[FF] The Handmaiden's Tale [Part 16, Pg 44] [3/8]

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hey
awesum part
heer dreams hmm
loved it every bit of it
tooo goood
thankz for pm

Edited by pooji123456789 - 16 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

moo!

*edited*

I am not using an animal sound ever again. 😆 Why'd I moo?

Anyways, love the bit. Loved the dream, it's so enticing, pulls you straight into the story. And you know I love the way the story is going to move, so nothing more to say but update soon! 😆

Love,

Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Bhav,

Splendid, superb, intriguing! I am slowly becoming a fan of ur writing. This concept itself is so unique that it has grasped my interest right from the beginning. It almost has an aura of an ethereal feeling. Almost looks like really a dream will come true!

Will look forward to the next part. Thanks for the PM.

Lana.

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*lucky_karen*

@*lucky_karen*

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hey bhav! ooo what a start👏...i loved the dream sequence with heer n the mystery guy😉 who im pretty sure we can all guess who it is😆😉..the funny thing is i get soo many of those dreams where i find myself waking up n saying no no keep dreaming! 😆😳 so i kind of saw glimpses of myself..haha...but i cant wait for the next part..ive got my theories about what her dad has to say to heer but we will see in ur next update and looking forward to the intro of meher!😃...thanks so much bhav for writing for us!😃

- karen

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey , awesome update.
loved each and every part of it very much.
cont.soon.

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
Are you serious Bhav? 😆 I'll hopefully remember!

Honey, I solemnly swear that I am not serious. *nods solemnly*

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

wow!😛wht a dream...beautiful😳 luvved the way u explaind👏👏👏.waiting for nxt pt......😍

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Ribbet!!

*EDIT ADD*

Hehe, I just LOVE the second name!! Reminds me of SRK!! 😍😍😍 Excuse me whilst I drift off into my dreamland!! 😆

*slaps herself across head* Okay, back to your FF- wow, you already have me captivated just by the first part. It is really intriguing, can't wait to read more!! That dream was really interesting to read, especially after reading Heer's character sketch. She runs from marriage, yet she still has these vivid yet incomplete dreams. Ooooh, I am really looking forward to see how this progresses!! Great start- I loved it!!

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

w - o - w.

Is there a genre that you can't write? That was just flawless, the descriptions of the most minute details, just WOW...I loved it and seems like Heer trusts no one other then Meher (to an extent) ? Can't wait for the next part!

--shabz