A story: Dusk and Dawn(p12,13,14 updt) - Page 5

lovely n a bit different...

Nice updates nisha..the poem was really expressive..!!
Hmmm..waiting for more on arjun's character!

oh gosh nisha u write so beautifully & in depth. i love reading your FF's i can understand where this is going & what is happening now but yaar some places r so confusing that i have to read over over again to actually understand what the FF really means.

Your way of expressing is superb :)

Always love your writing totally matured one. update asap:)

Chapter 4: ''first thought of first Semestre''

Nandita nodded silently and turned to the next page. The page was a little burnt and there were some tattoo designed on the page. Amazingly it has their favourite tattoo designs on that page. Was that a coincidence or was it real that tattoo existed on those days too. She has the Chinese peace, risk and opportunity symbols round the poem. She was amazed the girls once again when the title on the second page was actually written by dried red roses that were crushed into powders and glued.

Chapter 2: ''first thought of first Semestre''

Happy was I

Right was it

Feeling as a fly

And living a fistful fit

Of year one

In university

With John, Diya, Adil and Brown.

New mates

In my rolling fate

Of being twenty.

At this time best college, Udayana University

Beautiful scenery

Perhaps the feel that leads me in a trance.

Arjun talked to me once a week

Time was definitely a difference

Hardly a year flew in this relationship

Never felt the way friends talk about love

Perhaps because it was all about friendship

This is why we never drove

Passion in the grooves

Like I read in Mills & Boons

Or perhaps we were too young

Would love blossom?

Diya said to me that Love is unquestionable

Then why am I in puzzle.

Am I thinking too much

Okay it is time for me to taste my prepared chocolate fudge.

C U diary

Me 08.01.1977

''wow,'' sighed Yudishnee. ''she was not sure about the feeling she had for Arjun,'' she added. ''did it lead something unexpected?'' she continued. ''dita, aunty Diya also did that course right? Is she my mom's friend?'' she added.

Nandita was herself surprised to see her mother's name in the diary. She wanted to hold it but the chance is growing high on the Diya mentioned in that diary is her mother as she studied ''Psychology with finance'' where they are studying their course.

Nandita wondered. She remembered her mother used to talk about her friends but she never asked her their names. Her mother once defended bad mouth to Yudishnee's mother when she said that whatever decisions she took, she is at lost, and she is torn between family and move on.

It means something and perhaps the answers are going to unlock in the forthcoming pages. The poem was so simple, brief and yet showed the way Mrs Arohi was thinking; suddenly both girls could empathise in the lady's state of mind as they have also gone through this stage. Nandita was also not sure on her feelings towards Abhinav. She took a break from it as well. They were knew each other as childhood friends. It is true that they grew up together and shared some friendly moment, it is true that she feels she wants to share her success and happiness with Abhinav but she wonders if that is what love is. Yudishnee can feel the carefree spirit of her mother reflected in her as well. She has been through this state of mind too when each time she questions is it love that she feels for the guy. In her perspective love means compromise, perhaps her viewpoint will change when the pages of this diary will be flipped out.

''sis,i am hungry.'' Nandita intervened her thoughts.

reserving for now will get bk to it tmrw

Res.

full of suspense. I think Diya will reveal the truth to nandita. Too good:)

Originally posted by: punam2712

Res.

Why did Diya let Yudishnee bad mouth her mother if they were friends.