FF*ll Meri Kahanill* part 4a(heer's POVupdatedPg11 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiiii
thank you for updating soon
its' very goooooooooood
i'm jus loving heer in ur ff
she's so cool
your style is brilliant
continueee sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi alisha how r u?
wow its really amazing.i really like urs writting style.wait 4 the next update soon.
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiiiiiiiii

love your ff...........its cute........and the style of writing is different too.....continue soon! and cant wait till prem and heer meet!

eagerly waiting

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i just read it .its really very very nice..plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnxx guyss.. those of yuh who liked my ff..
okai here is my next part
Part III
8:30 am (((( Alarm))))) Oh! shoot , its 8 already?? what happened to my alarm.... who cahnged the time.... MEHER!!!!!!!!!! uth Meher ....tune alarm kaa time change kyun kiya.. tujhe pata hain naa ghar mein kitna kaam hain .. ajj..! hain bhagwaan mujhe Mandir bhi jaana hai.. uthja jaldi.... jab tak Mein Mandir se wapas naa aau.. Maa ko help karna thik.. chal chal utjaa jaldi se
"Bas! di sirf 5 min please!!!"
"Nahi Meher ajj waise hi Der ho chuki hain.. uthjaa warna main tujh pre pani fekoon go haa??"
"Nahi dii pani nahi.. thik hai mein Maa ki help karrongi.. jaao aap mandir!!! "
Then I took shower, got ready .. went down stairs then as always bauji !!
Heer!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Bauji meine aap se kitni baar kaha hain... mandir jaate waqt piche se maat tokiye," i said in a furious way.
" Sorry beta woh mein chahata tha ki tum aaj ghar mein hi raho," he said.
"Main jaldi aajaungi ki Bauji... , I said that and left in hurry as i was already late.
When i was on the way .. well not soo far from my home, I saw big black MErcedes stopping putside my house. Then i saw Lalit uncle and gayatri aunty coming out of it along with two boys and a girl.
"Oh! they are already here, i better Hurry up and go to mandir and return fast, " I thought to myself and ran towards the mandir.... Oh! no its Monday.. how could i forget .. there is a huge line , Oh god.. why today.... Mandir taak aake wapad bhi nahi jaa sakti.. kyaa karoon...
Then luckily i saw my friends on the fromnt og the line waving at me... " wohoo! god i know you are doin this, i thot to myself and waved them back... and went towards them..
"Thank God! you guys are here otherwise i had to stay in line for another 1 hour," i said to them
"Par aaj tuh kaise late hogayi heer? hamesha toh tuh hum se pehel aa jaati thi," one of them asked.
I told them whatever happened and why I was in a hurry.. Ya ya !! they teased me by saying if I was hecka excited to see my soon-to-be-husband... i were teasing me more and more when they actually saw my face turning red.
It was turn for our aarti.. we performed it and took prasad. them y firends left but before leaving they said , " We'll not leave yuh soo easily heer, you have to say us everything later."
I smiled, I know I have to say them everything, can't hide anything from them .. they are my bestiies...
Uff them i came out of my dream , when someone bumped into me and dropped all my thali. (there is one problem eith me .. i can't control my anger .. especially when someone spoils my favourite dress 😭😭) and there yuh go i started, What!!!!!! can't you see?"
"Umm i think you should be looking up when you walk.. i think you know that! " He replied me bak
"What do you mean,?" I looked up and said .
" You know what i mean.. i don't think you are that dump, are you ? " He replied me back again!!
"Excuse me!!!!! Oh. so you bumped into me .. just to make me realise how should i be walking?" i
asked.
Oh! you're smart."
What? i asked
Nothing, he said "Now excuse me i need to leave," then he just left.
I was just staring at him, wondering who was he, then suddenly I realised i was laaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!!!!!!
Run heer Run aaj toh bauji ki khub daant parne waali hai...
I was running running and running , my dad's so called friends were calling me but i didn't listen. well actually i listened to them but didn't stop... all i was thinking about was reaching home soon. i stopped when i saw another car parked infront of my house.. I was wondering who could it be.
I slowly entered the house , there i saw all juneja family turning their back on me and my mahan Maan family tunring towards me.. i mean at the door.
" Heer!!! aagayi beta? Arrey ye kyaa huwa?" (pointing at my dress) My mom asked me. I was about to say something then she again said ," Come i'll introduce you to all of them."
Mom kept saying their names and i added Namastey and hi back of it.. like this.... "This is Lalit bhaisaab (Namastey), This is Gayatri Bhabhiji (Namastey) Inki beti Veera ( HI) .. Inka beta Preet (Hi).. Harman (Hi) aur yeh hai Prem (Hi). ( What!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was shocked seeing Prem , he was the same guy i fought with in Mandir...
Prem smiled at me and said ," Hi! "
Omg!!! what a smiled he has,,, a million dollar smile. I was sudddenly dreaming about his smile them my mom interrupted , " Heer!! jaa beta kapde change karke aaja...dekh kitne gande hogaye hain."
I saw my clothes and looked at prem , he was smiling... then i said, " Thik hai maa,"and said that and ran towards my room but before that i again gave a quick glance at Prem who was undoubtedly looking at me.
I changed the dress but made sure it suited me well. then , when i went downstairs, I saw only Prem and Preet., where did the rest of them go> I was being really shy to go to the drawing room but had to.
When I was going down. Prem turned back and smiled at me ( How can I tell him don't smile at me like that otherwise i'll loose my senses) Wait!!!!!!! but how did he know i was there..!! anyways.. i walked towards them and asked ," Where did they all go?"
Then preet replied who was looking down at his phone '" They went to your cousin's home to meet them OFCOURSE!! " and laughed
"Oh! i said " SO do you guys want to eat something" I asked
"No . thank you we already ate SOMETHING!! , Prem replied back.
" Can we go to our room Please, I am tired.. i wanna sleep ," Preet asked.
" Sure, common i'll show you your room." Preet and prem followed me. First of all i showed Preet and Harman's room which was right beside our New room..... until they leave..
"Wow this room is awesome.. nahi PB ," Preet said. Common PB lets go in.."
"Nahi! i said ( it sounded as if i didn't want Prem to leave right now .. but i wasn't relly thinking that 😳) ye kamra srif aapka aur Harman ji kaa hai. Inka Kamra Udhar hai," I continued.
Oh toh bhaiyaa ko special karma hmmmm , chalo bhaiya moj karo.. aakhir is ghar k hone waale damaad toh thehere.. khaatir daari toh milni hi hain ," ( what did he juss say!!!! whatever that was it made my face turn red) Okay, me sleeping for sometime.. Bye ! he said and left
Preet went to his room leaving us both speechless..and alone .. i couldn't face him after what Preet said.
Finally i turned towards Prem *smiled* (as if nothing had happened ) " Common i'll show you ur room, I said..
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- updated From below!!!! part 3 continues here
I started walking and PRem followed me . I opened the door of my room and said him, " Here this is your room, umm actually its my room and don't mess around."
He turned back and amiled at me. His smile was priceless and anyone can melt down. He was looking outside the window which revealed the best view of Ambala.
" Beautiful" , he whispered.
" Isn't it thats why its my room ," I replied.
He turned back to me again and started moving closer to me.
My heartbeat was increasing with everystep of his. I couldn't understand what to do. I was there standing still and he moving towards me. within no time , he was standing an inch away from me . He brought his face closer to mine, my heartbeat increasing . I was all numb ( what is he doin?) was all i could think, then coming close to my ears he whispered, " i was talking abt you," and gave me a kiss on my cheek.
( Omg!! he really did that ) I looked at him .. he was smiling .... My face was burning hot.. i knew what it looked like .. then again he whispered ' " Tasty Apple cheek."
I didn't know what to do... i just pushed him back and ran towards Meher's room. i nopticed his eyes were following me. Until i closed the door . I was out of breathe , his warm breathe on my ears felt different in a good way. ( What!! i am already attracted to him????? ) anyways i m liking him .. why not he is my soon-to-be-husband. *( Thank you god!! For sending my Prince to me.)* I was still remembering the moment again and again .. which i actually felt was dream .. untill i heard the door bell.
Unwillingly i opened the door of Meher's room to go down... as soon as i did.. there again i saw PRem standing .. as if he knew i will come out of the room to open the main door... He was staring at me continuously .....
I smiled at him and ran downstairs ... wonder who it was.... It was Meher....
" Hi!! Di..... ," she said hugging me. then she saw prem upstairs looking at us.
"Who is he? " she whispered .
" Prem! ", I said.
" He is Prem... Jiju !! Hmmmmm nice very nice " she said.
( Nice what nice was she talking about ???)
" Hey!! Prem Jiju!!," she yelled.
I couldn't look at Prem but heard him say Hi! to Meher
" Did you like your room?" she asked.
" Yaa.. actually its very beautiful," He answered bak..
" Yaa . coz its dii's room," Meher replied
"thats why," he said.. ( I turned towards him as soon as he said that and he wa smiling like always )
"AHem ahem !! somethings happening... okay excuse me .....", She teased us..( I told yuh guys before she doesn't leave any chance to tease me )
I pulled Meher towards the kitchen , to say her , " Chup bhet Meher, kyaa bol rahi hain,"
She yelled ," Kyun?? Mein kuch galat kaha kyaa bolo,".
" Bas... Chup bhet Meher..," I commanded her.
"Ok," she agreed.
"Excuse me !" ( meher and I turned back) It was Preet.
"yes, Preet," I said.
" Ji! Woh pani, " he said.
"meher preet ko pani de ! " I asked Meher.
" Why ?? Why can't you give.. You Are right infront of the refrigerator."
" Actually mujhe nahi Prem bhaiya ko pani chahiye tha ! " Preer said in a confused voice.
( My heart starts racing whenever i hear Prem's name)
"Ab toh khud dedo pani " Meher teased me again.
I turned towards the refrigerator to get the water but when i turned back to Preet and banged with someone.. I looked up, It was PREM!!!!! Omg!! What am i gonna do?? He was leaning towards me more closer than before. I looked behind his back if Preet or Meher were there.... but they were gone.....Prem kept his hand on my waist and pulled me towards him, My head lay on his head.. He hold me more tight...
"AAhhh!! " he yelled
" What happened?" I asked him...
The Bottle is very cold.. he said
He laughed and so did I ( and ok. here itgoes romantic moment ) But i was wrong , he took the bottle from my hand and kept aside. He again held me tight and leaned forward to kiss me and YES!!!!!!!!!! My first ever kiss.. Then he whipered on my ears , " Will you marry me?" I Love you... From the first day i saw you at the temple.. i was lost.. i knw its you i was waiting for.. I need You. because i love you.. "
the moment he said that was like a dream .. a beautiful dream .. from which i don't wanna wake up .. he hugged me tight as if he felt he'll loose me if he let me go... we were hugging eachother.. i was lost.... I was out of breathe i don't know what was happening... But when i came to my senses back.. it was prem kissing me again... we broke apart when we heard my Maa.. bauji calling our name.
We both came out of the kitchen and the most obvious question in the world came up ," What were you two doin in the kitchen ,?"
" I came to Drink water," Prem said ( The most obvious answer in the world)
Everyone rolled their eyes and looked at eachother with a big smile and ofcourse they knew what was happening.
Prem looked at me and smiled and i did too... coz i didn't had any options.
Then someone broke the silence by announcing our engagement.. It was Daljeet Chachi ( She is my chachi.. she loves us very much.. oh!! she is ashlesha's mom)
" badhai ho!! badhai!!! pandit ji ne saadhi ki taarikh pakki kar di hain.... woh bhi kal ki!! " ( kal ki?? Itni jaldii .. .. thats what i was thinkin and my mom said the same think... aww she is sooo my mom)
Maa: Kal ki?? Itni jaldi
Gayatri aunty : Toh kyaa huwa hum saab milne kaam karenge toh sab thik hojaayega.... Chalo chalo kaam karte hain....
They all left for shopping and some of them to kitchen .. Prem came to and said " Tomorrow is our first step of being eachother's forever.. Love You" Thats what he said and left .. i stood there letting my eyes follow him and thinking its not dream ..!!!!!
part 4 will be updated soon.. thank you for liking my ff
Edited by alisha_harshad - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kamal_23

really nice continue soon

Kamal

thank you soo much...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
i just read all the 3 parts it's very nice
Awesum FF
do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely ff
enjoyed the part immensely
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi alisha
amazing update...............u describe all the things very nicely.................very well written.wait 4 the next update soon.
thanks 4 the pm.
luv
fatima
Edited by -fsn- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part so heer is quite short temperd luvd dat ds time update asap

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