

omg i love it sooo much❤️
loved d way in which u hav written it👍🏼 so soulful n calm
feel like giving a big tight hug to both of them🤗
update sooon⭐️

Thank you for the lovely comment 😳. yep they both deserve a tight hug.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Karnika4ever

Tnx to shefu to make arohi realise her love towards arjun n awesome update

shefu ki jai ho 😛. even in kmh2 I love shefali for being there for arohi , she is a sweetheart.
thank you for liking it. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arta

I LOVE IT...
arohi is jealous of the girl arjun loves , it will be great to see her reaction when she found out that the girl is her...
update soon di

thank you 😳. will update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: brainychild92

this was enough for now since i have to get ready for class but can't wait to read more!

I agree , it was going to be very long if I had added the next part also, lol, main khud likh nahi paa rahi thi.
thank you for liking it 😳, will update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: arjuhi4eva

Aww..awesome update Kavya..arjun is such a sweetheart <3 no wonder arohi fell for him..after all who wud not ;)

update sooon!!!

thank you naina 🤗. hai na how can arohi resist him.

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