[FF] The Handmaiden's Tale [Part 16, Pg 44] [3/8]

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Bhav, I'm loving this. I am a huge fan of period novels, and this reminds me of something Judith McNaught would write.

I haven't been leaving feedback on anyone's FFs lately, but I just HAD to come comment on this one...

Needless to say, I'm looking forward to more. Please forgive me if I don't leave comments on the upcoming parts though. As it is, I hate to leave chindi comments like the one I'm leaving now, and I am short on time to actually leave a longer comment. Rest assured that when I find time (and, once I've replied to the other FFs that have been awaiting a comment from me for...going on months now), I will come back to this and leave you a long comment that I hope, will be worth the wait.

Thanks agian.
Love,
~P

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*lucky_karen*

@*lucky_karen*

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

hey bhav!! second time today lol😆..loved this part..esp since this FF is soo diff👏😃...meher is soo sweet..never was she jealous of heer😛..ahaha i love heer she is awesome!..reminds me of kajol in pyar kiya to darna kya..where she scares the guys off...lol..😆😆 but im sure this suitor is here to stay😳 cant wait till they meet!!😳..and i wanna see preet in this quick!!😆-karen

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

My Spot!!

*EDIT ADD*

Great update as usual Bhav- I loved it!! 😃 Heer is one fiesty character no? I love her already!! 😆 The Heer-Meher interaction was great. Meher comes across as quite intimidated by Heer- a bit cautious around her!! 😆 I really cannot wait until the Junejas make their entry- but I know you are not going to give us that so easily- so I guess I will just have to wait with all the patience I can muster!! 😆 So Heer is going to try and drive away Prem- I hope Prem gives as good as he gets!! 😉

Sorry for such a short comment- did not have much time on my hands!! Looking forward to the next part!!

Love Zahra 🤗 xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

waltz! =) ............. ooooooooh, i just remembered!!!

Ribbet! =D Hey!!!! I like doimg animal noises and you can't stop me!!!! So there!!! *humph* 😡 😉 😆

I'll send my full name and some other info by PM!!!!! I feel like a such a poiled child!!!! 😳 Shifu put me in KK/Twilight, Meeru's putting me in Never fade away and now you in this!!!!! I feel like a died and went to heaven!!!! 😆 But on a more serious note, i really do appreciate it and i wish i had the time to write ff's to show my appreciation for you guys!!!!

I would love to write Premeer FF's, but i'm in the IB program and the ONLY thing other than studying, sleeping, bathing and eating i do is come on this forum!!!!!! I just wouldn't be able to commit to it!!!! 😒

Anyways, moving on to the story........ 😆!!!!! I love Heer's room, it sounds so summery due to the colour scheme!!! 😆 It seems Heer is quite popular with the guys eh !?!?!? I'm not suprised!!!! 😆 Ok, seriously, corsets were made to torture women!!! It's just one more way to test a women's patience. If it's too tight it hurts like a bi**h!!!!!!

I like how Heer is so stubborn!!!! It's funny but at the same time makes me proud becuase she won't just give herself up to someone who only wants a trophy wife!!!! Go Heer!!!! 👍🏼 Is Meher hiding something from Heer or what !?!?!? 😕

ROFL!!!!! Here we go again!!!! Poor Meher and Heer's father!!! But our Heer doesn't realize he isn't just another suitor!!!!!! He is 'THE PREM'!!!!! 😆 Will they meet in the next part !?!?!? I hope so..... what about Meet!!!!!!

Great chapter and i can't wait till the next one!!!!! *hug*

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
waltz! =) ............. ooooooooh, i just remembered!!!

Ribbet! =D

Hahahahaha you don't have to do that anymore! 😆

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egle

@egle

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Introduction still ongoing..cool.....😊

Prem and Preet next?🤗

" Meher abandoned her position at the bed to help Lady Heer lace up the back of her corset." <--- Those things are devices made to torture women into fitting the ideals of a man....or society😆. I pity Heer. 😆

~Cheers😎

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

wow, amazing update. i am eagerly waiting when prem and heer met.
cont.soon.

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

You are awesome! 😳 I love the way you write it...I do feel like I'm transported into that era! 😳😃

I wish I had a silk screen, I only have a mosquito net, and no...we don't have mosquito's here, but it just makes me feel more princessy! 😳

Awww she has to wear corsets? I wore one...once....wanted to DIE! 😆

I love the way Heer was asking about Prem! 😳 Very cute...and this line made me laugh""Let's see if Lord Prem Juneja will still want me as his wife after he's met me." " Makes me wonder what this girl is going to do now! 😆

Continue soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera! 😳