||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd)

Aditi opened her eyes with a startle. "Where am I? Why am I not at home with Manmeet?"

From the corner of her eye she sees someone jump up.

"Thank god you're okay Heer!" He exclaims.

"Heer? Who's Heer? Mere naam Aditi hain." She says back to him, moving away as he touches her shoulder. "Please aap dur rehna, main aapko nahin janti."

"Mujhe nahin jaanti? I'm your husband Prem, Heer!" Premsays, holding her shoulders again.

"Leave me!" She struggles out of his grip. "Nurse! Nurse!" she screams for attention.

Right then a nurse comes rushing in, "Yes ma'am. Do you need something?"

"Take this man away! He's disturbing me!" Aditi says, as she tries to stay away from his reach.

"Ma'am. He's the one who brought you in from your horrible accident. Inka naam Prem hain. You should be thanking him, instead of yelling at him." The nurse informs her.

"Accident?" Aditi turns to Prem. "What accident?"

"You were hit by a drunk driver, and so his man found you, and brought you here." The nurse tells her.

"You brought me here?" Aditi asks Prem.

"Yes, I was shocked seeing you first, but then I realized if I didn't get you to the hospital fast enough, you wouldn't make it." Prem quietly explains.

"You were shocked to see me? Kyun?" She asks.

"Wouldn't you be shocked if you saw your spouse for the first time in 2 years, after they were gone without any explanation? They all told me you died." He laughs. "But I knew better than to believe them. I knew you'd still be alive, my heart kept telling me."

"He's my husband? To phir Manmeet--?" Aditi just continues to stare at Prem. The man claiming to be her husband from two years ago.

I knew it wasn't that good. But do tell me if you think it's worth continuing or not! Please do leave comments!

Luv ya loads,

Meera

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Mine!! xx

*EDIT*

Hello Ello Bello Gello!! Okay, I can't sleep, hehe!! 😆 I am shocked! You shudn't be awake now!😆

Anyhow- it's awesome and you should definantly continue!! I'm really excited to know what happens next. Hmmm...so I wonder why Heer left Prem two years ago?! 😕😛 And where did Muckmeet come from? He better not try to seperate Prem and Heer. Hehe- I love it!! The way you showed Prem's concern, and Heer/Aditi's panic as she struggles to recognise him was amazing!! So has Heer lost her memory or something? Or did she hit her head pretty badly during the accident??! 😆😆😆 It's nice to see that Prem still feels the same love and care for Heer that he did two years ago, despite being away from her for so long!! He didn't lose faith in his love- so sweet!! 😳 Awww thanks Zahroo! 😳 She didn't leave him...you'll see what happens soon!😉😛😃 And ahhh that also will be revealed, (it's my first try at "suspense")😆😆😆 Hmmm I'm glad you liked it!😛 Ahhh something did happen two years ago that triggered her memory loss!😳 Ahhh would Prem's love ever get less?😆

Do continue Meera, sweet as sheera!! 😃😆 Thankoo thankoo!😛

Love Zahra xx

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

ahem ahem
i think it's very very interesting concept
nice part 1
just wondering u should put ur vm dhadke jiya as a title song 😛
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