FF*ll Meri Kahanill* part 4a(heer's POVupdatedPg11 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever

it was awesome. i was wondering if you could write from prem's pov also. update sooooooon..

umm i thot of writing from Heer's Pov .. all the story... but as yuh asked i'll try writing from prem's Pov... but will need some time....
and thank you for liking!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tadashi, Kamal_23, v_nikhita18, premeer4rever, 9rpatel, Iqbal Neha1, -fsn-, -Pooji-, thank you guyss for liking my FF.. i'll part for relly soon thnxx again!!1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
lol prems desperate :P
nice update... plzz update sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momana

lol prems desperate :P
nice update... plzz update sooon

thnxxx for liking it.. i'll update ASAP
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow
that was real fast
loved it anyway
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part IV........ ( This part is from Prem's point of View.. From the time when he first talked to Heer on phone... hope yuh guys remember that .... it will be long till the time when their engagement was fixed.. or till the part where Part III ended... On this part you'll be able to see how prem felt . abt everything.... the dialouge.. of Prem and heer will be same.. but Prem's feeling will be different.. i hope yuh guys got it what i meant..... )

I am in India for my business meeting, My family are in Canada. They have been living in Canada since when i was a small Kindergarten Kid... Look the time has passed soo fast. now i m handling my dad's business. I was goin thru my papers .. then suddenlt my Phone rang.... It was Bauji.. Mr. Lalit Juneja....
" Hello! Bauji," I said after picking up the phone.
"Prem Beta! Maine yeh kehene k liye phone kiya tha ki hum sab India aarahe hai.. Tuh kal wapas Canada aaraha tha na.. wahi ruk jaahum aaj raat ko pohach jaayenge," He said.
" Lekin ! bauji yese achanak??" I asked.
"Meine tujhe bataya tha na mere ek dost k baareme .... Uski Beti aur teri saadhi ke baare mein. Ab tuh bhi business kar raaha hai. usne bhi padhai puri karli hogi. toh!! teri maa aur maine socha k un logo se mille aur baat karle," he replied.
I know they said about heer, I remember her, we used to be good friends, but without knowing her feeling.. what she thinks about me how can i accept this.. I need to know her first )
"Main tujhe balraaj ka number deta hoon unko call kar ke bata dena thik hai," He continued.
"Thik hai Bauji main karloonga," I said.
he gave me the number and said me to call them immediately . SO, i dailed the number.
Then someone from the other side answered the phone and said, "Hello! Heer Maan here...."
*( Heer!!! wow i was thinking about her and was hopin she would answer the phone and indeed that happened.... Yes!! ) : Hello ! main Juneja House ludhiana se bol raha hoon (she remained silent and same with me), then again i said ,Ji! Main Prem Juneja bol raha hoon.. Maine ye kehene k liye phone lkiya tha ki, Mere bauji aur Maa aaj raat India aane waale hain toh.. hum bhi unke saath hi kal apke yaha aayenge.. hope aap logo ko pata ho.," ( she was still silent as if she was thinking what to reply.. then suddenly i heard her breathe) and say, " Aap kyaa akele India aaye huwe ho?"
( I don't know why but i was really happy she asked me this.. may be i felt she was concerned about me being alone ) Then i said, " Ji! Main kal hi aaya tha. kuch kaam se. tph aap balraaj uncle ko kehedijiyegaa.. Toh mein rakhta hoon.. Aur haan Kal subha jaldi aajayenge."
(Nahi heer Phone mat rakho... I wanna talk to yuh more and listen ur sweet voice ..Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! )
"Thik hai .. Mein bata doongi," she said.
How I wish she didn't keep the phone down. I felt she was there.. there wishing the same.. wishing i could talk to her again... thats why i said , " Hello ! are you still there?" But Alas she didn't reply back .. I thot she already disconnected the phone.. but to my surprise i was right.. she was there.... she replied, "Woh!! Woh!! Mein.. achcha Mein mandir jaa rahi hoon.. bye!!!"
"Bye!! See yuh soon....." (can't wait to see yuh)
I didnt want to keep the phone down but had to *smiles*
Then suddenly i heard someone calling me from behind..."Hey!! PB.. Kiska Phone tha" It was Preet
"Heer!!" I said
"Kyaa??" Koun?? He asked me in confusion
"Woh Bauji ka Phone aaya tha, he asked me to call Balraj uncle and giv ehim the message of his arrival and mine too," Umm i changed the topic...
"what ?????? bauji is coming India , to meet his old friend, eh ?? Cool!!! actually I m enjoying our stay in India aswell... its not bad... and as Bauji is coming too I can enjoy More....," Preet said.
(Bauji always said me about Balraj uncle, like how close they were.. what things they used to fo.... but he never shared this to Preet because Preet wasn't interested in Bauji's stories but i always loved them.. Moslty because each day i used to hear the story... she explained Heer in different way.. there wasn't one day when he didn't mention Heer....I wa soo eager to meet heer from the day i heard the story.. coz i felt some attraction towards her .. wothout knowing her....without seeing her... but now it seems like dream coming too i can finally see her soo close... As preet didn't know about Bauji and Balraaj uncle's freindship soo much he also didn't kow about Heer and Mine relationship.. thts why i didn't want to say him why were mom and dad coming back to India...Let him find put himself tomorrow... but how can i wait till tomorrow.... Her voice is soo sweet. I think she is definately the one i was waiting for and the Heer i always imagined thru bauji's story. but will she too accept me?????
"Bhaiyaa!!!! "Kyaa soch rahe ho.. chalo kahi bahaar chaltey hain.. ghar bethe bethe bore hoo rahaa hoon bhaiya!! please," Preet pleaded.
"Maa.. bauji aarahe hain," i said. this to Preet but today i didn't want to go anywhere... i didn't want to do anything besides dreaming about Heer's voice... dreaming about our interaction.. how would it be.. how would i meet her.. what would i say.... Hearing only her voice made me soo intense wonder what will i do when i Meet her... she made me hers completely......
"Woh !! toh raat ko aarahe hain nah!! unke aane se pehele aajayenge bhaiyaa.., preet said again...
Now i had no option besides goin with him.....
Edited by alisha_harshad - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Hi alisha
aww its really nice to read prems POV.really this ff is v sweet u write all the things v cutely.wait 4 the full update.
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
AWESOME UPDATE
AND U SHOULD DEFINITELY CONTINUE FROM PREM'S POV!!!!!!!
AWW PREM WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!!
CONTINUE ASAP
PM ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hi alisha
aww its really nice to read prems POV.really this ff is v sweet u write all the things v cutely.wait 4 the full update.
luv
Fatima

Thank yuh Fatima!!!! u like it.. eheh thnzz

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

AWESOME UPDATE
AND U SHOULD DEFINITELY CONTINUE FROM PREM'S POV!!!!!!!
AWW PREM WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!!
CONTINUE ASAP
PM ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnxxx for liking it.... i'll surely continue wih prem's POv then thnxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
loved it in prem's pov do continue soon

Kamal

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