Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai-Epilogue Updated on 16/11/2018 (page 15) - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
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First person to comment on this chapter.
Cute love confession btw Prem Heer.
Excited for next update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92
Aww
So cute... Itz very beautifully written... Just love this part too.. Continue next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93
Nice update
Prem heer confession was nice
Heer's care for prem is written beautifully
Totally enjoyed reading
Update soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mijanur

First person to comment on this chapter.

Cute love confession btw Prem Heer.
Excited for next update.





Thank you so much for commenting...i am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Trisha510

Aww

So cute... Itz very beautifully written... Just love this part too.. Continue next part soon




Thank you trisha for your comments...glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update
Prem heer confession was nice
Heer's care for prem is written beautifully
Totally enjoyed reading
Update soon eagerly waiting





Thank you ananya for wonderful comments...means a lot.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97
This is cute yaar! I like how everyone is positive in this story and there is no scheming involved to keep premeer away from each other. it kind of reminds me of the movie Vivaah...the courtship phase between a couple before they tie the knot...keep it up!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

This is cute yaar! I like how everyone is positive in this story and there is no scheming involved to keep premeer away from each other. it kind of reminds me of the movie Vivaah...the courtship phase between a couple before they tie the knot...keep it up!




Thanks for commenting on it...i am glad that you liked it...stay tuned for further updates😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello ppl.. here i am with the next chapter...thank you for your response on the previous chapter...so enjoy reading.


Premeer SS


Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai

Part 8

Next day Morning-

Our sweet made for each other couple Premeer were sleeping peacefully...Heer was sleeping in a sitting position with her head resting on the headboard and Prem with his head on Heer's lap...the sun rays peeped inside the room and broke Heer's sleep...she looked at a slepping Prem and smiled.

"Good Morning Prem wished Heer and ruffled his hair.

Prem whined like a child...he opened his eyes and saw Heer smiling at him...he smiled back and wished her back "Good Morning Sweetheart.

"Preeem", Heer rooled her eyes.

"Kya...are bhai meri hone wali biwi ho...to ek pyara sa naam hi to diya...ab itna to haq banta hai na"?? Prem replied cheekily.

(What...you are my would be wife so I give you a name out of love...I can do this little thing...can't i?)

Heer smiled "Haa baba kar sakte ho...ab utho...gharwale aate hi honge...yaad hai na"?

(Yes yes...alright...now get up...thry'll come any moment...you remember...don't you?)

"Ha yaad hai...but at least thik se bye to bolne do", Prem replied in a naughty tone and instantly kissed her cheeks.

(Yes I remember but at least let me bid you bye in a proper way).

Heer was shocked...at first she couldn't understand what had just happened but as soon as she realized her cheeks became red like a tomato.

Heer : Prem tu..tum ye...

(Prem you...you this..)

Prem : Haa bolo..main...

(Yes tell...i...)

"Kuch nahi", Heer replied still blushingly and immediately ran out of the room without giving Prem a chance to tease her more.

Prem smiled like an idiot and made his way to the washroom.

After sometime Premeer were doing their breakfast with Heer avoiding Prem's naughty gaze and Prem constantly gazing her...Prem was about to say something suddenly they heard some noise.

"Hey PB...hum aa gaye", Preet shouted.

(Hey PB...we are back)

Both Prem and Heer saw towards the door and found their family members standing there...they immediately ran to them and hug them tightly...after welcoming them in the home they chat for sometime about how they spent their vacation while Kulraj, Preet and Ash constantly teased Prem and Heer...after that everyone retired to their room to get freshen up.

It was in the evening when Preet suddenly sneaked to someone's room and hugged her from back.

"Hey beautiful...kya kar rahi ho", Preet asked.

Other Person : Tumhare bare mein to nahi soch rahi hu for sure.

Preet : Achcha...to phir ye mera diya hua necklace leke kya kar rahi ho?

(Really? then what are you doing with the gift given by me?)

Other Person(stammered) : Wo main...haa..main to isko phekne ja rahi thi...haa...phekne ja rhi thi.

(Actually i..i was just going to throw it out...yes yes...throw it out).

Preet : Ash...sry na yr...dekho I know ke tum mujhse naraz ho kyunki maine tumse wada kiya tha k hum aj sham ko lake side par chalenge...but tum janti ho na ek baar main so jata hun to mujhe kuch hosh nahi rehta...plzz ab aur gussa mat raho.

(Yes guyz..it's Ash...well in these 2 days Preet and Ash also became really close...they also confessed their liking towards each other but no one knows this).

Ash : Acha acha...ab zyada maska maarne ki zaroorat nahi hai.

"To...kya tumne mujhe maaf kiya"?

(So...am I forgiven?)

Ash(smiled) : Yes...achcha ab tum jao...Heer didi aati hi hongi...kal ke function ke liye kapde select karne hai...agar unhone humein dekh lia to musibat ho jayegi.

(ok...now you go...Heer didi will come any moment...we have to decide the clothes for tomorrow's function...if she sees us then we'll be in trouble).

Preet : don't worry...main abhi dekh ke aa raha hun bhabhi abhi kitchen mein hai mom aur Teji chachi k saath...abhi nahi aayengi.

(I have just seen bhabhi in the kitchen with mom and teji chichi...she'll not come so soon)

But unknown to them someone was seeing them from the slightly opened door.

Person(to himself) : Preet aur Ash...ahaan...ye to latest news hai..Preet ke bachche ab tu haath mein aaya hain.

"Ahhhmmm", someone cleared his throat from outside of the room...Preet immediately left Ash and both looked at the door and got shocked to see the person.

Preet(stammered) : Aap...aap yahan...yaha kya...kya ar rahe ho??

(You..here...what...what are you..do...doing here?)

Person : Bhai main to tere kamre mein jaa rha tha lekin tujhe kamre se bahar nikalte dekha to tere peeche peeche aa gaya...ab mujhe kya pata tha k tu yah aane wala hai.

(I was going to your room but then I saw you coming out of the room so I followed you...now how would I know that you were coming here)

Preet : Nahi wo PB...

(Yes it's our Prem)

Prem continued "Waise achcha hua main yaha aa gaya...tum dono k bare mein mujhe pata to chala".

(It's good that I have come here...at least I get to know about you two)

Preet became tensed and started pleading " PB..PB please...kisi ko kuch mat kehna...nahi kahoge na???

Prem : Sirf ek shart par...aj ke baad tu mujhe Heer ko leke bilkul tease nahi karega.

(Only in one condition...from now onwards you won't tease me regarding Heer).

Preet : Haa haa bilkul...manzur hai.

(Yes yes...I agree).



Prem : Hmmm...ab chal mere saath...kaam hai tujhse.

(Now come with me...I have some work with you.)

Preet half heartedly bid bye to Ash and left with Prem murmuring something under his breath.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Itna said Aur bada update deti... Nt this part too was awesome

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