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Sarah

@--Sarah--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#311

phantablous update Jaz...you create wonders!!!!!! 👏
loved it loved it and loved it 😊 😊 😊
very well written Jaz..you are an excellent writer and can easily get reads attention and their mind hooked to your story straight away 👍🏼
the FB was beautifully described and i was getting goosebumps..premeer are awesome 😍 😳
i'm wondering what happened between prem and Heer!!!!!!!
waiting for the next update

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#312

hiiiiiiiiiii jaz.............. this is such a cute and romantic update this is wat we say hot great update yar specially that sonny cry hehhehe bechare mom dad update soon thanxxx really want to know wat hapened to heer and sonny

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Cess-

@Cess-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#313

*reserved*.... gosh jaz, i just reserved for all three, and this time, i wont edit only one.... actually i'll edit them all abhi... after reading.... 😆

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 15 years ago

#314

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh cant bear the suspence its killing me luved the update and suraj is right cheeky luv him though

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#315

Omg what an amazing update!!! The flashback was very passionate.
fantastic update Jaz.

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#316

Hi jaz

What an update- amazing. Truly awesome in every sense.

The flashback I don't know what to say about it. you have left me speechless. Really hot, passionate, great update. And sonny you really when to spoil your dad's mood😆.

Ok jaz first I thought as heer could not conceive that she left him, but if now they sonny in their lives, then why the hell did she leave him. I am very confused, well who isn't?🤣 plz clear our confusion soon. Truly loved this update.