Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai-Epilogue Updated on 16/11/2018 (page 15) - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Amazing episode dis too... Waiting for next part
Posted: 6 years ago
#82
just read chapter 1 and already like it.
Posted: 6 years ago
#83
read part 2
Wow like prem heer meeting .
Heer was obviously surprised after seeing Prem there.
i will read rest of the four chapter tomorrow.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mijanur

read part 2
Wow like prem heer meeting .
Heer was obviously surprised after seeing Prem there.
i will read rest of the four chapter tomorrow.



Thank you suridh for liking and commenting on it...means a lot😊😊 i will be waiting to see your views on the other parts
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Trisha510

Amazing episode dis too... Waiting for next part



Thank you for liking and commenting on it😊 means a lot...stay tuned for further updates.

Love,
Sunayana😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: mijanur

just read chapter 1 and already like it.



Thanks I am glad that you liked it😃😊
Posted: 6 years ago
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Read rest of the chapters. It was superb, I really like romantic rain scenes between Prem and Heer.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mijanur

Read rest of the chapters. It was superb, I really like romantic rain scenes between Prem and Heer.



Thanks Shuridh for commenting...I am glad that you liked it...stay tuned for further updates.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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https://imgur.com/gallery/7wbvekd


Here's the Wedding Card of PremEer for the next part of my story "Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai". It will be posted in a few minutes.

Be ready guys



Love,
Sunayana
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello guyz...I know I am very very very late...but what to do...had some function at home...but now I am back... thank you for your response on the previous part...now let's start the next part...enjoy reading.

Premeer SS

Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai


Part 7


Heer was continuously tossing on the bed not able to sleep...whenever she closed her eyes her mind returned back to the evening incident on the beach...that one moment that took away her peace...though surprisingly she didn't feel it was wrong...rather she was enjoying it and a part of her wanted that moment to never end...she gets up and sat on the bed.

"Uhh...babaji ye kya ho raha hai...mujhe baar baar wohi sab yaad kyun aa raha ahi...aur mujhe bura bhi nahi lag raha hai Heer complained to god and sighed. But the next moment her eyes reflect a fear and a pain.

(Uhh god...what's happening...why I am remembering the same thing again and again...and I don't even feel bad).

"Lekin agar Prem ko ye bura laga hoga to???...kahi wo mere bare mein kuch galat na soch raha ho...maine kuch bhi jaan bujh ke nahi kiya tha...lekin agar...nahi nahi...mujhe Prem se baat karni hogi...ha...abhi to wo so raha hoga...main kal subha hi usse baat karungi she decided being afraid of Prem's reaction to their small intimate moment on the beach.

(But what if Prem felt bad...let's hope he doesn't think something wrong about me...i didn't do anything intentionally..but if...no no...i have to talk to Prem...he is sleeping now...tomorrow I will talk to him).

Heer turned being thirsty and saw the jug empty...so she went to kitchen to get water...while coming back to her room she saw that the door of Prem's room was slightly open...she thought to have a glimpse of Prem before retiring to bed.

As soon as she stepped inside she heard some faint noises...it was Prem who was mumbling something in deep sleep...she went near him to hear clearly but while going closer her hand slightly brushed against Prem's whose one hand was hanging at the edge of the bed.

No sooner had her hand touched Prem's she widened her eyes because Prem was having high fever and his mumbling was the effect of this high fever...she touched his forehead and realized that it was burning...she tried to wake him up.

"Prem...Prem... Heer called him but no response...she could feel him shivering. She took a blanket from his closet and wrapped him completely...It was almost midnight so no doctor would be available at this hour of the night...not knowing what to do she rushed to the kitchen and after sometimes came back with a bowl of cold water and a dry clean piece of cloth.

Heer sat on the stool beside his bed and started doing his "Pani ki patti...first she dipped that cloth into the water then put it on Prem's forehead...after that again she dipped the cloth into the water...she repeated this process so many times so that his temperature could come down... She was weeping silently praying to the one above to make Prem alright.

It was almost dawn...the faint sun rays peeped through the window and landed on Prem's eyes. Prem slowly opened his eyes and saw the most beautiful sight...His Heer...she was sleeping so peacefully...but in an uncomfortable position...her head was resting on her left hand which was placing beside his pillow...some strand of hair was falling on her cheek...she looked so serene with her early morning beauty...but what he didn't understand was that why is she sleeping here.

"Heer a faint voice echoed in her ear and she slowly opened her eyes...Prem saw her opening her eyes and wished good morning.

"Good morning Prem wished smilingly.

It took her few minutes to understand that Prem had awaken up...she immediately sat straight on her stool and checked his forehead.

"Prem tum thik ho? she asked being concerned.

(Are you alright?)

Prem scrunched his eyebrows... "Haa Heer...mujhe kya hua? he asked being confused.

Heer understood that he didn't remember as he caught fever in his sleep.

"Actually raat ko tumhe bukhar ho gaya ta...puri raat tum kampte rahe aur apne hosh mein bhi nhi the she replied.

(Actually you had fever...you were shivering the whole night and in a semi-conscious state).

She checked his forehead and noticed it was still warm... "Tumhe abhi bhi bukhar hai Prem...tum lete raho...main doctor ko bulati hu she advised him.

(You still have fever Prem...you lye down here..I'll call the doctor).

She was about to go but Prem caught her wrist.. "Heer.

Heer turned towards him "Haan.

"Tum puri raat yaha thi...mere paas? Prem asked looking straight in her eyes.

(You were here..the whole night?)

She could feel the emotions in his eyes as it was same as hers but right now his health was more important to her... she lowered her gaze "Main doctor ko bulati hu ...(I'll call the doctor)...she mumbled before leaving the room.

After sometimes Heer came to the room with the doctor...she was hoping to find Prem awake but to her disappointment he was again fell unconscious...Dr. checked him.

Dr. : Inki ye halat kabse hain? (For how long he has been in this state?)

Heer : Ji 8 ghante ho gaye...mera matlab hai k kal raat se...inko tej bukhar tha...maine inko dawai dene ki koshish kit hi par kyunki ye hosh mein nahi the to maine sirt pani ki patti kar di taki inka bukhar thoda sa kam ho jaye...lekin baat kya hai dr.? sab thik hai na?

(For almost 8 hours...I mean from yesterday night...he has high fever...i tried to give him some paracitamol tablets but he was unconscious...so I just put some wet cloth on his head to reduce the temperature...why Dr. ...is there any problem?)

She was afraid of something might happen to him...but the Dr. assured her... "Relax Ms. Maan...you had done right...it was really helpful in reducing the temperature...but I think the rain water didn't suit him...but off course you also need some proper medicine...i have written some medicines...give it to him when he will wake up.

Ji Dr Heer replied half heartedly... "Lekin Dr. she again asked Thodi der pehle jab maine aapko call kiya tha tab unko hosh aaya tha...To phirse wo behosh kyun ho gaye?

(Ok Dr... But he had gained consciousness right before I called you...then how did suddenly he fall unconscious again?)

Dr. : Ghabrane ki zaroorat nahi hai Ms. Maan...wo thode kamzor hai aur unhe araam ki zaroorat hai...aur upar se unhe abhi bhi kaafi zayada bukhar hai...to bas isliye aisa hua...filhaal to main ek injection likh ke de raha hun...raat tak unhe hosh aa jayega tab unko ye dawaiyab de dena..do dino mein wo puri tarha se thik ho jayenge.

(Don't worry Ms. Maan...its just he was weak and needed proper rest...moreover he still has fever as you had said to me...so that's why...right now I am giving him an injection...he will wake up till night...just give the medicines properly...he will be fine in two days.)

Heer nodded and the Dr. left...She was sitting in the same position like the night and was waiting fot Prem to wake up...tears were continuously flowing from her eyes.

"Ye sab meri galati hai...maine use barish mein bhigne ke liye zabardasti ki hi kyun jab wo tayyar nahi the...ab main lali chachu aur gayatri chichi se kya kahungi she cried.

(It was all my fault...why did I even force him to get drenched in rain in the first place when he was not ready...what will I say to Lali chachu and Gayatri chachi...plzzz god make him fine)

It is almost night when Prem slowly opened his eyes...he felt weak but still managed to sit on the bed resting his head on the headboard...he looked around and found that Heer was trying to close the window but it was becoming difficult for her as the wind blew very wildly...somehow she managed to close it...when she turned she saw him staring at her and giving his gentle smile...though he was weak, still his smile had reached his eyes which showed his happiness at finding Heer in front of him.

Heer smiled gently and asked "Ab tabiyat kaisi hai? (How are You?)

"Thik hu Prem replied. (I am Good).

"Tum lete raho...main khana leke aati hu...phir tumhe dawai bhi leni hai Heer said to him.

(You lye down...I am bringing your dinner...then you'll have to take medicine).

Prem nodded and Heer went to kitchen to get food...she came back after sometime and placed the tray on the table near his bed...Prem tried to take the spoon but failed as he was weak and didn't have the strength...Heer noticed this and asked hesitatingly "M...main khila du? (Shall I feed You?)

Prem sensed his hesitation and tried to protest "Nahi nahi...it's okk...main khud hi... (No no it's ok...I ...)

He couldn't complete his words as Heer snatched the spoon from his hand and fed him "Dikhai de raha hai k tum khud kitna kha sakte ho...ek chammach to tumse uth nahi raha hai aur kehte ho k khud kha loge...ab chalo baate band karo aur muh kholo

(Yaa I can see how much you can do by yourself...you are not even able to catch a spoon and you're telling that you can feed by yourself...c'mon stop talking and open your mouth).

Prem smiled and agreed...Heer was feeding him and Prem was constantly staring him without blinking...after the dinner Heer gave him his medicines and was about to go when she felt her wrist caught by Prem...she turned and found him again staring her.

"Kuch chahiye? she asked. (Need something?)

"Yaha baitho...baat kari hai Prem said pointing to his side on the bed...Heer silently sat on the bed casting her gaze downwards.

(Sit down...I wanna talk to you).

"Tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya Prem took her hands in his and said.

(You didn't answer my question).

Heer looked at him confusingly and asked "Kaunsa sawal? (What question).

"Tum raat bhar yaha thi?' Prem asked looking straight in her eyes. (You were here... whole night?)

she could feel the intensity of his emotions...she couldn't take that nd lowered her gaze and simply nodded.

"Kyun? (Why?) Prem asked again and that was it...the tears made their way from Heer's eyes.

"Hey Heer...kya hua...tum ro kyun rahi ho?...maine kuch...kuch galat pucha kya...Heer...bolo to sahi hua kya? Prem asked genuinely concerned...he was continuously rubbing her back trying to console her.

(Heer what happened??...why are you crying?...did I say something wrong...Heer plz at least tell what happened?)

After sometime she stopped crying but still sobbed.,,,Prem wiped her tears and again asked "Bolo na Heer...kya hua?

(Plzz tell what happened?)

Heer replied between her sobs "Tumhe...tumhe pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi...jab bheg...bhegne se thand lag jati hai...to kyun..kyun bheege...agar tumhe serious kuch ho...ho jata to...kya karti main...meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...I... she agin started crying.

(You...you know how scared I was...when you...you catch cold...then...then why you got drenched...if something would have happened to you the...then what would I do...i was almost dead...i...)

Prem immediately hugged her close to his heart.. " Shh shh...kuch nahi hua mujhe dekho...plzz rona band karo.

(Shh shh...see nothing has happened to me...plzz stop crying).

"Mujhe maaf kar do Prem...na main tumhe zabardast apne sath beegne ko kehti na ye sab hota...I am really sorry she said still resting her head on his chest.

(Forgive me Prem...if I wouldn't have forced you to get drenched with me then none of this would happened...I am really sorry).

"Heer...khud ko dosh dena band karo...are ye to bohut chhoti si baat haii...bas ab bilku ye sab baate mat socho...tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua..ok.

(Heer stop blaming yourself...this is a very small thing...from now onwards you won't think about this...nothing has happened because of you...ok).

Heer nodded...suddenly both of them realized their position and broke the hug...Heer was avoiding his gaze but Prem was busy staring her.

Prem : Suno (listen)

Heer : Hmmm.

Prem : Abhi bhi nahi kahogi? (Still you won't say?)

Heer : Kya? (What?)

Prem : Wohi jo tumhari aankhein keh rahi hai...par tum nahi. (That what your eyes are saying but not you).

Heer bushed hearing this...she clearly understood what he was trying to mention... "Mujhe nahi pata. (I don't know anything).

She was about to go but Prem suddenly pulled her and she landed on his chest...both looked at each other and the time seemed stop around them...Prem stuck a strand of hair behind her ear and said in a husky voice... "Mujhe pata hai...main keh du? (I know...shall I tell?)

Heer was so lost in his eyes that she didn't realize that she silently nodded positively...Prem smiled and took his moth near her ear... "Main tumse pyar karta hu Heer...I Love You.

As soon as the words registered in her mind she felt her heart jumped in joy...she looked at him and hugged him tightly "I Love You Too Prem...I Love You Too...main bhi tumse bohut pyar karti hun.

They broke the hug and looked at each other...it was a small eye lock which was broken by Heer... "Prem tum araam karo...main chalti hu.

(You take rest...I am going)

But Prem's intention was something else..."No...jab tak tum mere saath ho main bilkul thik hu...aur tum kaha jaogi...agar raat ko tumhari zaroorat pade to...so tum yahi rahogi...samjhi?

(No...as long as you are with me I am fine...and where will you go?...what if I need you at night...so you are staying here..understood?)

Heer tried to protest "But Prem.

"But wut kuch nhi...chup chap yaha baithi raho replied Prem and forcefully made her sit on the bed and lye down on her lap.

(No but wut...sit quietly here).

Heer smiled and stroked his hair while Prem slept peacefully on her lap...she kissed his forehead and soon herself drifted to a peaceful slumber.

The End.

Done with this chapter guyz...do read and tell you like it or not...next part will be posted soon...till then bye and take care.

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