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@flowers4u

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

wow all i can say i just read the whole ss luved the nding

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@-Ritz-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

thank you for the update but sad to know that this was the last update. thanks once again.

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

Reserved.

I Promise to comment on all the chapters I missed!!😊

I have to say first that I hate G3!😡🤢 I cant believe that she would do something like that.. but its good to cuz now she can go and die!! and Prem will hate her. But omg Heer and Chahat?????????? Poor Prem as well. Im so glad Prem yelled at Gmonster!! Hahahahah they took Gmonster away..👏So glad that Prem totally ignored her!! I felt so bad for Prem him having to see his Heer and Chahat in the hospital like that😭

I loved the ending part.. All the problems got solved and everyone was really happy at the end..😊

I really enjoyed read this!! 😊

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Magpie

@Magpie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

Hi Jaz,

Aww...It's the concluding part already :(

Loved the ending..it was wonderful. Gayathri living alone in the outhouse was a cool idea :) They should've infact disowned and abandoned her for what she did but like you said, that would be very unlike Prem..he has a heart of gold. I feel for him...he missed his life's precious moments, his daughter's first yrs...all because of these evil incarnates...and innocent little Chahat also suffered for no fault of hers..craving father's love and not to mention how miserable Heer was..okay I'll stop my rants..hey, you asked for it :)

Can't believe one of Macbeth's 3 witches ( I like to call them that LOL)..i.e Maya turned over a new leaf !!! Awww....all the 3 getting pregnant at the same time was unexpected...it was terrific...and Premeer having twins was a bonanza....the house is now filled with a plethora of kids.

I loved every bit of this story Jaz, from start to finish. Tnx for writing this.

Luv

Meera.

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Mehvish Khan

@mehvishrainbow2

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

great SS and do write more fan fiction.Also read my fan fiction too is called Kis Desh Mein Hai Juneja Family Ka Dil

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1045886/kis-desh-mein-hai-juneja-family-ka-dil-fan-fiction

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 15 years ago

#196

Jazuuuuuuuuuu....guess whose here!!! PACHU!!! :D 😎

Aaaahhh! I finally read it!! And its a OMG...i mean literally OMG..

Wohooooo!! Finally Gayatri knows the truth about Veera and she's not in the Juneja house .... but why why why prem took her out of jail? He should've let her rot there !! She deserves that only!!! 😡

OMG...Poor Chahat and Heer...had to go through hell due to gayatri for shooting that Bullet...and how the hell does it pass through Heer COMPLETELY and hits Chahat? That can only happen in FFs!! LMAO!! That thing is hillarious Jazu!!! 🤣

OMG...all three are preggers? OMG...aur woh bhi ek saath..kya baat hain...i can imagine the expressions on all three trio's face!! PERFECT!! Hehe! 😳

Luved the SS jaani..hopefully u will write more SS and not FF's..u kno SS are short so time savers...😉😆

LUVED IT!!!👏 and are more fun as things happen super fast!!!

Aur haan...this is the best i could do..u kno wat im sayin

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#197

All I cam say is, WOW....Totally awesome!! I LOVED the ending!! It was so Beautiful!!! And superb explanation of Heer's first pregnancy, and a complete insight for what Heer went thru!! And GAYATRI!! How I love you JAz, for ending her character!! I cannot express my gratitude for you! THANK YOU for not letting Prem forgive Gayatri and bringing her back to the family!! AND THANK YOU for not making Heer act like a good bahu and asking Prem to bring Gayatri Back!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!

Overall, Awesome Ending, Superb, Mindblowing...Etc etc etc!!

Loved it!

Mahrukh

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#198

Ch 4

I love how theres so much drama and action going.. its playing in my head like a movie usually most of the FF's i read are just the romantic ones! I like how theres some action but dont like what those kidnappers are doing with Chahat😭. So the girl on the phone was Ash??? (hate her). So RR was the kidnapper how dare he?😡😡 And Ash and RR are married???????😲 Actually Ash probably deserves that!😆 Hahah that Manmeet is in there as well???😆. I felt so bad for Chahat poor girl.. had to go through all of that bcuz of RR😭 Oh man that Gmonster is there as well????😡😡🤢 and holding a gun to Chahats head? I hope Gmonster dies!!!! (Hate her as well)..