SS :Pathjad Saawan -last part pg17, imp note pg23. - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aakir Pathjad ke baad Saawan ko aana hi tha!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks For Sharing Kavya Di :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for sharing kavya di!!!read it and truely it brought tears to my eyes!!!!!😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Kavya,

Though late, I am glad that I came across this SS of yours. Loved it. Beautifully written and expressed and it strikes a chord in our heart. Yes, I too have come across such real life stories which makes me wonder upon the irony of life. But alas that is life, a mixture of tears and smiles. Tragedies do happen. And I have seen how the ones struck with it, through their sheer will power and determination move ahead and overturn the waves in their favour. May be the realization that we have seen the worst, nothing more is left to see drives them through it. And I also believe that when our fate gives us pain and sufferings, God is kind enough to give us the strength and courage to face and surpass it too.

Reading thru Akanksha's post, my heart goes out for her. I pray she doesn't give up hope and realize that this is not the end and there is lot more to life than marriage. I hope she moves on with her life and find her true identity. God Bless her and everyone who are going through such difficult times!!! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
@akanksha - thanks for sharing. agree with you life is no fairy tale :(.
@shona - no problem :), take ur time, all the best for the exams.
@perfectsoul - glad to know you read the ss. agree with your views. :).
@all - thanks for liking the note and reading the topic. :).
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really don't know what to say di!

that was so disturbing! i mean how can she be so forgiving? i wouldn't be!

if i were her i would have been out of that god forsaken place in the 2nd year itself! can't believe this happens in today's age! so much disturbing!

but i still like to think that her real happiness will come her way soon enough! god can't be so harsh and cruel! i would want her to be independent and fight for her self respect! she shouldn't live at her husband's mercy!

i hope everything turns out good for her!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akanksha82

I hope no one ever comes to such a position in life. Because when you really fall into such things, you realize how helpless you become. Specially when you have no support systems around you.

For Shruti_sh, I read her story, it was painful but still she had a loving father who protected her. In my case, I have no body.

It is not easy to rise up when your world collapsed all over you. From a distance, everything looks very small and insignificant. However, it is when you come closer that their real impact becomes clearer.

It is not so easy dear. There are many problems when you think on it. Had everything been so simple, the world would've been such a perfect place to live. Just be careful in life.

I do agree with Shruti ji, when getting married, specially with NRIs, do think, even if for once, if he has some kind of affair going on already. It is not unthinkable that a person in such western or northern countries never had an affair.

Lets learn from others mistakes. As for me, I never really had much of a choice or say in those times. I had full and justified faith on my loving father, and if you read my story, it was never really his fault too. It was just my luck.

I agree akanksha, there is more to any given situation than it appears, however simple or complicated it might be. I have been married for 9 years now and living in an alien country for so long, I have seen life closely, met many people , each with an unique life of thier own.
The girl in the story I have written had full support of her family and got married again to a nice hearted gentleman and now has two kids, leading a good life. Some get second chance which is nice.
I havenot read shruti's link yet, will read it 😳. best wishes to you, you have been facing the situation bravely enough :).
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st of all so sorry kavya for being late but i have so much going on at the moment that i am finding it hard to spare some time for myself at the moment.
well now as of the SS i must say my overall opinion about it all is that it is amazing and also very sensitive at the same time. a mixed feelings arise as it gives courage & hope to not give up. It is a reality many ppl face i personally have seen this happen infront of me with my sister but reading this is emotional at the same time that 1 has to go through so much. every step of life ppl sacrifice mainly women sacrifice happiness & dreams on the name of religion or emotional blackmail from family.
the story started of beautifully but i feel it has been rushed at the end though it is an SS and that too based on reality so would be like what actually happened but still reading it feels ending has been rushed a bit like filmy type from where arohi rushes & hugs arjun and also the leap but the main thing is they have a happy ending. so happy it ended this way both deserved this happiness also the misunderstanding bit seemed filmy or maybe i am watching too many movies
but i loved the confession the most from this story u did full justice to that. maybe the misunderstandings also helped here as it increased the eagerness more and with love & happiness a mixture of pain was mixed so the feelings really touched me.
shame it had to end so soon. Excellent work kavya another piece of work comes to an end but a well deserved 👏👏👏👏 for u. keep writing like u do & make me a part of them. i will always read them sooner or later & love reading them but i cant be as active as i was so sorry for that.
will catch up on your other FF's soon was planning today but not possible now. My brother has just passed his driving test & is insisting everyone come over for a party.so will be leaving shortly once my uncles operation has been confirmed successfull so just waiting news on that at the moment.. maybe will read on friday if nothing else comes up.
Edited by KMH-NASHA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks imti 🤗, not able to be online , will reply to you properly on monday .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Di I guess I still didn't comment on the last 2 parts. what shud I say, if I want can write a huge comment...all I can say this SS was an bliss...u just didn't write a story but u showed us some reality. Arjun Arohi's love is so pure here...I must say the way u wrote it, u excelled in it over the real one. This was smth to feel with heart. Parts like when Arohi kissed his foot makes a reader wonder how deep their love wud be if I was to see them in real, I can visualize ur depiction. Standing Ovation👏 from side, ur stories r just always wow!! I comment or not cauz I always miss on it, remember I just love reading them.
Muaah for ur beautiful creations!!

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