[FF] The Handmaiden's Tale [Part 16, Pg 44] [3/8] - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bd670816

hey,
the concept is very unique and loved the character sketch very much. Hey! Thank you! 😃
can't wait for the first update. First part shall be up in a couple of hours!
cont.soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's Monday! And guess what that means? Yes, after a wait of two agonizing days, there is FINALLY going to be KDMHMD tonight! And hopefully there'll be Meet scenes too...I practically suffered from MWS (Meet Withdrawal Syndrome) last week, but luckily I managed to cure it by WRITING! Okay, yes, it also means that I'm updating my stuff today. So here we have Part ONE of The Handmaiden's Tale! Enjoy!

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The Handmaiden's Tale, or Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye

Part One

Heer looks around. This place is familiar. Oh no, she thinks as realization sinks in. It's the dream again.

She is in a manor, very much like her own. Doors adorn the walls on either side. Heer tries each one, but the doorknobs disintegrate at her touch.

At the end of the corridor lies another door. There is nothing distinct about it, nothing that makes it different from any of the other doors. But Heer knows that only that door will open. And she also knows what lies inside.

She slowly makes her way to the door. Her fingers trail along the wall, and like the doorknobs, they too disintegrate, expanding her space until there is nothing but the door left.

She touches the doorknob gingerly, afraid it will crumble even as she knows it will not. She has been here before, many, many times in the past few months.

Just as she is about to turn the doorknob, the door opens on its own. She pulls her hand back sharply; this has never happened before.

She looks into the room. It is hazy, as though a mist has forsaken its place in the marshes and camped out in the room. She steps in.

There is an indistinct figure of a man near the window. She can see him turn to her, but she cannot see him. Not clearly.

He is indistinct. He is incomplete. There are only fragments of him visible clearly to her: a hand, a smile, a twinkling eye, and so on.

She tries to get closer. She reaches out for him, thinking that maybe if she touches him he will become real.

But she cannot move.

She tries to ask him who he is.

Her lips move, but no sound comes out.

No sound but for a brisk knocking. She frowns. She tries to speak again. More knocking.

She looks up at the man as the dream fades. Her eyes widen in panic. No. No, it can't end, not now. Not until I find out who he is!

But it is too late. The dream is gone.

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The dream was gone.

Heer's eyes fluttered open. For a moment, she was disorientated. She looked around herself, sitting up on her four-poster bed. She felt herself relax as she took in the all-too-familiar surroundings of her bedroom.

The knocking on the door was louder now.

"Lady Heer? My Lady, are you awake?"

"Yes, I'm up, thank you," Heer called out, sinking back onto her numerous silk-covered pillows.

The door opened by a smidge. The face of Heer's handmaiden appeared through the crack.

"Your father requests your presence downstairs as soon as possible, Lady Heer," she said.

Heer sat up again and looked at her. She sighed heavily. She nodded. "I'll be there soon."

It was the handmaiden's turn to nod. "Yes, My Lady."

"Aur suno," Heer called. The handmaiden paused. "Send Meher in."

"Yes, My Lady." The handmaiden closed the door, leaving Heer alone once again.

Sighing, she sank back down into her pillows, wondering what her father wanted with her.

-|end of part one|-

Ta-dah! Part One of The Handmaiden's Tale, or Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye. The title actually came to me just this morning, but I figured changing it now would be a little confusing. So I did what Shakespeare did with his Twelfth Night, or What You Will and make it The Handmaiden's Tale, or Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye. Part Two will be up on Thursday, and until then, have a great week ahead!

Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
woof! 😛

*unreserved*

Love both the names of the ff's Bhav! 😳😳 I'm partial to Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye, cus of the song!😆😆😆

Ohh her dream was awesome!!!😳 I hate those types of dreams though, where you can see someone waiting for you, but as you step closer the face gets blurrier and blurrier till poof he disappears!😆

Anyways--sigh four poster bed, I love reading about those for some reason!😆 sound so grand!😃 Oh and before I forget, the way you described the whole dream was really surreal Bhav, very realistic, all mistyfied!😉😳😆

Can't wait for Meher's intro, as well as of course our two boys!😉😃😳

Update soon Bhav! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

mine!!!!!! =D

Ok, i'll try my best to remeber using animal sounds everytime i reserve from now on for both your FF's. I've been going for different types of dances lately though *shrug, don't ask why*!!!!!! Anything for you though!!!!! *hug* 😉😆
OMG, i'm sooooo excited for this FF!!!!! Eeeeek!!!!! Early 19th century is a good time!!!!! I really like it!!!!!
Oooooh, Heer is having a dream about her sapno ka rajkumar eh?????? Well don't worry Heer, Bhav is going to bring him into your life soon!!!!!! (at least i hope so) *fingers crossed*
I wish i had numerous silk pillows *pouts* that would be so nice!!!!! And someone coming and gently knocking on my door and calling me my lady instead of my dad shouting at me to get up at six in the morning everyday!!! Sometimes, my mum even pours water on my face to wake me up (stop laughing, it's not funny) *pouts*!!!!! It's a hard life for us normal people!!!!!
Anyways, i'll stop my monologue now!!!!! 😳😆 I can't wait till Thursday!!!!!! Please Thursday, have some pity and come quickly!!!!!
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Quack =)
I love both the names😃
Ooh she's been having weird dreams? And there's a guy? I bet it's Prem😃 At first I was like is this going to be a nightmare type of dream (cuz I was reading a book where this girl had nightmares. Can't remember the name now😆 Anyway, too bad her handmaiden came before Heer could see his face and woke her up. I'm guessing she'll have this dream again?
I wonder why Heer's dad's calling her...Ooh is a guy gonna come to see her? I bet she already knows and is going to plan something with Meher😃
Can't wait to read the next one =)
-Duck😎
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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P.S. I've been dying to do this, so here goes!

From here on, anyone else who's reserving posts must do it with an animal sound! Meow, woof, purr, hiss, cheep, quack, etc etc etc! 😛🤣 It'll make me laugh.
Or, you know, don't...doesn't make too much of a difference! 🤣
Love,
Bhav ;D
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
Are you serious Bhav? 😆 I'll hopefully remember!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow...um ok. I'll got edit my post then😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Bhav.. dont know how I missed this... but better late than never right.. while reading the prologue I was just in awe because you are adding spices of one of my fav. comedies midsummer night's dream... I loved your prologue a lot...


1st part was amazing... so who's in Heer's dream?* scratching head*... i hope we find that out soon😉...
post soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
Updated my comment!!! quack =D!!!

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