A story: Dusk and Dawn(p12,13,14 updt)

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--Anushka--

@--Anushka--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

@kk-dd4ever, wats ur good name dear? well yeah and the story has just started😊 i just have kind of sketches and it seemed got quite long long list of chapters.

I am Anushka. I have read many OS of yours. I think this may be an FF . I loved your update👍🏼update the next part soon..

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

reserving nisha, will read them alltogether. :)

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: kk-dd4ever

I am Anushka. I have read many OS of yours. I think this may be an FF . I loved your update👍🏼update the next part soon..

I know. Can I call you Anu:) I got my cousin whose name is Anushka and we call her Anu :D

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--Anushka--

@--Anushka--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

sure no problem:)even all in my family call me anu.

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kavyasam
reserving nisha, will read them alltogether. :)

Kavya when i had a rough sketch of chapters in this story, it is going beyond 20😆

So I guess thats meri Kyunk Saas bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi saga🤣

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kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Du_Nish

Kavya when i had a rough sketch of chapters in this story, it is going beyond 20😆

So I guess thats meri Kyunk Saas bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi saga🤣

😆 , even I din know I can write more than 10 chapters. lol. humare liye yahi ksbkbt hai I agree, 😆

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

page 4 update:

wow! i have no words! i wish i learn to write poems like you someday in future but as for your arohi i'm loving her! she has been strong and independent even back then, i would like to be a strong person like her! hmm...arjun,his loving and understanding nature,it makes me feel warm, and nandy is as sweet as candy! he was there in her life when dishnee was born? hmm...thats sounds confusing...yet so good.*i don't know why*
and finally you,eshu,i have always felt that your choice of words and the way you move your stories forward had something warm,soothing and calm vibrations emitting from them. this particular update of yours has helped me relax my mind,hmm...relaxation,this is something i have been trying to do for a while but failed because of the busy n buzzing life and the calmness which i wanted my brain to feel was successfully given to me by this update of yours!thank you!

varshu,
7:05 pm
22-08-11

page seven update:

i absolutely love arohi!! from the firts two chapters i was worried that things might be from dishnee n nandy's perspective and we might miss arjun and arohi...but wow! as usual you surprised us!! and arohi...man she rocks!! she is not the kind of girl who wants it all in pink or sees the world through pink spectacles but still she sees the beauty in things!! i absolutely loved it all!!

p.s: sry for the late comment...actually i had read your updates long ago...but could not comment...
varshini :)

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Wow Varshini

This feedback was so warmfelt for me😊
I will try to update it in this weekend or tonight!

Could not do these 2 days because me too was laid back for my exams soon😊