SS: In Search of Chahat Prt5pg26 8/10 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asap waitingggggggggggggggggg

Originally posted by: Dark Love

yayyyyyyyyyy

*back*

I'm so overwhelmed with the chapter I really don't have much to say. (quantity AND quality)

I loved how my macho men Prem and Preet were fighting *pushes Harman away*

I hope Chahat and Heer are gonna be okay! And so much action and revelations in one part, it really did go super fast 😲😆

Anyway, amazingggg chapter!

Waiting for more,
- Madiha

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

mindblowing update
continue asap
i hope heer and chahat are okay!!!!!!!!!!!!
pm me

Originally posted by: cute_bear

omg...stunning update..and i hope heer annd chahat are ok..u have to update soon

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I'll edit both spots soon! 😃

Originally posted by: aspatel2

Awesome Update!!!!!! I am so happy that Ash told truth to Prem and Heer, hopefully that happens in show tooo..

G3 I so Hate her........

I hope Chahat and Heer are ok....

pls upd. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-Axita

Originally posted by: premeer928

wow...that was amazing. 👏 I kind of guessed the rishab part...but didnt see rishab aur gay3 in the pic....hate her. loved prem, preet, and harman...rishab and manmeet so deserved it...thanks for the PM and cotninue soon.....hope chahat and heer are fine... 😊

Originally posted by: angel_60107

omg.......what a catchy update.............i didn't even blinked my eyed during my whole reading session................that was fab....i must say.............plz plz plz..........don't delay this time .....................i really want a quick update to see prem's reaction to his mother's evilness...............all the very best for ur coming update hon...........😊

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
That Was Excellent update
Ash married to rr that was UNexpected
and gay3 coming there also was UNexpected
soo much action
hope heer and chahat are okay

Originally posted by: reenasv

omg.
great update.
i can't wait till to read the next update.
pls. update soon.
i hope chahat and heer will be alright
or else i'll be after u with a gun.😆 😆

Originally posted by: natyatarlapally

*shocked* good..mission accomplished 😉

so much drama in one chapter!!...god!..this is going to take time to sink in!

all of heer and prem's enemies ganged up on them...one after another!..man!...so much for them to handle!

😲 :that was my reaction throughout the chapter!...there was one shock after another! ha ha...i told you...questions will be answered...twists will arise and more questions will develop...i told ya 😛😛😛

i seriously thought i was day dreaming the whole thing...so i had to go back and make sure that you did actually update and that i wasn't dreaming! sachi!! haha...omg...really...how crazy...but funny...and cool...😉

i didnot expect the ending though!...that was the most shocking part!...gayatri can stoop so low to keep prem and heer seperated!...kill chahat! her own grand-daughter!..bhudi ka dhimag bohot karab hai! i totally agree with you..budhi ka dimag ke koi thikana hi nahin hai...dimag gaya ghaas katne 😉😉😉

well atleast prem saw her!...poor guy..he must feel like hell seeing the gun in his mother's hand!!

I have got to see what prem's reaction will be!...for that...your going to have to update soon! lol

aweeeesome!...mind blowing( literally) chapter!! thanks for reading and commenting...next part will be up soon 😳😳😳

update soon

~nitya

Originally posted by: aati1429

oh no.. has gayatri lost herself.. how can she shoot heer!!!


amazing update..loved each bit.. i wish thye show it in show also!!!

Originally posted by: Pachu.P

OMG...you cannot do this jaz..omg..you cannot!! i can and i DID! 😈

Hailaaaa!! First of all...that "asha" girl dies..phir Rishabh coming in...to which im quite happy as i was right...hehe...aur aur i hope the police doesnt let go of him...he should b punished...and that too severely ok...FIRST OF ALL...who is 'asha'...no idea who you are talking about...and no one dies...what r u reading?

OMG...Prem sneeked in like that? :O...that's total filmy yaar..omg..i can soo imagine prem/preet/harman doin that !! hehe..!! aur police will stay police..always arriving l8..hehe..yahaan bhi l8 arrive hui...hehe..nothing new!! but glad Prem/Preet/Harman didnt get shot from behine...:) ya...police...woh bhi india ki police...mashallah...kya kahoon unke barein mein...tauba...🤢

Hailaa..Gayatri?? OMG..i should've guessed..how could i've missed her name from the "evil" list?? Sighhh!!! This is sad jaani...bechari Heer...pehle pata chala us raat kuch nahin hua that Prem aur Abhilasha ke beech aur ab yeh, Gayatri killing her...haila!! aab...yeh abhilasha kahaan se aagayi? patches...WHAT R U READING ...first you bring in new people...then kill of character that arent even there...omg...😲😲😲...of course...its you...so i should not be surprised...🥱

Dude..i really hope Prem can save Heer/Chahat..omg..if u kill any of them Jazuuu...u will not b spared either!! TRUST ME!!! aare...you are all talk...khud to NC mein baiti hai...LA tak toh aati hi nahin....*hmph* 😛

Aur haan..hopefully Gayatri will b punished for what she did..!! oh you wait and watch what i do...u know me jaani 😛


Luv'd it jaani

Continue soon 👏he he...'soon' is a relative term for me...many different meanings...😃😃😃


P.S. Hope this was "long" enough...me falling off my bed dozing...sersiouly yaar...😳 PERFECT...thank u!! 🤗...aab saachi bol...u did fall didnt u!

Originally posted by: *Guli*

😡Jaani....... I am here finally!!!!!🥳..... .and the only reason is becuz u barely just told me that you updated!!!! but anyways...... omg!!!!!!!!!!!! ok ok...kaan pakering SORRY!! 😳😳😳...next time you will be first...promise 😛😛😛

And when i say OMG.... i mean OMG!!!!!!!!!!

wat a twist and from where to where did this story go!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when you think everything is going good...... next thing u know.... G3 decides to bust out with her own crap!!!!😡!!!.. she makes me soooooo mad!!!!!!!!!!!..... he he...see...for this reaction i didnt tell you what was happening in this story...that trust me ...it was hard..i tell you EVERYTHING!!! 🤗...miss you babe...no more talk...*sigh*...😭😭😭...u know...im surprised you didnt call her a cow...😆😆😆

I mean the one good thing is that... Prem and Heer know that nothing happened..... but then once u think everything is gonna be all happy....... wat do u do??? Heer gets shot!!! ya...heer and chahat got shot...u missed that bit...he he...or else you'd be after me..literally!!! 😛😛😛


Gosh babe.... remember... next part is ur last part!!!!! *hint*... none of this dragging business..

but over all is was worth reading!!!😃 next part is definitely last part...tomorrow for sure 😳😳😳


plz cont soon!! and i mean soon... now like a year!!!😳 i think u meant *not*...not *now*....😛

Originally posted by: stunninstar

awesome update... worth the wait ... wowww.... poor heer.. that b***ch gaya3...she tried to kill chahat..?i hate her.. thanx fr the pm..wiating fr next part..😊

Originally posted by: Intellienough

I am just speechless....Very cruel...Please save Heer and chahaat...Oh I am still rooted to my place after reading the update.Only one word "Outstanding".

Originally posted by: Shruti11

my god wat an update

Originally posted by: maha_k

amazing update dear

plz update soon

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey jaz,hi...i love your name btw 😃😃

GOD!!! what an UPDATE!!!

all villians exposed.... i just cant beleive what I just read... wish same happened in the serial...

Heer is injured... but i am sure she will be OK!!! Prem hai na us ke pass...

and i just loved how you cleared up everything... amazing!!!

it was TOO GOOD!!!

waiting eagerly for next and i guess final part... yes...next part is the final part...im glad that you enjoyed this ss though...i really appreciate the comments...love reading them...you are awesome 👏

take care,

regards,

Suhana.

Originally posted by: Innocent02

awesome part 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I am completely in love with it.........the story is amazing👍🏼
very interesting and I didn't feel bored while reading it
PREM ......THE HERO😳 how cute☺️fighting for his daughter..... i want to see something like this on the show...im tired of seeing prem cry..im mean come on...heer bhi itni nahin roti 😉
I thought Prem would be veyr angry with Heer for coming there but Heer toh Heer haina.....😃
To his dismay, his daughter was just like her mother – she didn't know when to follow directions! this was kinda funny🤣ha ha..ya...just some humor to ease the tension...😛😛😛
you got the -ve characters back😃Rishab , Manmeet & Ash
Gyatri never left😒
Prem killed Rishab with his bare hands.... superb !👏Prem almost killed Rishab....dont want a murder charge hanging over his head once this is all sorted out...that would be a whole different story 😆😆😆...
saray sach samnay aa gaye..... aakhir kaar😳
I loved the last scene between gayatri and Heer
I thought Prem would get shot n all but Heer got shot that was amazing (Its not that I like it but according to the story 🤣)
the story ahead with be great with this twist.
Prem will of course never forgive gyatri😆yaar...aage aage dekho...what i do to this budhi!!! 😡😡😡 i hate her...i actually HATE her 🤬
did Chahat also get shot or she just fell down ? chahat actually got shot as well...next part will clear everything 😃😃

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

wow!!! interesting update.... waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: Ayesha24

Mind blowing...👏reminds me of that "mind blowing mahiya" song 😆
I really liked it...😃
I loved all the scenes...😳
All the villains exposed...😃
prem preet n harman fought with rishab n manmeet...👏
n thank god ash told the truth...😲
n prem knows now tht gaya3 has shot gun on heer n chahat now he vil do...😲
I hope heer n chahat r fine...😉
cant wait to c wht vil hpn...😛
Update soon...⭐️im glad that you enjoyed the update...i told you this part would be very action packed...i hope i delivered properly...next part up very soon 😳😳😳


Ayesha😉

Originally posted by: shabo24

Holy sh*t. So much to read, so much to say, don't know where to start. kahin se bhi...i love your comments... 😳😳

That part was like .. I don't know, a huge wave or something, completely knocks you over. Literally, every word penned down was written so amazingly. It was just awesome. aww...baas karo...you are too sweet ...im so blushing...😳 but thank u 😃

AH HA! Gayatri wasn't involved directly in the plan but she was still there and played an important part no? I am so DISGUSTED with her actions but in AWE of your writing! I honestly think, out of everything FF you wrote, this was the best part yet! no she wasnt directly involved...but she kinda took the cake...rishab and stuff just kidnapped...yeh budhi ho...shot her bahu and poti 😡...thanks luv...im so glad you liked it...😳😳😳

Is it just me? I'm under the impression this is the last part. :S:S If it was, I FREAKING LOVED IT! aare yaar...how can this be the last part...Heer and Chahat are lying bleeding to death...i have to do something naa...one more part...then the end...promise 😳😳😳

--shabz

Originally posted by: Star-Crazy

that was such a long part 👏

and i loved every bit of it thanks...you are so sweet... 😳

dont worry

i aint gonna run with a gun after you😆

but i feel like running after gayatri with one

so many revelations in one chapter

am glad it all came out

hope heer and chahat are fine

dont wanna prem to be more upset than he already is

plz update soon

cant wait for the next chapter

and when you do update plz pm me...

one more thing-

plz dont tell me this is the last chapter

you have to make one more

this cant be the end😭 no no yaar...relax...there is one more part...how can i just end there...that is just not fair...next part will be up soon...im PM as soon as it is ready... 😃...thanks for reading 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot.

Someone, remind me to unreserve.

*edited* OMFG Jaz. Oh.My.Effing.God!

And that sums up my reaction.

Update soon!

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: yoyojazzy

that was alsome ..........................it was an alsome update.........cant6 wait for ur next one

ravina

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

wow, what an intense story..

its awesome!

Originally posted by: meiskan

Fantastic update!! omg - so many bad guys 😲 ! That was a real shocker..but in a good way ! Seriously, my mom was calling for me at the back of the room and i couldnt hear her because i was so mesmerized by the update 😆 ( thats the only word i can think of at the time 😆 ) . I totally didnt expect the gol gappa g3 to be there!! And she SHOT Heer....😲 Ahhahah really unexpected! All in all a superb update! It was good the see the Juneja boys in action 😃 !

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

thanks for wonderful ff
i loved it
i cant express my feelings its awesome story
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz could u update the next part asap and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me frnd