||Dhadke Jiya|| (SS) Epilogue Pg. 14 (April 3rd)

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Meera

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Thanks, I'll definitely edit around it a bit!😳

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

hey..

awsome!!! this is very interesting indeed!!

veera!!😡, .. so suits her no? lol

and manmeet..aab yeh kaha se tapak pada? Prem aur heer ke beech mein hamesha aajata hain...is he a positive or negative?

i hope Prem comes back!!! update soon...and take care till then..

~nikki

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Meera

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey..
awsome!!! this is very interesting indeed!!

veera!!😡, .. so suits her no? lol

and manmeet..aab yeh kaha se tapak pada? Prem aur heer ke beech mein hamesha aajata hain...is he a positive or negative?

i hope Prem comes back!!! update soon...and take care till then..

~nikki

Awww thanks so much Nikki! 😛 Hmm Manmeet positive or negative? You'll have to see!😆😆

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Bhavna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

😃 Aww thanks! I LOVED the characters' thoughts! (Considering that's mostly what this part was! 😆) Boy you really are updating it every day! I'm gonna have to be careful about not missing it...😆 Anyway, don't have much to say today, for some reason, but AWWWW Prem left and Heer couldn't stop him! Gah Manmeet had better tell her (and us, actually!) the truth!

Till tomorrow!

Love,

Bhav (:

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

You didn't wait for me to unreserve. 😆 You gave me no time. *sigh* If you are updating everyday, I'm only gonna write short-short comments. 😆

I love the story angle, it's so interesting. A/H feels such a connection already to Prem. And MM needs to tell her the truth. Why do I get the feeling he's working for Veera? I don't know, I just do.

Cannot wait for the next part!

Love,

Radz

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey great update i hope additi or heer figurs out who she relly is do continue

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

reserved!

Not reserved anymore!!! 😆

Good update and speedy too!!! *cheering*

Heer seems to be already taken over by Prem!!! Love that because it is so natural!!! Hope Heer finds out the truth soon and fast!!!!

Premmer ko juda dhekna kiso ko bhi pasand nahi!!! I suppose this will only increase their love and strngthen their bonds in the future!!!

Only Prem would wait so long and truly believe that nothing happened to his Heer these couple of years!!!!

Hope you update soon again!!! Can't wait with where this story is heading!!!

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Yea, me and Bhav di ROCK! 🥳

ok, a basic filler-y type part but it really keeps you hooked! I loved how Heer tried to keep Prem back with telepathy but he didn't stay! Boo hoo! WHY NOT??!?!? Stupid Prem...he better beat MM up in the end....

EWEWEWEWEWEEW!!! He kissed her! Becharrii Heer! Now I am in dire need of a MM punching bag. 🤬

--shabz

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Pooja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Great update Meera....
Wat is dis Manmeet trying to do????? I hav a feeling he's basically taking advantage of Heer's helplessness......😡
Heer feels a connection wid Prem.....Yay..