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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#301

hey
awesome update
the flashback scene was soo passionate
toooo gooood
thankz for pm

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#302

very nice

wunder wat happens between premeer

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

Edited by Kamal_23 - 15 years ago

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stunninstar

@stunninstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#303

my spot....i wil edit after sometime...!breakfst time!!😉

okk finally..didnt forget this time..!⭐️⭐️

jaz...

it was nice,..but short yaar.. ..i want to read more n more..!!😉😉

ohh...prem is totally different in all your ff's.. and then here.. oh..he is such a kid...😆😆😆

that part where..prem n nihaal not noticing the kids were really hilarious..!!🤣🤣..ohh...itz like 4 kids at home...!!!

and yes..itz always a mess when there are kids at home...oh..when my sis was home with her li'l one..it was always toys lying around..!!! all you can see is mess... ha ha...and i get excuse to not keep my room perfedct too....😆😆..

that making out was hot man..lol.. 😳😳😳.. and perfect spoil sport the baby was... i can imagine how harshad would have his face then...these days there are lotsa such facial expression from prem in the serial too..!!!😛😛

and still dont understand why heer left..oh god..itz really exciting..update soon...

and thanx fr the pm dear...

with luv...sandy..😊❤️❤️

Edited by stunninstar - 15 years ago

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#304

very romantic Update... I really enjoyed reading it... Premeer's part was very Hot and Romantic......Waiting for the next update..

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Maha

@-Maha-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#305

fantastic awesommm romantic ☺️and lovely update dear👏.👏👏really nice and cute one.what happened to heer hmm confused😕

thanks for pm

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#306

my spot.

*edited*

I is so proud of myself. I came back to edit this. 😃 *smug muh* Without having to be reminded!

Ahh, I sound like a broken record whenever I comment on this story. 😆 Again, I shall comment on how stark the difference between Heer's Prem and today's Prem is. The coldness and loneliness of a broken man compared to the joy and completness of a man who had everything he ever dreamed of and more.

And then the dream is over, in longer than an instant, now it seems. So first Heer, then Suraj? An accident? And illness? She just up and left? What? WHAT HAPPENED?? Jaz, update!

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago

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sanyoprithviraj

@sanyoprithviraj

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#307

an excellent update.

i am now more curious to know what happened to heer and now sunny

update soon

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#308

wow...that was awesome...👏 the flashback was so romantic...amazing...😳😳😳 continue soon and thanks for the PM...😊

love
Afreen

Edited by premeer928 - 15 years ago

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maneesha

@maneeshaF

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#309

Wonderful update jaz once a gain.👏
The last part made me to think that some thing is wrong with Suraj now, u know some kind of disease..
But i hope it's not the case, and prem and heer will fix every thing soon.
Im glad that u mentioned some romantic scenes as well here.
It was realy romantic, i was blushing the whole time i was reading it.
Great ya.☺️
I had a lot of fun reading it.😃
Thanx for the pm and the update.
Hope to see the next part soon😉

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masin

@masin

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#310

oye hoyee!!!!! i think i read it at least five times over before replyingg!!! loved it soo muchc api!!!!! especially how it took prem only a second to go crazzzyy with his wifey..i was blushing the whole timee!!!!!!! and how him and nihaal were busy racing themselves!! i simply love these family moments!!!!!!

and as for sonny....i must say..smart boy! guess he wasn't up for another sibling too soon...... ;))

kk so this cliffhanger is really getting to me....so i was thinking about blasting at u for leaving us at yet another cliffhanger....but then i couldn't cuz ur my jaz api -_- but don't think im not angry!!!! :D anyway..so im thinking tht mayb heer and sonny suffered from an accident..so mayb they're in some intense coma or something..and this is prem just sitting in his room recalling his life and refreshing the best moments!!!! (kk sounds like the sanjana rampal track ritee?? LMAO) but still.....its too stressful for my brain to think tht heer and sonny died, or they left prem!!! gosh....aur kitney deir lagey gi for them to become a happy family????

fab update!! can't wait to read more

lots of love

Samra

P.S. i don't remember if i commented on ek pal..but lemme just say......i LOVED THE EPILOGUEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tho everytime i think about tht ff now..and the fact tht u've written the epilogue..it hits me tht tht ff is over! like finished! there's not gonna be anything like it..ever..ever again!!!!!!!!! 😭 LOL i'm gonna miss those pals wen i read ek pal in one go!

Edited by masin - 15 years ago

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