Originally posted by: Trisha510
Itna said Aur bada update deti... Nt this part too was awesome
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Originally posted by: Trisha510
Itna said Aur bada update deti... Nt this part too was awesome
Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti
Thank you trisha for commenting...i am glad that you liked it...next part will be longer i promise.
Hello deshians, I am back with the next part...But I am very disappointed because I am not receiving much comments from you guyz. Are you not liking it? Then plzz tell me. Anyway, thank you to those who have commented. It really means a lot. And don't worry I won't bore you guyz with my ramblings because only 2 parts are left. Till then plzz bear with me. Now let's start this part...enjoy reading.
Premeer SS
Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai
Part 8(2)
At night everyone was sitting on the dining table having dinner but our Premeer were busy in their small world of eye sessions...everybody was too busy in their discussion of Premeer haldi function which will be held tomorrow to notice them except Preet and Kul di.
Preet(thought of teasing his PB) : Waise bauji kal haldi function yahan par hogi kya mera matlab hai ek hi ghar mein?
(Btw dad will the haldi function occur here I mean in the same house?)
Lalit : Kya kehna chahta hai tu?
(What do you want to say?)
Preet(winked to Kul di) : Matlab dulha dulhan ek hi ghar mein hai na...isliye.
(Actually the bride and groom are in the same place...that's why.)
Gayatri : Pata hai humein beta...ab rahenge to dono yehi par aur sare functions bhi yahi par honge but haan...kal haldi function k baad se ye dono ek dusre ko nahi dekh sakte.
(We know beta...they will stay here only and all function will happen here but yes...after the haldi ceremony these two will not be able to see or meet each other).
Hearing this Prem's face fell...he had so many plans with Heer but now nothing seemed possible...he cast a pleading look to Heer and she just giggled.
After dinner everyone retired to their room...Prem tried to talk to Heer but Harman dragged him with himself as per bauji's order.
Next day everyone was busy for the haldi ceremony to be started...Prem and Heer were sitting next to each other separated by a white cloth to prevent them from seeing each other...the haldi ceremony had started with Prem.
First Kul di applied haldi...she applied a pinch of haldi on his nose and pulled it...then she applied on his cheeks and whispers in his ear, "Heer ko dekhne k liye utavla hai na?
(You are desperate to see Heer. Aren't you?)
Prem gave a puppy look and she laughed. Then his mom came...she applied haldi with her blessings and best wishes. After that bauji, Preet, Veera, Harman all applied one by one...after that Gayatri sent him to take shower and now Heer's haldi has started.
First Teji came and gave her blessings to her...then balraaj and Meher came...after that Balwant daljeet and Ash applied haldi.
Now it's the turn for the groom's family...first Gayatri then Veera and last but not the least Kul di came to give their blessings in the form of haldi...while Kul di was applying haldi she winked Meher nd Ash and said,
Kul di : Pata hai Ash, Meher...koi apni dulhan ko dekhne k liye bekarar tha.
(You know what Ash, Meher... someone was very desperate to see his bride)
Ash laughed and thought to tease her sister.
Ash : To kya main jiju ko le aaun???
(Shall I bring jiju then?)
She was about to go but Preet blocked her way. "Nahi tum nahi jaa sakti...bauji jaane nahi denge, Preet tried to stop her.
(No you can't go...bauji will not allow).
"Off ho Preet tum bhi na...hum unko nahi batayenge, Ash replied.
(Off ho Preet...we are not going to tell him).
But Preet was reluctant to let go of Ash because Lalit had given him order to do so and for that he(Preet) will get anything he wanted from him.
Ash hit him playfully on his shoulder and started running...Preet chased him... everyone laughed at this...but when Kul di started searching for Meher, she was also missing...not only she, Harman was also missing.She then thought to go with Heer to her room for giving her shower but Heer stopped her.
Heer : Koi baat nhi di aap yahi par rahiye main chali jaungi.
(It's ok di you stay here. I can go by myself).
Everyone agreed as they had other arrangements to do...in the evening there was the Mehendi and Sangeet ceremony so they also needed rest.
Heer was going towards her room but someone pulled her. Due to sudden pull she landed on his chest...her hands were resting on his chest and his hands were holding her waist tightly.
Heer : Prem Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??
(Prem what r u doing here???)
Prem : Tumhara intezar kar raha tha.
(Waiting for u)
Heer : Kyun?? (Why??)
Prem : Are bhai meri haldi hai...to mujhe bhi to lagana padega.
(Arey its my haldi...I should also apply haldi na)
Heer : But avi to lagaya.
(You have already applied).
Prem : Aise nhi...
(Not like that...)
Heer : To? (Then?)
Prem : Aise... (Like this...)
Prem leaned towards her...bended a little and rubbed his cheeks against hers followed by his nose against hers.
Heer(blushes) : Prem kya kr rhe ho...chhodo mujhe...koi aa jayega to.
(Prem what are you doing...plzz leave me...what if anyone comes).
Suddenly they heard a knocking sound.
Heer : Dekha maine kaha tha na koi aa jayega...ab kya karenge???
(See I tod u someone might come...now what to do???)
Prem : Ruko main dekhta hun...(to the person outside)...kaun hai???
(Wait I'll see... who's this???)
Outside Person : Prem main hu...jaldi neeche aa...bauji bula rahe hain.
(Prem it's me...come downstairs...dad is calling).
Prem : Kul di aap...achcha bauji se kahiye k main nahake 10 min mein aata hun.
(Kul di u!!!...achcha tell dad that I am coming in 10 mins).
Kul di : Kya!!! Abhi tak tu nahaya nahi...kitni der pehle tu aaya hai...maa gussa karengi...jaldi se aaja.
(What!!! U haven't taken bath yet.you had came a long time ago...come fast).
Prem : Lekin main bina towel k nahaunga kaise?? Main kab se awaz de raha tha towel k liye par kisine meri baat hi nahi suni...aap plzz jaldi se jake towel leke aaiye na.
(Aree how will I take bath without towel...I was shouting for so long...but no one heard me...plzz bring me the towel fast).
Kul di : Ok ok.
And Kul di leaves from there...after Kul di's departure,
Prem : Lo bhaga diya...ab Tum ja sakti ho.
(See she has gone...now you can go).
Heer : Kaise...pehle mujhe chhodo to sahi tab main jaungi na.
(How?? first leave me...then only I can go).
Prem(making pout) :Tumhe chhodne ka man nahi kar raha hai...mat jao na.
( Nooo...i don't feel like leaving you...don't go na).
Heer(rolling her eyes) : Prem!!!!...ab chhodo bhi mujhe..plzz.
(Prem!!...now plz leave...plzzz)
Prem : Ok(with a cute puppy face)
Heer opened the door to leave but...suddenly Meher came.
Meher : Arey Heer didi... aap yahan kya kar rahi hain?? Aap ko to apne kamre mein hona chahiye tha.
(What r u doing here...u r supposed to be in your room).
Continue below...
Continuation...
Heer(stammers) : Wo wo...Meher actually mere room ka shower kaam nahi kar raha hai isliye main yahan aa gayi.
(Actually the shower of my room is not working...so so I come here).
Meher : Ok but aap abhi tak nahayi nahi...jaldi kijiye.
(But u haven't take bath yet...do fast).
Heer : Wo wo towel!...Ha yahan washroom mein towel nahi hai to bas wahi lene jaa rahi thi.
(There is no towel in this washroom so I was going to bring it).
Meher : Thik hai main laa rahi hun...aap washroom mein jaiye.
(Ok...I'll bring it...u go to the washroom).
Heer(smiles nervously) : Ok.
But Heer was still standing there and waited for Meher to go down.
Meher : Kya hua aap abhi tak yehi khadi hain...jaiye na..main kisiko bolti hu towel leke aane k liye warna aap phir se der karengi.
(What happened???...why are u still standing here...go na...I'll call someone to bring the towel...and I am standing here only...otherwise you'll be late again.
And she literally pushed Heer to the room...without any option Heer again came back in the room and locked it.
Prem : Kya hua?? mujhe chhodke jaane ka dil nahi Kiya jo wapas aa gayi...(with a naughty smile)
(What happened?? Didn't feel like leaving me??)
Heer : Chup raho..ye sab tumhari galti hai. Na hi tum mujhe rokte aur na hi main yaha atak jati.
(Shut up! Iit's your fault... neither u stopped me nor I got stuck here).
Prem : Arey lekin hua kya?
(But what happened)?
Heer : Meher aayi thi mujhe le jane...wo to andar bhi aa jati...lekin maine keh diya k mujhe towel chahiye to wo kisiko bol rahi hai towel leene k liye.
(Meher came to take me...she almost came in but i said I need a towel...she called someone to bring the towel).
Prem(bursts out into laughter) : Towel...seroiusly...oh god...(again laughed holding his stomach).
Heer : Kya hua...aise pagalon ki tarha has kyun rahe ho?
(What happened????...why are you laughing like an idiot)?
Prem : Kyunki maine bhi Kul di ko yehi bola tha ke mujhe ek towel chahiye.
(Because I told the same line to Kul di that I needed a towel).
Hearing this Heer too laughed but suddenly stopped.
Heer : Lekin ab main bahar kaise jaungi Meher bahar hi khadi hai.
(But now how would I go...Meher is standing outside).
At that time outside-
Meher was impatiently waiting for the towel which she had said someone to bring fast...just at that time Kul di comes with Prem's towel.
Meher : Arey Kul di...aap kyun aayi towel leke...kisi aur Ko bhej deti.
(Kul di why do you bring the towel...you could have said someone else right?)
Kul di : Koi baat nahi Meher sirf ek towel hi to hai...koi badi aur bhari samaan thodi hai.
(It's ok Meher no problem... it's just a towel...not something very big and heavy).
Meher(smiles) : Laiye mujhe dijiye main de deti hun Heer didi ko.
(Ok...give it to me...I'll give it to Heer didi).
Kul di : Are nahi Meher ye Heer k liye nahi Prem k liye hai...wo kya hai na yaha washroom mein towel nahi hai to usne mujhe bola tha towel lane k liye.
(Arey no Meher...this is for Prem...actually there is no towel in the washroom...so he asked me to bring it).
Meher : Oh ok maine socha k ye Heer didi k liye hai...koi baat nahi aap jaiye unhe de dijiye.
(Actually I thought it's for Heer didi...no problem...go give it to him).
Kul di nods and knocked the door.
Kul di : Prem... towel.
But no answer.
Kul di :Prem...arey...ye ladka darwaza kyun nahi khol raha hai?
(Why isn't he opening the door)?
Meher : Kyunki jiju yaha nahi hai Kul di...Heer didi hain.
(Because jiju is not here Kul di...Heer didi is inside).
Kul di : Nahi Meher andar Prem hai thodi der pehle hi to dekh ke gayi hun.
(No Meher...Prem is inside...i just saw him a few minutes ago).
Meher : Nahi Kul Di andar Heer didi hain...arey unhone hi to mujhe towel lane k liye bola.
(No Kul di... Heer did is here... she only told me to bring the towel).
Kul di : Nahi Meher tujhe galatfaimi huyi hai.
(No Meher you r mistaken).
Meher : No Kul di...you r mistaken...
Like this their argument continued about who is in the room...Heer or Prem???
Here inside the room-
Heer : Sab tumhari galti hai...idiot!!
(It's totally your fault...idiot!!)
Prem : Hawww!!!! Tumne mujhe idiot bola...maine socha haldi k baad hum ek dusre se mil nahi payenge to kyun na usse pehele thoda time saath mein beeta le aur tum mujhe daant rahi ho.
(U call me idiot...I thought after haldi we'll not be able to meet each other so before that spend some time together and u r scolding me).
When Premeer were arguing about whose fault is this...outside Meher and Kul di listened everything and chuckled seeing each other.
Kul di : Prem...bahar aaja. (Come outside.)
Meher : Haan humne sab sun liya hai...chhupne ki koi zaroorat nahi...bahar aa jaiye.
(Yes we have heard everything...no need to be hiding...come out.)
Both Premeer came out lowering their gaze...Heer tried to hide behind Prem.
Kul di : Oh ho...ab chhupa jaa raha hain...(pretending to be serious) ..waise Heer tujhse ye ummed nahi thi...tune bauji ki baat ka maan nahi rakha.
(Oh ho...now hiding ha...btw Heer its not expected from you...I mean u disobey dad's order...we didn't think so).
Heer : No no...it's nothng like that...just...
Kul di : What just...bauji ne kaha tha k haldi k baad tum dono shadi tak ek dusre se nahi mil sakte lekin tumlog...
(Dad has told you that after haldi you both will not meet each other till marriage...but u...)
Heer : Kul di plz aisa mat boliye...meri koi galti nahi hai ye sab iss Prem k wajah se hua (glared at him).
(Kul di plzz don't say like this...it's not my fault...this all because of Prem).
Prem made a puppy face.
Seeing this both Meher nd Kul di burst out into laughter. Heer looked at them with open mouth.
At that time Gayatri came there.
Gayatri : Kya hua tum logo ko???...abhi tak tayiyyat nahi huye...sham ko mehendi hai na der ho jayegi.
(What happened?? Till now u r not ready...we'll be late for the mehendi ceremony in the evening).
Hearing this again Mehernd Kul di laughed again.
Gayatri : Arey Maine koi joke bola k tum log has rahe ho.
(What? Did I crack a joke that you are laughing?)
Kul di : Nahi ma kuch nahi...aap chaliye wo log a jayenge.
(No mom...nothing...let's go...they'll come).
Gayatri : But...
Before she could say anything Kul di and Meher dragged her from there...Heer angrily glared Prem and went to her room...Prem just sighed and left to get ready.
Done with this part guys...I don't know if it's worth reading or not...but plzz do read and share your opinions ...every comment is important. Next part will be posted soon. Till then take care and bye.
Originally posted by: Trisha510
Yeh bhi awesome part tha... Waiting for next part.. Update soon
Prem-Heer haldi scene was superb
Hello people I am back with the next part of this SS...this is the 2nd last chapter...only 1 chapter is left...so enjoy reading.
Premeer SS
Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai
Part 9 (Second Last Part)
In the evening all the Maan and Juneja ladies gather in the Hall for the Mehendi ceremony. As it was a ladies' function so all the boys including Kul di's two sons Ketan and Vikash were in the garden outside enjoying among themselves.
In the hall the mehendi ceremony had begun. Teji brought her daughter and made her sit on the special place which was made to sit the bride...it was decorated with flowers of hers choice. First Gayatri came forward and applied a little mehendi on her hand as a "shagun. After that the designer put the mehendi on her hand and feet.
Meher : Didi k haath mein Prem jiju ka naam aise likhna k wo dhund hi nap aye.
(Write Prem jiju's name on my sister's hand in a way that he could never find it).
Meher and Ashlesha giggle and Heer blushes hearing Prem's name.
Veera : Ji nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga...mere Prem bhaiya apna naam zaroor dhund lenge chahe kitni bhi mushkil ho.
(No way...nothing of this thing going to happen...no matter how hard it would be, my brother will surely find his name).
Ashlesha : Dekhte hain.
(We'll see).
Kul Di : Dekh lena.
(You will see).
After that the mehendi artist started to draw the design on Heer's hands...one by one all the ladies designed their hands with mehendi...Now it is the time for Prem to find his name...Kulraj went outside to bring Prem.
Prem came in the hall with Kulraj and the first thing that caught his sight was the glowing and smiling face of his Heer...she was constantly smiling and blushing possibly being teased by her sisters...until then she hadn't noticed Prem as he was standing right behind her...it was Kulraj's voice that made her turn to her back and for a few seconds she forgot to breath...Prem was standing there with a golden brown sherwani and a perfect smile playing on her lips...his thick black hair locks scattering unevenly on his forehead, gave him a perfect dreamy look on which every girl in the hall wished to drool.
Same is the case with our Prem...he could see her drapped in a greenish brown lehenga with simple dupatta which gave her a simple but elegant look...not too much jewelry, in fact she was adorned with flower jewelry which increased her beauty a lot more...her deep black almond shaped eyes, perfectly designed with a thick layer of kajal and eyeliner, made HIM drown in them a little more.
Their staring session was disturbed by Meher who literally shouted near Prem's ear making him stumble a bit. He confusingly looked at Meher and then the rest of the ladies in the hall who were, by then, trying to hide their smile.Prem was totally embarrassed at this...he literally hide behind Kulraj and stole glances of Heer who seemed to enjoy this as much as a kid enjoys a cartoon.
However Gayatri interfered in between the teasing session to finish it fast as the sangeet ceremony was yet to be done. As per Gayatri's orders Kulraj made Prem sit in front of Heer and gave Heer's hand into Prem's so that he could find his name.
Prem was trying hard to find his name but it seemed nothing was there...he tried and tried until his eyes saw hers who was constantly guiding him to somewhere...he followed her gaze and found his name written in a heart shaped design. He pointed it and gave his saali's a victory look. As soon ashe found it Heer squealed in excitement not able to control herself but immediately cursed herself under her breath for openly showing her admiration for Prem. Prem chuckled seeing her reaction.
Ashlesha : Kya di...aapne to humein hara hi diya. (pouts)
(What is this di...you have failed us).
Heer pouts seeing her cousin's sad face. "Sorry", she said cutely.
After the mehendi ceremony now it's the time for Sangeet...though lalit wanted it to be a ladies sangeet but the youngsters Harman, Meher, Preet and Ashlesha demanded a joint sangeet where they could compete against boys and would apparently defeat them as revenge of the mehendi failure. At first Lalit didn't agree but after Kulraj and Kiran's insistence and also Baraj's acceptance, finally he agreed. But but but...
Prem still couldn't be a part of it as he had already ignored his bauji's words and tried to meet Heer in haldi...so it was decided that Prem would stay there but he would be separated by a white cloth and through that cloth he could see the sangeet.
After everything had been decided suddenly Prem dragged Preet at his side.
Preet(surprised) : Woa woa!! PB! Aap mujhe kahan le jaa rahe ho?
(PB where are you dragging me)?
Prem : Tu mere saath chal raha hai.
(You are coming with me).
Preet : Kyun??? Are mujhe wahan jana hai...pointing to the main hall.
(Why??? I want to go there).
"Bilkul nahi", Prem cut him off. "Main Heer ko nahi dekh paa raha hun to tu mera dukh baatne mein mujhe company dega".
(No way...I am not able to see Heer so you are going to accompany me in my sorrow).
Preet groaned, "Par PB main hi kyun??? Harman bhai ko bulao na".
(But why me?? Call Harman bhai).
Prem : Kyunki tu ne hi mera plan fail kiya aur wo tu hi tha jo ladkiyon ko harane k liye utavla hua jaa raha tha.
(Because you who failed my plan and it was you who were all ready and excided to defeat the girls.)
Flashback-
When Lalit announced that it would be a ladies function immediately an idea popped up in Prem's mind...he whispered in Harman, Preet and Kiran Jiju's ears that they would dress like the ladies and enter the function.
Harman : Wowww Prem bhaiya...kya idea hai...main aapke saath hun.
(Woww Prem bhaiya...what an idea...I am with you).
Kiran : Lekin Prem bauji ko pata chal gaya to?
(But Prem what if bauji would know)?
Prem : Don't worry jiju...kuch nahi hoga...hum Ketan ko bol denge wo bauji ko busy rakhega. (winks)
(Don't worry jiju...nothing will happen...we'll tell Ketan to take care of bauji).
Preet(protested) : Bilkul nahi...mujhe ladkiyon ke saath hi muqabla karni hai...aur waise bhi Ash hai wahan...mujhe use bhi to dekhna hai.
(No way...I want to defea the girls...by the way Ash is also there so I wanna see her.)
Prem : Preet tu...
(Preet You...)
His words were cut off by Preet, "Sorry PB, ismein main aapke saath nahi hu...main jaa raha hu...jisko aana hai wo mere peeche aa sakta hai", Preet decared and almost ran from there.
(Sorry PB, I am no with you in this...I am going...whoever wants to come, can come after me).
Without any choice Harman and Kiran jiju also followed him leaving Prem alone to curse Preet under his breath.
Flashback Ends.
Preet remembered it and became irritated...he tried so many ways to convince Prem but Prem didn't change his decision...without any option they just sit there and saw the sangeet through the cloth.
One hour has passed and now being completely bored, Preet decided to play game on his mobile...here Prem was constantly searching for Heer through the cloth as he hadn't seen her since few minutes. To his luck Tanu came running at his direction to ask if he needed anything because her Nani, i.e., Gayatri had asked her to do so.
Listening to her Prem smirked as a plan suddenly appeared in his head. He asked Tanu where Heer is.
"Tanu tumhari Heer mami kahan hai?" asked Prem.
(Where is your Heer mami)?
"Mamu, mami to kitchen mein gayi hai unko pani chahiye thi na", replied Tanu.
(Heer mami is in kitchen..she needed water).
Prem : Tanu mera ek kaam karogi??? Apni Heer mami se jake kehna k upar terrace par aa jaye..kuch kaam hai...par ye mat kehna k maine bulaya hai...aur haan kisiko is bare mein batana mat.
(Tanu tell your Heer mami to come to terrace...but don't tell her that I have called her and don't tell this to anyone else).
Tanu : But Nanu ko pata chal gaya tho?
(What if Nanu get to know this).
Prem(assuring her) : Kuch nhi hoga main hoon na...aur phir soch lo tumhe apni favourite chocolate bhi milegi.
(Nothing will happen...then you will get your favourite chocolate).
Tanu became happy...she nodded yes and went from there.
In the terrace-
"Yhan to koi bhi nahi hai...Tanu ne to kaha tha use kuch kaam hai", Heer murmured to herself.
(No one is here..but Tanu told she had some work).
Suddenly two strong arms wrapped around her waist..she immediately recognized the touch and whispered "Prem".
It was not that Prem didn't like his name but listening it from the lips of the lady whom he had loved the most..who was his soul mate...was something different...something magical...he rested his chin on her shoulder and she placed her hand on his cheek from back...they were standing there silent...looking at the bright shining Moon which was the symbol of their love, their passion and their devotion towards each other.
It was after sometime that Heer broke the silence.
"Prem", she whispered, "Mujhe jaana chahiye".
(Prem I need to go).
"Plzz Heer...thodi der aur", Prem pleaded.
"Lekin..." (But), she was cut off by Prem who placed his finger on her lips to stop her from further talking. Then he himself continued...
Prem : Heer...aj humara sangeet hai...aur tum aise mujhse dur dur kyun ho...tumhe ye shadi karni to hai na?
(Heer today is our sangeet and you are so far away from me...do you want to marry me or not)?
Heer : Prem...tum bhi na...kuch bhi bolte ho...achcha ab chhdo mujhe warna koi dekh lega.
(Prem...you are...nothing's like that..ok leave me I have to go).
Prem : Achcha baba sirf 10 minute.
(Ok ok only 10 minutes).
Heer nodded and they remain in that position enjoying each other's company...suddenly they heard a voice and part always.
"Prem! Heer!", came a voice from some distance...they looked at that direction and froze on the spot...Lalit was standing there with a very angry glare...behind him was an equally angry Balraj.
Prem stammered, "Bbb...bau..bauji..aap..aap yahan?"
(Bbb...bau..bauji...you...you hhere?)
"Haa main yahan...achcha hua aa gaya warna mujhe kuch pata hi nahi chalta".
(It's good that I came here otherwise I might never know anything).
Prem : Nahi nahi...aap jaisa samajh rahein hain waisa kuch nahi hai.
(No no nothing of that sort was happening that you are thinking).
Lalit : Bas!! Prem mujhe tujhse ye ummed nahi thi...tune aisa kiya...nahi ab maine faisla kar liya hai k ab ye sagai nahi hogi.
(Enough!! Prem I didn't expect this from you...you did this...no...I have decided that this wedding will not happen).
Prem : Lekin bauji... (But Bauji...)
Lalit : Bas maine keh diya na...to final.
(I have already said..so it's final).
Balraj : Haan...ab to mujhe bhi lagta hai k ye shadi nahi honi chahiye.
(Yes now I also feel that this wedding shouldn't be happening).
Premeer were numb at this sudden decision...they knew that they disrespected their elders by not listening to them but they also knew that it was no such a big deal that their parents would call off the marriage.
Person(thinks) : Dekho dekho aisa lag raha hai jaise abhi ro denge...ab aaya na asli maza...mujhse panga liya tha na...ab dekho maine kya kiya...(smirks).
Suddenly his trance was broke by Lalit's voice. "Oye nalayak idhar aa", came Lalit's voice.
Hurriedly went there and stood behind Lalit seeing Prem's glare.
"Is nalayak Preet ne aj pehli baar meri baat suni...agar ye na kehta to umein to kuch pata hi nahi chalta".
(For the first time this "good for nothing has listen to me...if he didn't inform then we would have never known this).
(Yes guyz that's our Preet...actually when Prem was talking to Tanu, Preet silently heard everything and he thought of teasing his PB...also he wanted Prem to stay there with him as he also wasn't able to meet Ashlesha...so he informed the family about his bhai and bhabhi's secret meeting.)
To be Continued...
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Thank you,
Sunayana
Originally posted by: Trisha510
Wow such a amazing update.. Waiting for wedding of Premeer
Hello wonderful people...I am back with the last chapter of my story. So without much bak bak let's begin...enjoy reading.
Premeer SS
Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai
Part 10(Last Chapter)
Suddenly his trance was broken by Lalit's voice. "Oye nalayak idhar aa, came Lalit's voice.
Hurriedly he went there and stood behind Lalit seeing Prem's glare.
"Is nalayak Preet ne aj pehli baar meri baat suni. Agar ye na kehta to humein to kuch pata hi nahi chalta.
(For the first time this "good for nothing Preet has listen to me. If he didn't inform then we would have never known this).
(Yes guyz that's our Preet. Actually when Prem was talking to Tanu, Preet silently heard everything and he thought of teasing his PB...also he wanted Prem to stay there with him as he also wasn't able to meet Ashlesha...so he informed the family about his bhai and bhabhi's secret meeting.)
"Preeet Prem cursed him under his breath.
But to his bad luck Preet heard that.
"Dekhiye bauji bhaiya mujhe kya keh rahe hai , Preet complained to his dad like a small child.
(See dad what is bhaiya saying to me).
Lalit rolled his eyes at Prem and he remained quiet but he was very scared of his bauji now as he had said that this marriage wouldn't happen...so he tried to pacify him.
"Dekhiye bauji aap jaisa soch rahe hain waisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Iss Preet ko kuch nahi pata...wo to main sirf Heer ko ye payal dene aaya tha jo maine uske liye kharida tha, Prem tried to explain.
(No dad there's nothing like that what you are thinking. This Preet knows nothing...I just wanted to give Heer these payal which I bought for her...that's why I was here).
"Achcha to kisi aur ke haatho se bhijwa nahi sakta that tu? his bauji asked.
(Really? You could have sent it through someone else...couldn't you?)
"Haan lekin...wo actually...main..Heer kuch bolo na, Prem literally stammered and pleaded Heer for some help.
(Yes but...actually...I...Heer say something plzz).
"Haa chachu wo Pr..Prem thik keh raha hai, Heer supported Prem fearing that their parents might call off this wedding.
(Yes uncle wo Pr...Prem is right).
Balraj : Heer tu bhi in sab mein shamil hai?
(Heer you knew all this)?
"Papaji plzz meri baat to suniye Heer pleaded to her father.
(Dad plz listen to me).
Both Premeer were trying to convince them as Lalit and Balraj became adamant but what they didn't notice was the hidden smirk on both their father's faces. Gayatri and Teji were trying to stop them from teasing their children but the two fathers seemed to have had their own pleasure.
After some time when they saw their children's state they couldn't control and burst out into laughter followed by Preet. Seeing them both Premeer s mouth opened wide in a "O shape.
"To ye..ye sab mazak tha? Prem asked being confused and somewhat relaxed.
(So it was all a prank?)
"To tujhe kya laga sirf tu hi humein ullu bana sakta hai...are main bhi tera baap hun...samjha? Lalit replied making his imaginary collar up.
(Then what did you think that only you can fool us...no son...after all I am your father...understood?)
"Ji bauji...maan gaya ke aapko, Prem surrendered.
(Yes I understand).
"Aur Papaji kya aap bhi... Heer's question remained incomplete when her father put his hands on her head and said in a loving tone, "Beta iss din ka kab se intezar tha humein to hum iss ko todne ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakte...ye to bas iss Preet ke kehne pe ek chhota sa mazak tha.
(We had been waiting for this day for so long then how can we think of cancelling it...this was just a small prank guided by Preet).
Prem glared at Preet and he hid behind his bhabhi. "Bhabhi dekho bhaiya mujhe kaise ghoor rahe hain, he complained to Heer.
(Bhabhi see bhaiya is staring at me).
Heer patted Preet's back. "Prem ghoorna band karo, Heer ordered Prem.
(Prem stop staring at him).
"But Heer... he couldn't complete as Lalit slightly hit him on his upper arm. "Ab jane bhi de...aur ab tum dono jao...khud ki hi sangeet se khud hi gayab ho.
(Leave him...and now both of you go downstairs...you two have been missing from you own sangeet ).
"To kya ab hum saath mein... Before he could complete his words, Heer hit him on his stomach with her elbow making others grin.
"Haan bhai jao ab tum dono saath mein hi jao Lalit laughed followed by everyone.
(Yes yes now you both can go together).
Premeer smiled and went downstairs followed by their family members one by one. They danced together on "Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali, the favourite song of Heer.
Prem took Heer's hands and led her to the centre of the stage. He pulled her in close so that their bodies were almost touching. One of her hands caught hold of her one hands, while the other snaked around her waist.
Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali
Pari Ho Ya Ho Pariyon Ki Rani
Ya Ho Meri Prem Kahani
Mere Sawalon Ka Jawab Do
Do Na...
Prem slowly pulled her hands out of his and placed both hands around his neck. Prem then put both his hands around his waist. Heer pulled in closer so that their bodies were touching and hugged him as they danced. She settled her head in the crook of his neck and moved to the bit of his body as well as the music.
Bolo Na Kyun Ye Chand Sitaare
Takte Hain Yun Mukhde Ko Tumhare
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Bolo Na Kyun Ye Chnad Sitaare
Takte Hain Yun Mukhde Ko Tumhare
Chhuke Badan Ko Hawa Kyun Mehki
Raat Bhi Hai Kuch Behki Behki
Mere Sawalon Ka Jawab Do
Do Na...
Prem and Heer lost themselves in each other's eyes as the song continued. Everything just flashed in their minds like it was yesterday when he came to India with his family for seeing the girl whom his father had chosen long ago for him.
Kyun Ho Tum Sharmayi Hui Si
Lagti Ho Kuch Ghabraayi Huyi Si
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Kyun Ho Tum Sharmayi Huyi Si
Lagti Ho Kuch Ghabrayi Huyi Si
Dhalka Hua Sa Aanchal Kyun Hai
Ye Mere Dil Mein Hulchul Kyun Hai
Mere Sawalon Ka Jawab Do
Do Na...
He couldn't take his eyes off from her...sam with her. Her mind drifted back to the day when they went to the beach and enjoyed themselves to the fullest...and then the night of her worries...she slmost thought that she lost im...until then she didn't know what LOVE is...but after that incident she was sure that she could see anything but him in pain.
Dono Taraf Benam Si Uljhan
Jaise Mile Ho Dulha Dulhan
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Dono Taraf Benaam Si Uljhan
Jaise Mile Ho Dulha Dulhan
Dono Ki Aisi Halat Kyun Hai
Aakhir Itni Mohabbat Kyun Hai
Mere Sawalon Ka Jawab Do
Do Na...
Their performance ended but they seemed to have been enjoying in their own wonderlands...their trance was broken by the loud round of applauses made by the guests.The rest of the night went fast with various performances from Premeer's parents Lalit-Gayatri, Balraj-Teji and their siblings Preet-Ashlesha and Harman-Meher.
At night everyone retired to their rooms as tomorrow was the wedding and everyone needed to get up early in the morning and off course everyone should look good. But two people were busy in their own small world and those were none other than our Premeer.
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" So how do you feel about it? Prem asked Heer impatiently on the phone.
"Kya Prem...peechle 10 minute mein tum dus baar ye sawal puch chuke ho Heer replied smilingly.
(Prem you have asked this question almost 10 times in last 10 minutes).
Prem smiled like a love sick teenager and replied "Kya karun Heer mujhe abhi bhi yekeen nahi ho raha hai ke humari shadi hone wali hai.
(What to do Heer...I still can't believe that we are getting married).
Heer : Waise sach kahun Prem to yakeen to mujhe bhi nahi ho raha hai...kal tak to hum bilkul ajnabee he aur aaj...
(Frankly speaking I too can't believe it...I mean till yesterday were complete strangers to each other and now...)
"Aur aaj? Prem asked.
(And now?)
"Aur aaj tumhare bina jeene ki soch bhi nahi sakti main, replied Heer letting him know how much he meant to her.
(And now I can't even think of living without you).
"Tum akeli nahi Heer, Prem reciprocated her feelings, "Mera bhi ab din tumhi se shuru hota hai aur tum par khatam aur tumhe pata hai aisa kyun?
(Not only you Heer but me too...my days begin with you and end on you and do you know why it is so)?
Heer chuckled a bit before asking him "Why?
"Kyunki Heer Prem ka prateek hai aur Prem sabse zyada Heer mein samaya hai.
(That's because Heer is the symbol of Prem and Prem lies entirely in Heer more than anything else).
Heer's eyes welled up seeing his love for her. She silently sobbed so that he wouldn't know but he was Prem...her Prem. How wouldn't he know? And exactly in 5 minutes he was there in her room sitting on her bed taking her in his embrace and trying to console her by whispering sweet nothings to her ear.
After some time she stopped and looked at Prem who was still holding her by her shoulder to support her.
"Prem, Heer called her.
"Hmmm, he replied quietly.
"Tumhe yahan nahi aana chaiye tha...koi apsagun ho gaya to? Heer voiced her fears.
(You shouldn't have come here. What if something bad happens?)
"Kuch nahi hoga mujh par bharosa hai na? Aur wasi bhi mujhe to aana hi tha...tumhe akela kaise chhod sakta tha? he replied cupping her face with his both hands.
(Nothing will happen. You trust me...don't you? And by the way I had to come...how could I leave you alone?)
"Aur waise bhi aise akele tumse milna ka mauka kaise chhod skata tha main he winked, trying to make the atmosphere lighten seeing her eyes welling up again.
(And how would I let the opportunity of meeting you alone go?)
Heer hit his chest softly "Prem tum bhi na.
"Ouch!!! he winced.
"Sorry sorry...dard hua? she asked being concerned.
(Did it hurt)?
Prem nodded cutely giving a positive reply.
"Kahan..dikhao mujhe, she asked thinking she might hurt him.
(Where...let me see.)
"Yahan, Prem guided her hands to his heart and placed it over there.
(Right here.)
"Prem, Heer rolled her eyes seeing his drama.
"Ok ok, Prem surrendered himself. "Tum bhi na...sare romance ka styanash kar deti ho, he pouts letting her know his disappointment.
(You are...you are the enemy of my romance.)
Heer smiled and cupped his cheek, "Romance ke liye puri zindagi pari hai...lekin main nahi chahti ke kuch bhi gadbad ho iss shadi mein...to plzz ab jao.
(We have the rest of our lives for romance...but I don't want anything bad happened in this wedding...so you plzz go.)
Prem smiled. "Are you sure you will be ok? he asked still couldn't have the heart to leave her alone.
"Yes, replied Heer.
Prem gently kissed on her forehead ad left from her room only to be watched by his would-be-wife of how this man could possibly had fallen in so much love with her in such a short period of time.
Next day was a big day for both the Maan's and Juneja's. Everybody was assigned to their work and Lalit was personally supervising the works as a commander of an army. It has been decided that the wedding will be held in the house itself so the whole mansion had been decorated like a princess. The gate was decorated with blue orchids at both sides...in the hall a large mandap had been set up where the two souls would be united in a few hours.
After some times the guests started arriving and were welcomed by Lalit and Balraj. Teji, Daljeet, Meher and Ashlesha were busy making Heer ready for the most important day of her life, while Gayatri , Kulraj and Preet were in Prem's room making him look like a perfect groom.
"Are abhi tak tayyar nahi huya tu Prem...pandit ji bula rahe hain, said Lalit entering the room.
(Aren't you ready yet Prem? The priest is asking for you).
"Haan haan bas taiyyar hai...abhi aa rahe hain , replied Gayatri adjusting the turban (Pagri) on Prem's head.
(Yes yes almost ready...we're coming).
Lalit saw his eldest son getting ready for the most important day of his lie...a life which he, as a father, had chosen for him...and his son, though being brought up in Canada, happily accepted without any hesitation. He felt so proud on him that a few drops of tears came out of his eyes and immediately a hand rose to wipe them off...it was Prem's hand.
"Bauji, Prem called being concerned.
"Are kuch nahi beta...aj barson ka purana sapna pura ho raha hia to isliye... he smiled through tears.
(Nothing happened beta...today my long cherished dream has come true that's why...)
Everyone smiled seeing the father-son bond but soon realized that they had to do down for the wedding. Lalit and Gayatri left Prem to be accompanied by his siblings. On the other side in Heer's room Meher and Ashlesha were busy teasing Heer taking Prem's name time and again.
"Are ladkiyon jaldi karo...kabhi bhi bulava aa sakta hai shouted Daljeet.
(C'mon girls hurry up...they can call the bride any time).
"Dekhiye na chachi ye dono mujhe kaise chhed rahe hain, Heer complained to Daljeet.
(See chichi how they are teasing me)
Ashlesha : Are are chhede kaise nahi...aj hi to mauka hai.
(Are how we can not tease you...today's the time).
Ash winked at Meher and both giggled. Daljeet shaked her head unbelievably and left them alone for sometime.
"Achcha ji..waise tum dono bhi kuch kam nahi hai Heer thought of teasing her sisters.
(Really? By the way you two are not so innocent too).
"Matlab? both Ash and Meher, being confused at their elder sister's remark, asked in unison.
"Matlb jab tum log ghum kar wapas aaye the aur haldi wale din kya kya hua tha mujhe sab pata hai...aur zyada mujhe chheda na to sab bata dungi chachi ko Heer whispered to their ears making them jump in shock.
(Means I know everything that happened the day when you came back from your trip and the day of my haldi...if you tease me more I will tell everything to chachi).
Meher stammered, "Di di...aap...kya keh..keh rahi ho?
(What are you saying?)
"Ash tujhe pata hai na main kya keh rahi hu? Heer winked at Ash making her blush at the thought of Preet.
(Ash you know what I am saying...don't you)?
"Di aap..mujhe kaise pata hoga? she tried to escape.
(How would I know?)
Heer laughed at her sister's conditions and pulled them into a tight hug. "I am really happy for you two. Harman and Preet are really nice...you two do like them..don't you?she asked them.
Ash and Meher nodded in agreement and hugged her more tightly thinking their elder sister would not be there with them after a few hours. The three of them became emotional but soon this moment was broken by Daljeet's voice who was calling them downstairs as Priest had asked for the dulhan to come down.
Prem was waiting impatiently for his bride to come down. They hadn't met since the last night...well that was not a quite long time but it seemed a hundred times more longer to Prem. Suddenly all the people who were around him till this time, faded and all he could see was his bride, draped in a red and golden lehenga, coming down for him, escorted by her mother and would be mother-in-law. Teji kissed her daughter's forehead before making her sit beside Prem.
The wedding rituals began with the priest chanting the holy mantras. As they took rounds (pheras) around the sacred fire they both pledged their lives, their love, their faith, their loyalty and their fidelity to each other through the wedding vows.
Prem put the black beaded nuptial chain(mangalsutra) around Heer's delicate neck. Prem took a pinch of sindoor and filled Heer's hairline (maang) with the color of his love. The wedding completed and the Priest announced them as Man and Wife...officially. They took blessings from their elders and hugged their siblings.
THE END.
I am done with the last part guyz. Thank you to all the readers who have liked this story and commented on it. I just tried to write it in as simple language as it could be. I have tried to keep the essence of the original story with a slight touch of my imagination. I hope you liked it. Plzz do read this part as well and share your views. The epilogue will be posted soon.
Thank You,
Love,
Sunayana