||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd) - Page 2

Hiya!

Ooh...Interesting...Very, very interesting...It's like, the storyline now, only in reverse or something. I'm intrigued! One thing though: this was too short! It was SO NOT ENOUGH to satiate me! I need moar! When are you gonna update it? Will it be a longer part? Will it? Will it? WILL IT?

very interesting!!! I don't know where you are heading with this, but i like it so far!!!

Thanks everyone! 😃 Will comment back tom, and Bhav, I'll try to update it frequently, but here's a warning to everyone...this SS is going to have 8 parts, and that's it! 😛

Meeru, that is so good! You should most definitely continue.

conyinue for defo sound interestingly confusing wow cant w8

Why didn't I see this before?😲

Ohh Meera! Cool, really interesting, I completely trust you to do justice to this whole memory-loss track which has been done to death but knowing you, you'll do something outstanding with it! Can't wait to see what happened, really keeps you hooked! =]

--shabz

thank you! 😃 Thank you everyone! 😛 will comment back soon!

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

hey it does seem interesting.... update soon, waiting for the next part...

Thanks!😛 I'll update sometime today or tomorow!😛

Originally posted by: munam_13

Meeeeruuuuuuuuuu!!!!! Do continue with the story...This is a case of real memory loss , I guess..😆 Awww yup, it def is!😆 I'm glad you liked it so far!😃😳

Ok ...So Aditi/Heer is Prem's wife estranged since 2 years... and he at last finding her is so....😳 He must be esctatic na... and from where did this Manmeet drop in???😕😡..yeh bhi hai kya???... now I think we have got a great storylilne in front of us... cant just wait to read...😃 Estranged? maybe not....Manmeet has dropped in and you might not like him....but don't worry...no one likes him!😆 Thanks!😳 I hope I can try to do it as well as I can!😃

Originally posted by: purplestar22

This is really intresting and different...Update soon

First of all, love your NaKsh siggy!!!😳 They are honestly just so cute!😛😆 But thank you for liking it!😆 I'll try to continue soon!😛

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

thank u soooo much for adding ur vm
now i can watch ur vm again in theaters 😃

Awww thanks Poonam!😳😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Hiya! *waves* Hello!😛

Ooh...Interesting...Very, very interesting...It's like, the storyline now, only in reverse or something. I'm intrigued! One thing though: this was too short! It was SO NOT ENOUGH to satiate me! I need moar! When are you gonna update it? Will it be a longer part? Will it? Will it? WILL IT? Ooohhh you like it Bhav? That means a lot coming from such a fantastic writer like you!😃😳😳 Aww it was too short? I think all the parts are that "short"😉😆😆 But don't worry I'll be updating every day, to make it a perfectly week long ff!😆

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Heh. Sorry. But seriously though. Update it sooooooon! I will update it either tonight or tomorrow!😃

Love, love you too!😃😳

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

very interesting!!! I don't know where you are heading with this, but i like it so far!!!

Please continue!!!

Awww thanks Maddy!😳😃 I'll update soon!😛

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meeru, that is so good! You should most definitely continue. Awww really? Thanks Radzie!😃😳

I mean, what caused Heer's memory loss? Why'd she leave? Obviously Prem would know she was alive, but where was she? How did Manmeet come into the picture? How'd she get into this accident? So many questions, and the only way for me to get answers is for you to continue! So, you have to, for the sake of my sanity! Hmmm you'll see what caused her memory loss!😛😳 Why she left? Do you really OUR Heer would ever leave Prem?😳😳😳 You'll get the answers soon!😃😳😳

Did I mention I loved it? I want more. Thankoo Ji!😳😳

Love, Love you too!😳😃

Radz

Originally posted by: zaibun

conyinue for defo sound interestingly confusing wow cant w8

Thanks so much Zaibun!😃😃

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Why didn't I see this before?😲 Cus I updated it after you left?😳

Btw did I tell you how much I LOVE this song? I think I'm over coming my obsession with it =) Though I'm kinda listening to it now😆 Awww really?😃😳 I still love it, ohhh and I've thought of three other vms...but they're all really depressing!😆

Wait...I think I have read it! Um...I'll tell you on MSN or something to ask you which one I think it is😆 You HAVE read it!😉😆 You just didn't comment *hmph*😆😆😆

Oh and I reserve this =) Thankoo!😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

Ohh Meera! Cool, really interesting, I completely trust you to do justice to this whole memory-loss track which has been done to death but knowing you, you'll do something outstanding with it! Can't wait to see what happened, really keeps you hooked! =]

--shabz

You trust me? really?😳😳 that does mean A LOT to me Shabo!😃 It has totally been done to death, but I just hope I can do justice, I could go ahead and change it around from last year....but I'm not sure if it would work!😆 I hope it always keeps you hooked!😃😳

Originally posted by: happybrar

intersting

update soon

Thanks!😛 I'll update every single day so it'll be a week long ff! 😃

Part 2

After the nurse leaves, Aditi keeps glancing at Prem, who keeps looking at her admiringly.

"Dekhiye, thank-you for saving me, but now please leave. My husband should be coming soon." She says to him.

"Heer, you're not understanding. IAM your husband." Prem say as he steps closer to her.

"No! Stay there. Don't you understand? Manmeet is my husband, and I am his wife!" Aditi says loudly.

"Tell me something, when did you marry him?" Prem asks crossing his arms.

"Why do you even care?" Aditi asks.

"I want to prove something to you." He says sitting down by the foot of her bed.

Aditi glares at him. "Fine, we got married 1 year and a half ago."

"Exactly, and me and you have been married for 4 years. Two years before that horrible disaster, and now two years that you've been missing." Prem shudders at even remembering it.

"Prem, if I ask you something, will you tell me?" Aditi asks weakly smiling.

"She said my name for the first time!" He beams at her. "Anything."

"How did you lose your wife two years ago?" She asks in a quiet voice.

"You mean how did I lose you?" Prem smiles.

"Kitni pyaari muskaan hain inki." Aditi turns to him. "Yeah, as you say so."

"I'll tell you, if first you tell me how you met and married Manmeet." Prem smirks.

"That's not fair. Maine aapse phele poocha." Aditi argues, then just freezes up. "Why do I feel like I've had this conversation with him before?"

Prem taps her foot. "Hey, kya hua?"

"Kuch nahin." She says. "Ab batao,"

"If I tell you and you feel some similarities, will you be honest with me and tell me?" Prem asks.

Aditi contemplates in her head. "What should I do? Could this all be true? Is this man really my husband?" She smiles weakly at Prem. "Haan."

"Thank-you. Well we were married, and we found out that my sister, Veera had the wrong intentions and so she wanted us both dead, so we both were on the run, and when we reached Neela point, you and Veera, had a small fight, and she pushed you, and so you lost your balance and you fell. After that I went after Veera and got her arrested, but looked for you everywhere, lekin kisi ko kahin pata nahin chala." Prem says, coming close to tears after re-living it all in his head.

After a few minutes of silence, Aditi finally speaks. "I'm—I'm sorry."

"It's okay Heer. Now that I have you back, it'll all be okay. I have faith in that much." He smiles. "Did anything seem familiar to you?"

"Manmeet did tell me he found me near Neela point, but does that mean this story's true? If it is, why didn't Manmeet tell me?" Aditi glances at him. "What was I wearing?"

"Does that mean you remember?" Prem asks happily. "You were wearing a pink Salwar suit, the one you were wearing when I proposed to you!"

"I do have an outfit like that at home! Does—does this mean I really—really am Heer? That can't be true," Aditi looks at Prem with a horrified face. "I think—I think—"

She is interrupted when a tall man comes rushing in. "Oh Aditi! Oh my poor Aditi! How are you? I came here as soon as I heard about your accident!" He goes and hugs her. He notices Prem. "Yeh kaun hain?"

"This is the man who saved me. Prem—"

"Juneja." Prem completes for her. "Nice to meet you." He shakes his hand.

"Aur yeh— mere—mere pati hain." Aditi says to Prem. "Manmeet Singh."

I'm not sure if it's good enough? But please do leave comments, if you think it's worth it!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera