SS: In Search of Chahat Prt5pg26 8/10 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
omg....it was so goood.dd........i cant believe its over.......its good gayatri isnt with them she deserves it...and yay all three pregnant together...that must be good....and loved all the scenes...and premeerahat scenes...it was just too cute...loved it..i cant say update soon now coz its over....hope u write more.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
😲 Its over 😆
OMG such a wonderful and lovely end.
Finally Gayatri got punishment for all her doings.All 3 j-zoo bahus pregs together that's good.Loved the description of all emotions,situations. Perfect,amazing,great,awesome.Could visualize everything.Finally what i always wanted to see Prem disgusted by Gayatri,knowing her truth.Loved premeer scene.
It was a great end.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

it was an awesome ff... loved it..wonderful...

preet and harman heers chamchas!!! woww..it was nice...

and i knew that heer will have a kid at the end..😊... but twinz..that was surprise..nice names..

and u made maya a good character..nice..

only thing i didnt like was gaya3 allowed to live at that house.. you could have sent her somewhere else...

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Posted: 16 years ago
coming straight to the update

OMG !
it was amazing....I just can't tell you how badly I want the same to happen with gayatri in the serial....she is just soo irritating 😡 lets not discuss her over here😛
you are the BEST !👏
Prem's reaction to all this was awesome
they both donated their blood😳 SWEET !!!!!!!!!!!!!
emotional scene... you are a fantastic writer
prem sitting beside heer n then chahat .......very touching (the whole scene)
I soo badly wanted this to happen in the serial that Prem gets to know how Heer was when she was expecting....you fulfilled all my wishes u rock !😃😃😃
awww.....Prem and Chahat scene was sooooooooooooo cute !😆
loved that scene....Khadoos papa😆😆
the whole family hungama was gr8 !
enjoyed reading that😃
ok....is this a FAIRY TALE or wht??
I just loved the ending...I always wanted such sort of ending every1 happy
with lodz of children and eveything prefect ......you are soooo sweet
I guess hamray khyalat miltey hain😆
I LOVED the ending👏
it was an awesome SS
you are a very good writer👍🏼
keep up the good work😊



Edited by Innocent02 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
YOU UPDATED ALL THREE FANFICS?? And finished this one? *sigh* I love you. :)

But WOW! That was totally awesome! I loved it, loved it, loved it! First things first - HAHAHAHA to Gayatri. She totally deserved that, but why of why is Prem Juneja Prem Juneja? Couldn't he leave her in jail? *hmph*

And Chahat is just so adorable. I loved how you managed to fit in the word "kadoos" in there, completly suited the situation even though they were in hospital beds. 😆

Reading the ending brough a line back to mine. "All was well." 😆 I loved how you dedicated a huge chunk to how they were all getting on with their lived! Good to see Harman happy for once. 😆

Still have two more ff's to comment on, thanks for finishing this before school starts and I REALLY loved it!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Perfect ending......I mean the whole events leading up to the happy ending were traumatic for poor Prem and company, but that only made their happy ending more enjoyable.

thanks for writing a beautiful story
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Posted: 16 years ago
Beautiful n perfect ending...👏⭐️
i felt bad tht its u r last part...😭
but the ending i liked it a lot...😃
thank god gaya3 is away frm them...😡
well they all bcame fathers ohh thts a surprise...😆😆
i was shocked to read it...😕
well on the whole i really really liked u r update...👏⭐️⭐️
it was awesome...⭐️
gonna miss it but its ok...😊
I just wanna say tht..😉
"U MADE A BEAUTIFUL STORY "🤗
n thanku too for writing it...🤗
Ok thts all 😉
bye tk cr😃

Ayesha😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey jaz
omg i loved it
awesum FF
loved the the ending
sooo cute

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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW...........that was just beautiful the story cudnt have ended better than this, i mean G3 FINNAALLLYY got wat she deserved and heer and prem got the happiness they deserve
AWESOME JOBB!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Exceelent, fantastic.... It's sad that its end. but we know that you will come up with new concept very soon.

Miyhiya

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