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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#171

awww that was such a sweet ending...loved it.... 👏 loved the ending when lalit was announcing the pregnancy...that was hilarious...🤣 Even though ur ff was short...I really enjoyed reading it...keep up the great work...😃

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@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#172

koi yaad dilao k mujhe comment karna hai yaha

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Yay jaz mast updt tha yaar*high 5 s u* man mai ro rahi thi this was da best SS written in dis forum eva honestly Gaya3 is EVIL must say beti kya khoyi uss k saamne bete aur us k parivaar ke vaare mai sochna munasim nahi samjha awful awful Gaya3 ......... abhi mera eye surgery hone waala hai so me g2g I'll edit my comments on ur other stories 1ce m feeling better ok???? Luvd da ending

luv ya loads.....

LeKh@

Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#173

my spot.

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Such a nice way to wrap things up.

Points I loved: the may have let Gayatri out of jail, but they refused to let her back into their lives; Maya was redeemed; the ending, with the fight between MayaMeher vs. PreetHarman. Oh how cute!

Loved the entire thing! You wove magic with this Jaz.

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago