New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys...its me jaz again...back with one of my wacky stories...😉😉😉...this is something completely different from what you may have read from me in the past 😃😃...like my other stories...just go with the flow and everything will eventually make sense 😆😆😆...the first part is posted in the next post...but before i go and post it...here is what you need to know about this ff so far...just the basics of characters...

Nihaal Jhuneja: oldest son of Gayatri and Lalit (both of who are already dead)
Prem Jhuneja: youngest son of Gayatri and Lalit
Biji: like a mother to Nihaal and Prem

Nihaal and Prem both run Jhuneja Industries together...Nihaal handles most national business deals where as Prem is the international face of JI. Nihaal is fun loving to some extent where as Prem is the brooding, business tycoon type. Biji has taken care of Nihaal and Prem since their parents died. Although they have no blood relation she loves them like her own sons. Nihaal and Prem love her more that anything else in the world and would gladly lay their lives on the line for her.


Kulraj (aka-Raaji) Maan: oldest daughter of Balraj and Teji Maan
Heer Maan: youngest daughter of Balraj and Teji Maan

These two are sisters, best friends and partners in crime. Raaji is the sweet typical Indian girl, where as Heer is the uninhibited, bubbly ladli of the family.


Details of relationships will follow as necessary...i hope you do like my new ff...cant wait to read comments...😳😳


Ch1-Pg1
Ch2-Pg4
Ch3-Pg7
Ch4-Pg11
Ch5-Pg16
Ch 6-Pg20
Ch7-Pg25
Ch8-Pg29
Ch9-Pg33
Ch10-Pg36
Ch11-Pg 41
Ch12-Pg46
Ch13-Pg50
Ch14-Pg54
Ch15-Pg57
Ch16-Pg62
Ch 16-Pg67

JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 1:


Sau Dard

Sau dard hai

Sau rahatein

Saab mil dilnashin

Ek tu hi nahin

Ruki Ruki si yeh hawa

Aur sukhe paate ki tarha

Shehar ki sadko pe main

Lawaris udta hua

Sau raaste

Paar teri rah nahin

Sau dard hai

Sau rahatein

Saab mil dilnashin

Ek tu hi nahin

He was Prem Jhuneja...the Prem Jhuneja. He had everything and anything anyone could imagine. He was the epitome of success and happiness - perhaps that is the reason that everyone envied him. The men wanted to BE Prem Jhuneja and the women wanted to BE WITH Prem Jhuneja. In the eyes of the world Prem Jhuneja was at the top, he had made it. He had reached a level that few reached, and countless had failed at reaching, in their lives. He had managed to achieve the prefect life.

They say that the eyes cannot deceive anyone, your eyes cannot lie. Whoever had said that had been dead wrong. The All-Mighty Prem Jhuneja didn't have everything, he had NOTHING. His life was not full as the world had thought, his life was the opposite...his life was empty. His life had been washed away with tears and blood, not colored by happiness and joy.

On his 6th wedding anniversary here he was, sitting in a darkened room...dark just like his life...with a full bottle of Vodka, drowning in self pity. If anyone had told him that this is how he would be celebrating the happiest day of his life, he would have looked them straight in the eye and said, "No Way!"

It hadn't always been like this for Prem. There was a point in his life that Prem Jhuneja truly had it all. He actually had what the masses claimed he had; he was exactly as the world saw him. He was a highly successful business man who was worth hundreds of millions of dollars. He was happy, or so he thought with his success. He had finally become what people said the son of Lalit Jhuneja, a drunk could never become. He had money, respect, fame and a great family.

He was only missing one thing; he was missing the company of someone by his side. He was missing the one person that was supposed to stay with him through thick and thin. He was missing his life...only he didn't know it 7 years ago.

Seven years ago, on this very night, his life had chanced. It had changed in an instant, in a way he had never expected it to. It was the sole luckiest day of his life - it was the day that God had smiled down at him. It was the day that Prem Jhuneja had discovered what true happiness was, what love was and what life was. He remembered that day like it was yesterday...not 7 years ago. It was the day he had discovered that even the "Steal Hearted Business Tycoon" Prem Jhuneja wasn't so steal hearted after all. His life, his future, his dream changed...and it had all changed because of one person.

One person who had made time stand still, one person that had taken his breath away, one person that had stolen his heart...one person, that was no longer part of his life.

Sau dard hai

Sau rahatein

Saab mil dilnashin

Ek tu hi nahin

Behta hai paani behne de

Waqt ko yuhi rehne de

Dariya ne karvat li hai toh

Sahiloon ko sehne de

Sau hasratein

Paar tera ghum nahin

Sau dard hai

Sau rahatein

Saab mil dilnashin

Ek tu hi nahin

JAZ

ps: looking forward to comments 😉
Edited by jnawaz - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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MINE! =]

I'm first!! Can't touch this. 😎

First of all, the TITLE, just makes your heart break, specially after you read part one. What has Prem J. gone through, that on his ANNIVERISARY, he is sitting all alone, drinking?? Sounds like some serious stuff to me! Anyway, AMAZING start! I loved it, specially how you described everything, you really have a way with words. 😃 And INTERESTING charachter sketchs....really..can't wait to see the stories progressing!!! Why do I have the feeling you are going to do something completly OUTRAGEUOUS? 😛

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, omg.. sounds very interesting..and i love reading ur ff's!! cant wait to see how this one develops too!! update soon, and take care...
~nikki😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooo Jaz this is the first time I'm reading your ff! 😛

Sounds really interesting! 😃 Love the name and the way you added in the the lyrics! 😳

Hmmm Prem's married?? 😊 I'm surprised...but I can't wait to see what happens next! 😃😃😳

Love you,

Meera😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Jaz!!! Another FF???? Sweet!!!!!!! and as always this one is ROCKING!!!!!!😆😆

I love the whole concept!! and yes it is very different than your other FF's!!! Can't wait to read further!! It sounds really very interesting!!! continue soon!!

Byee!!!!!!
Garima 😳😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
interesting title and ff
prem is married
soo touching emotinal chap 1
nice too goood




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Jaz *waves*
I've been a silent reader of your previous FFs and I think your an amazing writer =)
First off, I LOVE that song! It's so sad and depressing and yet I love it =)
Wow Prem's married? And yet he's not happy about it being his anniversary? I wonder why...It's all seems mysterious and all. Might be cuz you haven't revealed anything else yet😆 Can't wait to read the next update😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey new ff
congrants n yeh sounds relly gud totally different from ur othe ff dat iv read hpe dis 1 is just as gud
best of luk
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ,
new ff !!!!
it was very different .
cont.soon.
take care.

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