Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai-Epilogue Updated on 16/11/2018 (page 15)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hellopeople...as I have said here I am with my very first story of Premeer...theeternal love birds...the true soulmates...it has been 10 years but still wemiss them like crazy...because we love them like crazy...they are a part ofour family...so I am trying to recollect some of their memories...thestories/story will be mostly on serial track...but with my version...withlittle changes...I hope you guys will cooperate with me by reading nd giveyour opinion by commenting...the stories will be either one shot (OS) or shortstories (SS)...so here we go...



Premeer SS



DilKo...Tera Intezar Hai



Introduction-



Sothis story is basically on the very first track of the serial...where we haveseen that Lilit Juneja and Balraj Maan are childhood friends...they wantedtheir children Prem and Heer to marry each other and thus they had fixed theirmarriage in their childhood...but for his dreams Lalit went to Canada with hisfamily...20 years had passed...now Prem is 26 years old nd Heer is 24...Lalithad told Prem about his promise to Balraj...nd here Balraj also told Heerabout Lalit and Prem..and they both agreed.



Nowmy story will start from that point when Lalit decided that they are comingback to India...what if Prem and Heer would have met without anymisunderstanding and slowly they fell in love with each other...hereDaljeet(Heer's Chachi) is not negative but a little gray shaded...she doesn'twant Ashlesha(DJ's daughter) to marry particularly Prem...she just wants a richguy for her daughter...and here Veera is also not negative.



Okhere is the introduction...the characters are same as the show...now tell mewhether I should write in English or Hindi...whatever you say I will write init.



Doread and give your opinion...till thenbye TC and love you❤️❤️



Index

Part 1 page 3

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Part 2 page 5

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Part 3 page 7

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Part 9 page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sounds epic already! We're going to relive the magic! 😳

Thank you for giving us the plot in your prologue! 🤗

I can't wait to read your story... I'm glad you did small changes especially for Daljeet & Ash...
If your write some lines in Hindi, will you be able to add the English translations too?😳😃

Can't wait and all the best!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It sounds lovely! i always wondered how Prem and Heer's love story would develop if its wasnt the typical Ekta drama. looking forward to this!

also...i'm totally fine with a combo of english and hindi...i actually some dialogues in hindi because the words have more depth...but i love reading stories that uses english descriptions bc its my first language and helps me read faster
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome!
This would be so good! It would have been nice had there not been unnecessary misunderstandings!

I'm glad that you will be writing something about that! I am really excited to read it!

Thank you for the PM!!!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This sounds really interesting. how prem and heer's love story progress without any MUs on identity..
please do write sunz.i will prefer english with dialogues in hindi ^_^
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Whichever language is fine - I'm abke to follow either one.
Sounds cool with the changes you mentioned.

Amazing to see new writer in our forum yay 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hey pls do write .i want to read a postive ss on premeer badly. English and hindi both are fie for me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Helo dear. Im looking forward to read ur story. Looks interesting. Wont be regular here. But will surely catch up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sweetchick.

Sounds epic already! We're going to relive the magic! 😳


Thank you for giving us the plot in your prologue! 🤗

I can't wait to read your story... I'm glad you did small changes especially for Daljeet & Ash...
If your write some lines in Hindi, will you be able to add the English translations too?😳😃

Can't wait and all the best!





Thank you Maria for encouraging😊❤️...i'll try my best...and as far as the language is concerned I've decided to write in Hindi with English translations😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sweetchick.

Sounds epic already! We're going to relive the magic! 😳


Thank you for giving us the plot in your prologue! 🤗

I can't wait to read your story... I'm glad you did small changes especially for Daljeet & Ash...
If your write some lines in Hindi, will you be able to add the English translations too?😳😃

Can't wait and all the best!




Thank you Maria for encouraging😊❤️...i'll try my best...and as far as the language is concerned I've decided to write in Hindi with English translations😳😳

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