Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai-Epilogue Updated on 16/11/2018 (page 15)

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Trisha Morajkar

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Itni jaldi khatam kyun kiya

Just love it

Prem-Heer beautiful scene in kulraj room

Engagement ceremony of Prem-Heer was so gud

Waiting for next function

Excited for next part

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Sunzz.Harshiti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ananyaguptha
Nice update enjoyed reading
Want more prem and heer scenens
Will be waiting for next part
Continue soon

Thank you ananya for liking it😊😊 you will get more premeer scenes in the upcoming updates...stay tuned.

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Sunzz.Harshiti

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Trisha510
Itni jaldi khatam kyun kiya
Just love it
Prem-Heer beautiful scene in kulraj room
Engagement ceremony of Prem-Heer was so gud
Waiting for next function
Excited for next part

Thank you trisha for liking it😊😊 don't worry you will get more premeer scenes in the upcoming updates...stay tuned.

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Fatima

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Hi Sunayna,

Sorry I haven't been able to read your SS until now...was super busy 😳

Okay...so I've read the 1st 2 parts and have to say I really enjoyed them.

The 1st update was a lovely walk down memory lane...you've kept the essence of the show intact and added your own little touches...very nice.

I was a little surprised that Ash seemed to be on good terms with the Maan sisters though 😆

I enjoyed the 2nd part even more than the 1st one. Loved how you gave a new "light" to Premeer's 1st meeting. 😆 Both of them were ready to call the police on each other. 😆

Ooo...and the cliffhanger ending...bravo...👏

Will comment more once I've read the rest of the updates.😃

Thanks for the PMs and keep up the good work. 🤗

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Fatima

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Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Just finished reading Part 3...which I guess was supposed to be Part 2 maybe.

Anyway...it was cute how Premeer were set up so Prem would pick Heer up.

It's obvious that they have already begun to like each other a lot.

Geet makes her entry in this part too.

Over all a nice update.

Oh and before I forget...let me add a special thanks for the English translations of the Hindi dialogues you are including.🤗

Will comment more when I'm all caught up. 😛

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Sunzz.Harshiti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Hi Sunayna,
Sorry I haven't been able to read your SS until now...was super busy 😳

Okay...so I've read the 1st 2 parts and have to say I really enjoyed them.

The 1st update was a lovely walk down memory lane...you've kept the essence of the show intact and added your own little touches...very nice.

I was a little surprised that Ash seemed to be on good terms with the Maan sisters though 😆

I enjoyed the 2nd part even more than the 1st one. Loved how you gave a new "light" to Premeer's 1st meeting. 😆 Both of them were ready to call the police on each other. 😆

Ooo...and the cliffhanger ending...bravo...👏

Will comment more once I've read the rest of the updates.😃

Thanks for the PMs and keep up the good work. 🤗

So glad to see you fatima❤️🤗 thank you dear for reading the story and appreciating it...means a lot😊😊 Yes i wanted a story with no negativity so i created all good characters including Ash 😃😃and don't be sorry you can read whenever time permits you.😳😳

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Sunzz.Harshiti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Just finished reading Part 3...which I guess was supposed to be Part 2 maybe.
Anyway...it was cute how Premeer were set up so Prem would pick Heer up.

It's obvious that they have already begun to like each other a lot.

Geet makes her entry in this part too.

Over all a nice update.

Oh and before I forget...let me add a special thanks for the English translations of the Hindi dialogues you are including.🤗

Will comment more when I'm all caught up. 😛

Again a big thanks dear for reading it😳😳 well i guess you missed the 2nd part...it's on page 5. I will be eagerly waiting for your comments on the next parts😊😊

You are welcome...many had asked to add translations so i had to😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Hello guys...I am back...thank you for your response on the previous part...now let's start the next part...enjoy reading.

Premeer SS

Dil Ko...tera Intezar Hai

Part 6

The sun rays peeped in our Heer's room disturbing her sleep...she slowly opened her eyes and smiled lazily at the sun...she got up and sat on the bed and her eyes caught the sight of ring that was shining bright on her ring finger...she smiled and caressed the ring remembering the previous night...she sighed and went to the washroom to get ready for the day.

After freshening up she came down but found none. First she thought may be she woke up little early...but when looked at the watch her eyes popped out of sockets...it's almost 9 in the morning and no one is here at the breakfast.

She searched the whole mansion but found none...when she was in the garden she heard some noises from the kitchen...she went to the kitchen and her eyes widen..."what had happened with this kitchen??" was the first thought that came in her mind immediately after seeing the condition of the kitchen.

"Ohh god...what had happened here?" She asked herself.

"Hey hi...good morning", a voice greeted her as she turned around.

"Good morning" she greeted back..."Prem...umm... ye kitchen...mera matlab hai k kuch hua Kya?" She asked unsure of what should be asked.

(Prem...umm...this kitchen...I mean...did something happen?)

Prem scratched the back of his head and replied,

"Wo Kya Hai na koi Ghar pe nhi hai aur mujhe zoro ki bhuk lagi thi...to...main khud hi breakfast banane ki koshish kar raha tha...lekin...umm...maine kabhi Khana banaya nhi aur ye sab..."

(Actually no one is at home and I was hungry so I...umm...I just tried to make breakfast...but you know...i...I never cooked...so...)

"Prem.. .tum mujhe keh dete na...main bana deti" Heer replied before cleaning up the kitchen.

(Prem...u could have told me...I would make it).

Prem followed her everywhere in the kitchen helping her to clear the mess and replied, "Wo mujhe pata nhi tha k tum ghar par ho".

(Actually I didn't know that you r at home)

"Lekin sab log itne subha subha gaye Kahan?" Heer asked.

(But where has everyone gone in the early morning?)

"Pata nhi...maine kai baar phone lagane ki koshish ki...par koi phone hi nahi utha raha hai...pata nahi kaha gaye honge?" Prem said disappointedly.

(I don't know...I have tried to call them so many times...but no one had received the call...I don't understand where have they gone?)

"Achcha chhodo...ye batao Kya khaoge" Heer asked after cleaning up the mess.

(Leave it...tell what would you like to eat?)

"Are nahi nahi...tumhe takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi...main bahar se kuch mangwa lunga" Prem said immediately.

(No no...you don't have to bother yourself...I will order something).

"Kyun...main achcha Khana nahi banati Kya" Heer thought to tease him though she understood what he meant.

(Why...don't I make good food?)

"Are nahi...tum to bohut bohut achcha Khana banati ho" Prem immediately opposed as if assuring her that she can cook.

(No..no...you are a very very good cook)

"Achcha to phir tum kyun nahi chahte k main khana banau?" Heer asked suppressing her laughter.

(Really???...then why don't you want me to cook?)

"Main bas tumhe pareshan nahi karnachahta tha" Prem replied.

(I just didn't want bother you).

"Hahaha...sry sry...", replied Heer catching her breath from laughing..."main janti hun...main to bas mazak Kar rahi thi".

(I knew it...I was just kidding).

"Koi baat nhi...tum jao...baitho...main jaldi se kuch banake lati hu...are Bhai mujhe bhi to bhuk lagi hai", she further added.

(Don't worry...you go and sit...I quickly make something...after all even I am hungry).

Prem nodded and went out of the kitchen...after 30 mins Heer came to the dining table and served the breakfast which contained Prem's favourite aloo k parathe and dahi.

"Woww...it's really awsm...yummy" Prem expressed his happiness excitedly munching the parathas.

"Thank you", Heer replied.

Both finished their breakfast talking about random matters trying to know each other better.

After breakfast Heer was about to clean the dining table and put the dishes in the sink to wash but Prem interrupted.

"Main madad kar deta hu", Prem suggested.

(Let me help you)

"Nahi nahi...main kar lungi...", Heer tried to argue but was cut off by Prem.

"Tumne mere liye khana banaya to itna to main tumhare liye Kar hi sakta hu...waise bhi shadi k baad bhi main tumhari help karunga", Prem tried to reason with her.

(You had made breakfast for me...so I can do this at least...infact I will help you in these things after our marriage).

Heer was surprised at his comment...he so easily said about their marriage...no tension...no hesitation...and here she was dying in thinking what if he doesn't want to marry her...what if he doesn't like her...but did he hear right or it was her imagination...well now a days she imagines things a lot.

"Kya kaha tumne?" She asked him unsure of his statement.

(What did you say?)

"Maine to..." Prem immediately stopped as he realized what had he said..."Oh God! What did I say...what will she thought...will she think something bad about me?...na...I didn't do any crime...just talked about our marriage...I think she wants the same" he tried to pacify himself.

"Nhi kuch nhi...bas aise hi" Prem deliberately avoided the conversation and headed to the kitchen followed by Heer.

After sometime Prem suggested that they should call their parents and know there whereabouts...and Heer agreed.

"Kya hua...phone laga?", Heer asked impatiently as it was the 5th time Prem had been trying to call his parents...but none of them were available...even Harman put his phone on switched off mode.

(What happened...have they picked up?)

"No..." Prem ran his hands through his hair..."I think tum ek baar Meher ko call karke dekho".

(No...I think you should call Meher once)

"Haan kar rahi hun," replied Heer while diling Meher's no.

(Yeah...I'm calling).

Heer tried to call Meher but it was also switched off...

"Kya hua?" Prem asked being impatient.

(What happened?)

Heer nodded her head in negative nd sighed...then only Prem's phone buzzed and to his relief it's Kulraj's call.

"Hello didi...?" Prem answered the call.

"Prem mamu...hum hain" came Tanu and Ketan's voice from the other hand.

(Prem uncle...it's us)

"Tum dono...tumhari ma Kahan hain...aur tumne phone kyu uthaya?" enquired Prem.

(You...where is your mom...and why have you answered the phone?)

"Off ho...mamu...humne hi to aapka missed call dekh ke aapko phone Kiya...hum jante Hain aap mamma ko kyun call Kar rahe the" replied Tanu and Ketan giggling.

(Prem uncle...we only called you after seeing your missed call...we know why were you calling mamma)

"Achcha...to bolo kyu?" Prem asked thinking they might tell him the reason of their sudden disappearance.

(Really??then tell why?)

"Aap ye jaanna chahte hain na k hum apko akele chhodke ghumne kyun aaye hain?) Ketan asked in his childish voice.

(You want to know why did we come here leaving you alone?)

"Haa bilkul...to kyun Gaye ho mujhe chhodke?" asked Prem impatiently.

(Yes absolutely...why did you go alone?)

"Kyunki nanu nani mamma papa Preet mamu Harman mamu aur Heer Mami ki family chahti thi ke aap air Heer Mami akele rahe aur..."

(Because grandfather, grandmother, mom, dad, Preet uncle, Harman uncle and Heer aunty"s family wanted you two to stay alone and...)

Ketan couldn't complete as Kulraj took the phone from his hands and answered the rest..."Aur tum dono akele thoda waqt bitao ek dusre k saath taki ek dusre ko aur achche se samajh pao." ..."Aur bachchu mujhe pata hai tere man mein to laddu foot rahe honge...chal ab phone rakh...bye." Kilraj teased her and cut the phone.

(And spend sometime with each other so that you both will get to know each other better...and BTW I know that you r literally jumping from inside...so now bye.)

Both Premeer looked at each other awkwardly...yes Heer also heard the conversation as the phone was on speaker...but they were somewhat happy inside...inspite of the awkwardness they actually had been wanting to spend sometime quality time with each other...so they mentally thanked their family for this golden opportunity.

Heer blushed thinking of spending the whole day with Prem...the love of her life...but she didn't confessed yet...so would she confess today???

Prem was also thinking the same...when suddenly an idea popped up in his head.

"Heer?" He asked softly.

"Hmm" Heer hummed.

"Agar humein pura din saath mein hi bitana hai to kyun na hum iski shuruwat ek film se Kare...Kya tum mere saath film dekhne chalogi?" Prem asked nervously.

(Umm... actually since we have to spend the whole day so why don't we start it with a film...would you like to watch a film with me?)

"Haa bilkul.. kyun nahi" Heer replied happily...this will be the first time that they will be together going out for a film...neither as strangers...nor as friends...but as each other's fince.

(Off course...why not)

Bohot badhiya...to hum chalke ready ho jate Hai aur 15 mins baad yehi milte Hai...ok??"

(Great!!...then we'll go and get ready and meet here after 15 mins..ok??)

Heer nodded and both Premeer retired to their room to get ready...after 15 mins both came down...Heer was dressed in a simple blue salwar suit with two bangles in her hand and no make up...she had left her hair open ...Prem was simply looking at her without blinking...he had never seen such an honest and pure girl...simple yet beautiful...Heer was feeling shy...she tucked a strand of hair behind her ear and in this process her bangles made some tingling sound.

Prem was brought back to senses by this sound and felt embarrassed for simply drooling over her...he tried to say something but fumbled...when Prem was busy fumbling it was her turn to be surprised...yes surprised...because till now she had only seen him either in formals or in kurta pajama in home...it was the first time that he had wore casuals...Prem was dressed in a white T-shirt and blue fedded jeans...she was trying her best not to check him out...but what to do of this stupid heart.

"Chalein?" asked Prem softly.

(Shall we go?)

She came out of her check out sessions and nodded shyly before they went to their car.

Prem like a true gentleman opened the door of the passenger seat for Heer and she muttered a small thank you before getting into the car...Prem then got into the driver's seat and drove away.

First they saw a movie together then had lunch with casual talks...after that they went to the beach to see the sunset.

Heer was sitting on a rock while Prem was busy buying ice cream for her...he came back and handed her the ice cream...she smiled at him and took it.

"So??" Prem asked suddenly making her confused.

"So??" She asked confused.

"Did you enjoy the day?" he asked hopefully.

She thought to tease him..."What if I say no...I didn't enjoy at all...then?"

He raised his eyebrows and replied..."Well in that case I will take you to another outing tomorrow...not only that I will take out untill you say that you enjoy it" he winked.

Heer's mouth opened wide at him...but the next second both burst out into laughter...catching her breath she replied..." No Prem...I had really enjoyed myself...thanks for the day".

"The pleasure is all mine" he bowed down.

They were sitting there eating their ice cream and enjoying the cool breeze watching the sun set...they both looked up feeling the sky getting dark nd noticed the cloudy sky.The very next second, the felt the tickling drizzle fall down like precious petals from the sky.

Prem and Heer sat there enjoying the feeling they got from the tiny, cool drops of water.After a while the rain started to pour harder.

Prem was about to run to his car when he felt a tuck in his hand...he turned and found Her held his hand...he asked "what" through his eyes.

"Rain is meant to be enjoyed Prem" Heer replied and pulled Prem in the rain...seeing him hesitating she took some water in her hands and threw it on his face.

"Heer!" Prem gasped and looked at her who was, by then started running and saying sorry.

"Sorry Prem...but you weren't coming so" she laughed and again ran.

"You r gone sweetheart" Prem screamed and ran behind her.

Both were running here and there...Heer, to get out of his reach and Prem, to catch her... suddenly Heer tripped on a stone lying on the sea shore...but even before her body touched the ground she was caught by someone.

She slowly opened her eyes which were closed due to the fear of falling and saw the most handsome man on Earth...her Prem...yes HER...only she had the right to look into those captivating eyes, and that's what she was doing...looking deep inside his eyes she tried to find out his feeling for her.

Prem was chasing her when he saw her tripping over a stone and immediately rushed to her to prevent her from falling...she closed her eyes due to fear...but his eyes...well they were busy admiring her...she looked so innocent...so fragile...the tiny drops of water resting on her lips were creating havoc in his heart...he wanted to replace those pearls with his lips...but immediately cursed himself for even thinking this.

Her eyes opened...she could feel her piercing gaze on her...both were lost in each other's eyes while The Almighty was showering HIS blessings on them...they got drenched but care the less...their lips were getting closer unknown to them...they didn't want to think rationally just wanted to be directed by their hearts.

She could feel his hot breath on her lips...and he could see her eyes getting closed due to their close proximity...even the rain couldn't putt off the flame of desire that were burning their hearts.

Their lips were an inch apart when a large sound of thunder brought them back to their senses...both drew apart feeling embarrassed and awkward...they didn't know what to say and how to say...so they remained silent for sometime...but as the rain was getting to start heavier so Prem broke the silence and offered "I think we should go home".

Unable to meet his gaze she nodded yes and they headed to their house.

As car reached near their house Heer muttered a good night and ran inside the house not even waiting for him to wish her good night.

Done with this part guyz...I hope you like it...plzz do read and tell...next part will be posted soon...till then take care and bye.

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ananyaguptha

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

Hello
guys...I am back...thank you for your response on the previous part...now let's
start the next part...enjoy reading.

Premeer SS


Dil Ko...tera Intezar Hai



Part
6





They
sun rays peeped in our Heer's room disturbing her sleep...she slowly opened her
eyes and smiled lazily at the sun...she got up and sat on the bed and her eyes
caught the sight of ring that was shining bright on her ring finger...she
smiled and caressed the ring remembering the previous night...she sighed and
went to the washroom to get ready for the day.





After
freshening up she came down but found none. First she thought may be she woke
up little early...but when looked at the watch her eyes popped out of
sockets...it's almost 9 in the morning and no one is here at the breakfast.





She
searched the whole mansion but found none...when she was in the garden she
heard some noises from the kitchen...she went to the kitchen and her eyes
widen..."what had happened with this kitchen??" was the first thought
that came in her mind immediately after seeing the condition of the kitchen.





"Ohh
god...what had happened here?" She asked herself.





"Hey
hi...good morning", a voice greeted her as she turned around.





"Good
morning" she greeted back..."Prem...umm... ye kitchen...mera matlab
hai k kuch hua Kya?" She asked unsure of what should be asked.





(Prem...umm...this
kitchen...I mean...did something happen?)





Prem
scratched the back of his head and replied, 

"Wo
Kya Hai na koi Ghar pe nhi hai aur mujhe zoro ki bhuk lagi thi...to...main khud
hi breakfast banane ki koshish kar raha tha...lekin...umm...maine kabhi Khana
banaya nhi aur ye sab..."





(Actually
no one is at home and I was hungry so I...umm...I just tried to make
breakfast...but you know...i...I never cooked...so...)





"Prem..
.tum mujhe keh dete na...main bana deti" Heer replied before cleaning up
the kitchen.





(Prem...u
could have told me...I would make it).





Prem
followed her everywhere in the kitchen helping her to clear the mess and
replied, "Wo mujhe pata nhi tha k tum ghar par ho".





(Actually
I didn't know that you r at home)





"Lekin
sab log itne subha subha gaye Kahan?" Heer asked.





(But
where has everyone gone in the early morning?)





"Pata
nhi...maine kai baar phone lagane ki koshish ki...par koi phone hi nahi utha
raha hai...pata nahi kaha gaye honge?" Prem said disappointedly.





(I
don't know...I have tried to call them so many times...but no one had received
the call...I don't understand where have they gone?)





"Achcha
chhodo...ye batao Kya khaoge" Heer asked after cleaning up the mess.





(Leave
it...tell what would you like to eat?)





"Are
nahi nahi...tumhe takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi...main bahar se kuch
mangwa lunga" Prem said immediately.





(No
no...you don't have to bother yourself...I will order something).





"Kyun...main
achcha Khana nahi banati Kya" Heer thought to tease him though she
understood what he meant.





(Why...don't
I make good food?)





"Are
nahi...tum to bohut bohut achcha Khana banati ho" Prem immediately
opposed as if assuring her that she can cook.





(No..no...you
are a very very good cook)





"Achcha
to phir tum kyun nahi chahte k main khana banau?" Heer asked suppressing
her laughter.





(Really???...then
why don't you want me to cook?)





"Main
bas tumhe pareshan nahi karnachahta tha" Prem replied.





(I
just didn't want bother you).





"Hahaha...sry
sry...", replied Heer catching her breath from laughing..."main
janti hun...main to bas mazak Kar rahi thi".





(I
knew it...I was just kidding).





"Koi
baat nhi...tum jao...baitho...main jaldi se kuch banake lati hu...are Bhai
mujhe bhi to bhuk lagi hai", she further added.





(Don't
worry...you go and sit...I quickly make something...after all even I am
hungry).





Prem
nodded and went out of the kitchen...after 30 mins Heer came to the dining
table and served the breakfast which contained Prem's favourite aloo k parathe
and dahi.





"Woww...it's
really awsm...yummy" Prem expressed his happiness excitedly munching the
parathas.





"Thank
you", Heer replied.





Both
finished their breakfast talking about random matters trying to know each other
better.





After
breakfast Heer was about to clean the dining table and put the dishes in the
sink to wash but Prem interrupted.





"Main
madad kar deta hu", Prem suggested.





(Let
me help you)





"Nahi
nahi...main kar lungi...", Heer tried to argue but was cut off by Prem.





"Tumne
mere liye khana banaya to itna to main tumhare liye Kar hi sakta hu...waise bhi
shadi k baad bhi main tumhari help karunga", Prem tried to reason with
her.





(You
had made breakfast for me...so I can do this at least...infact I will help you
in these things after our marriage).





Heer
was surprised at his comment...he so easily said about their marriage...no
tension...no hesitation...and here she was dying in thinking what if he
doesn't want to marry her...what if he doesn't like her...but did he hear
right or it was her imagination...well now a days she imagines things a lot.





"Kya
kaha tumne?" She asked him unsure of his statement.





(What
did you say?)





"Maine
to..." Prem immediately stopped as he realized what had he
said..."Oh God! What did I say...what will she thought...will she think
something bad about me?...na...I didn't do any crime...just talked about our
marriage...I think she wants the same" he tried to pacify himself.





"Nhi
kuch nhi...bas aise hi" Prem deliberately avoided the conversation and
headed to the kitchen followed by Heer.





After
sometime Prem suggested that they should call their parents and know there
whereabouts...and Heer agreed.





"Kya
hua...phone laga?", Heer asked impatiently as it was the 5th time Prem had
been trying to call his parents...but none of them were available...even
Harman put his phone on switched off mode.





(What
happened...have they picked up?)





"No..."
Prem ran his hands through his hair..."I think tum ek baar Meher ko call
karke dekho".





(No...I
think you should call Meher once)





"Haan
kar rahi hun," replied Heer while diling Meher's no.





(Yeah...I'm
calling).





Heer
tried to call Meher but it was also switched off...





"Kya
hua?" Prem asked being impatient.





(What
happened?)





Heer
nodded her head in negative nd sighed...then only Prem's phone buzzed and to
his relief it's Kulraj's call.





"Hello
didi...?" Prem answered the call.





"Prem
mamu...hum hain" came Tanu and Ketan's voice from the other hand.





(Prem
uncle...it's us)





"Tum
dono...tumhari ma Kahan hain...aur tumne phone kyu uthaya?" enquired Prem.





(You...where
is your mom...and why have you answered the phone?)





"Off
ho...mamu...humne hi to aapka missed call dekh ke aapko phone Kiya...hum jante
Hain aap mamma ko kyun call Kar rahe the" replied Tanu and Ketan giggling.





(Prem
uncle...we only called you after seeing your missed call...we know why were you
calling mamma)





"Achcha...to
bolo kyu?" Prem asked thinking they might tell him the reason of their
sudden disappearance.





(Really??then
tell why?)





"Aap
ye jaanna chahte hain na k hum apko akele chhodke ghumne kyun aaye hain?) Ketan
asked in his childish voice.





(You
want to know why did we come here leaving you alone?)





"Haa
bilkul...to kyun Gaye ho mujhe chhodke?" asked Prem impatiently.





(Yes
absolutely...why did you go alone?)





"Kyunki
nanu nani mamma papa Preet mamu Harman mamu aur Heer Mami ki family chahti thi
ke aap air Heer Mami akele rahe aur..."





(Because
grandfather, grandmother, mom, dad, Preet uncle, Harman uncle and Heer
aunty"s family wanted you two to stay alone and...)





Ketan
couldn't complete as Kulraj took the phone from his hands and answered the
rest..."Aur tum dono akele thoda waqt bitao ek dusre k saath taki ek dusre
ko aur achche se samajh pao." ..."Aur bachchu mujhe pata hai tere
man mein to laddu foot rahe honge...chal ab phone rakh...bye." Kilraj
teased her and cut the phone.





(And
spend sometime with each other so that you both will get to know each other
better...and BTW I know that you r literally jumping from inside...so now
bye.)





Both
Premeer looked at each other awkwardly...yes Heer also heard the conversation
as the phone was on speaker...but they were somewhat happy inside...inspite of
the awkwardness they actually had been wanting to spend sometime quality time
with each other...so they mentally thanked their family for this golden
opportunity.





Heer
blushed thinking of spending the whole day with Prem...the love of her
life...but she didn't confessed yet...so would she confess today???





Prem
was also thinking the same...when suddenly an idea popped up in his head.





"Heer?"
He asked softly.





"Hmm"
Heer hummed.





"Agar
humein pura din saath mein hi bitana hai to kyun na hum iski shuruwat ek film
se Kare...Kya tum mere saath film dekhne chalogi?" Prem asked nervously.





(Umm...
actually since we have to spend the whole day so why don't we start it with a
film...would you like to watch a film with me?)





"Haa
bilkul.. kyun nahi" Heer replied happily...this will be the first time
that they will be together going out for a film...neither as strangers...nor
as friends...but as each other's fince.





(Off
course...why not)





Bohot
badhiya...to hum chalke ready ho jate Hai aur 15 mins baad yehi milte
Hai...ok??"





(Great!!...then
we'll go and get ready and meet here after 15 mins..ok??)





Heer
nodded and both Premeer retired to their room to get ready...after 15 mins
both came down...Heer was dressed in a simple blue salwar suit with two
bangles in her hand and no make up...she had left her hair open ...Prem was
simply looking at her without blinking...he had never seen such an honest and
pure girl...simple yet beautiful...Heer was feeling shy...she tucked a strand
of hair behind her ear and in this process her bangles made some tingling
sound.





Prem
was brought back to senses by this sound and felt embarrassed for simply
drooling over her...he tried to say something but fumbled...when Prem was busy
fumbling it was her turn to be surprised...yes surprised...because till now she
had only seen him either in formals or in kurta pajama in home...it was the
first time that he had wore casuals...Prem was dressed in a white T-shirt and
blue fedded jeans...she was trying her best not to check him out...but what to
do of this stupid heart.





"Chalein?"
asked Prem softly.





(Shall
we go?)





She
came out of her check out sessions and nodded shyly before they went to their
car.





Prem
like a true gentleman opened the door of the passenger seat for Heer and she
muttered a small thank you before getting into the car...Prem then got into
the driver's seat and drove away.





First
they saw a movie together then had lunch with casual talks...after that they
went to the beach to see the sunset.





Heer
was sitting on a rock while Prem was busy buying ice cream for her...he came
back and handed her the ice cream...she smiled at him and took it.





"So??"
Prem asked suddenly making her confused.





"So??"
She asked confused.





"Did
you enjoy the day?" he asked hopefully.





She
thought to tease him..."What if I say no...I didn't enjoy at
all...then?"





He
raised his eyebrows and replied..."Well in that case I will take you to
another outing tomorrow...not only that I will take out untill you say that you
enjoy it" he winked.





Heer's
mouth opened wide at him...but the next second both burst out into
laughter...catching her breath she replied..." No Prem...I had really
enjoyed myself...thanks for the day".





"The
pleasure is all mine" he bowed down.





They
were sitting there eating their ice cream and enjoying the cool breeze watching
the sun set...they both looked up feeling the sky getting dark nd noticed the
cloudy sky.The very next second, the felt the tickling drizzle fall down like
precious petals from the sky.





Prem
and Heer sat there enjoying the feeling they got from the tiny, cool drops of
water.After a while the rain started to pour harder.





Prem
was about to run to his car when he felt a tuck in his hand...he turned and
found Her held his hand...he asked "what" through his eyes.





"Rain
is meant to be enjoyed Prem" Heer replied and pulled Prem in the
rain...seeing him hesitating she took some water in her hands and threw it on
his face.





"Heer!"
Prem gasped and looked at her who was, by then started running and saying
sorry.





"Sorry
Prem...but you weren't coming so" she laughed and again ran.





"You
r gone sweetheart" Prem screamed and ran behind her.





Both
were running here and there...Heer, to get out of his reach and Prem, to catch
her... suddenly Heer tripped on a stone lying on the sea shore...but even
before her body touched the ground she was caught by someone.





She
slowly opened her eyes which were closed due to the fear of falling and saw the
most handsome man on Earth...her Prem...yes HER...only she had the right to
look into those captivating eyes, and that's what she was doing...looking deep
inside his eyes she tried to find out his feeling for her.





Prem
was chasing her when he saw her tripping over a stone and immediately rushed to
her to prevent her from falling...she closed her eyes due to fear...but his
eyes...well they were busy admiring her...she looked so innocent...so
fragile...the tiny drops of water resting on her lips were creating havoc in
his heart...he wanted to replace those pearls with his lips...but immediately
cursed himself for even thinking this.





Her
eyes opened...she could feel her piercing gaze on her...both were lost in each
other's eyes while The Almighty was showering HIS blessings on them...they got
drenched but care the less...their lips were getting closer unknown to
them...they didn't want to think rationally just wanted to be directed by their
hearts.





She
could feel his hot breath on her lips...and he could see her eyes getting
closed due to their close proximity...even the rain couldn't putt off the
flame of desire that were burning their hearts.





Their
lips were an inch apart when a large sound of thunder brought them back to
their senses...both drew apart feeling embarrassed and awkward...they didn't
know what to say and how to say...so they remained silent for sometime...but
as the rain was getting to start heavier so Prem broke the silence and offered
"I think we should go home".





Unable
to meet his gaze she nodded yes and they headed to their house.





As
car reached near their house Heer muttered a good night and ran inside the
house not even waiting for him to wish her good night.





Done
with this part guyz...I hope you like it...plzz do read and tell...next part
will be posted soon...till then take care and bye.

Nice update enjoyed reading continue soon
Premeer scene was nice
Waiting for the wedding

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Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update enjoyed reading continue soon
Premeer scene was nice
Waiting for the wedding

Thanks you ananya for liking and commenting on it...means a lot😊 Don't worry you will get more premeer scenes in the upcoming parts but you'll have to wait a few parts more for premeer wedding...stay tuned for further updates.

Love, Sunayana

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