New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19 - Page 29

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Ohmygod Jaz, if what I think happened, actually happened, I will hunt you down. I swear it. This, this utter despair in the Prem of the now. It's unbearable. And because you write the differences in the Prems of then and now so well, it makes it all the more stark, the change. And makes it so much more painful.

You, you're completely evil. Talented, but evil nonetheless. You are so lucky I love your story enough to keep you alive to finish it.

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: Premeer_chahat

Wow amazing update!!! Plz continue soon!!! Can u add me to ur pm list plz??

Originally posted by: maha_k

really really nice one dear👏.👏but can bear prem's pain na😭

but like always awesom update.past part was too good👏.👏hope u will update soon and plz pm me

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Oh another great update jaz.
Oh that was so cute and sweet.
They are the best parents, and love all those cute moments.
Plz update soon the next part😊

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

jjjjjjjjjjjaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzz

* pounces on u* you are very mean my sis very mean made your lil.sis wait for so long that it made me wonder where u dissappeared to........... well this was such a .... well thanx to reading I am@ a loss of words.. in short I am speechless

lekha

your lil sis

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

Love it... I am really dying to know wat happened to the lives of these three people...

Lovely update as usual...finally she got to adopt a baby boy and can shower all the motherly loved to the child that she has been craving for...

waiting for your next PM for the next update....

Originally posted by: angel82

jaz , beautifully written......so emotional.....

prem's pain is soo unbearable ,the suspense of what happened in his life is killing me....

hope my fears of what must ahve happened dont come true and that at the end he gets to be happy with his family.... thank u! 🤗 kaise ho yaar...i have to keep the suspense...if i tell you all what happened...then no one will come back to read the rest of it...but hang in there (apparently that is the phrase of the day...i've used it so much already 😆😆)

Jaz , you either kill me with a heer-preet hug and kiss in Heer's secret or you kill me with suspense here....but still I will hang on to you till the last coz you gave me Ek pal & ISOC and both had wonderful endings.. good job...you are taking my advice before i even gave it 😆😆...you know me so well...btw...did you read the epilogue of Ek Paal? i havent checked comments yet...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: yasu09

wow.....................
another awesomeeeeeeeeee update.....................
ur rely great writer.................
can't wait 2 find out what happened to make Heer leave Prem.............
so plz update soonnnnnnnn.................

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😳Gudiya!!! 🤗 chalo...kam se kam iss comment ke edit toh mila 😆

*edited*

This was amazingly heart-wrenching Jaz! *hugs*

I'm not going to give you my thoughts or assumptions, I'll end up being wrong anyways! 😉[:$} But this was an awesome update! 😳lol...its good that you didnt...because either way...i wouldnt confirm or deny anything...you'd just be back at square one 😆...im evil...i know 😈

I'm sooo glad Heer and Prem got the little boy they wanted! 😳 I figured Heer would have wanted the surrogate option but this was much more meaningful 😳😃 ya...i'm a big supporter of adoptions...duniya mein kitne saare baache hai jinko maa/baap ka pyaar nahin milta...so why not give your love to one of those kids...im gonna adopt when im ready to start my family...😳😳

Awww I love Aryan! 😃 He's mine! 😉😳 haila...yahaan pe aaryan...HS pe Preet...aab yeh baata...Aarav aur Suraj ka kya hoga? 😆

Can't wait for more! 😃 *claps*

Love you, you too ❤️

Meera😳

Originally posted by: zaara006

WOW!!!!! Absolutaly brilliant!!!!

reserved!!!!

Originally posted by: stunninstar

jaz..

u know what....am fallen in love with yr ff's ... seriously...it was tanhaai first..and then today i saw this ff in the first page i didnt bother to check in first....then i saw the author...n saw it was u...and i knew it wud be another master peice from u.. he he...this is the first comment im seeing in a while...usually it says *reserved* 😆😆 thanks for getting back...i know life gets busy...so thanks once again 😳😳😳...thanks for liking my work...

ooh dear...i dnt hv words to describe yr ff..it s simply the best....lol..u know ... i dnt think i love any other ff in the forum as much as i love yrs.. aww...you are so sweet...THANK YOU 🤗

and man..u better start getting serious with this talent of yrs..

am sure ..u have a good future there...!! hmm...im actually thinking about looking into that...i love writing and my ff get good responses...so im thinking...why not...dekhte hai...aage aage hota hai kya 😳😳

PS: if possible plz pm me when u update.. will do 😊

with love...sandy..😊😊😊

Originally posted by: curledup

mine

Originally posted by: -Payal-

Thank You for the update....

Edit:

Read it...my gosh - this is sheer agony! Where the heck are you going with this?!?!?

BTW, love the baby! 😳

Sorry - no time for a longer comment

All my love,
P

Originally posted by: permeer928

hey
awesome update...👏 loved the premeer scenes...hope prem's misery ends soon... 😳 continue soon and thanks for the PM...😃


love
Afreen

Originally posted by: masin

heeyy apii haila...my sweet sammy baacha...you are here too 😆😆...good good...very good...i like it! 😉😉

yaar what is this!!! itna chota update!!!!!!! how am i possibly gonna wait for another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????!!!!!!!! this is how my updates usually are...i just get carried away with my SS a little bit 😳😳😳

well at least we've got something :D

and btw...suspense kabtak chalega!!!??!!? its killing mee..and i don't think u'd want the murder of sammy bacha (or prem jhuneja from tanhai) on ur criminal record!!! xD :P eh...its ok...apparently i have murdered people since the beginning of this ff and Tanhai...one more wont hurt...😆😆😆

newayss as alwaysss speechless!! kinda busy rite now so can't leave a loong comment!! hmm..well i was kinda hoping they'd adopt!! but u really surprised me with suraj juneja! i thot it'd be the usual cliche of chahat juneja! LMAO!!!! i'm glad u came up with something original and adorable!!!!!!!! i lovedd heer and prems convo about the adoption and on their anniversary!!! too cutee yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved her hands on her hips and her wanting to kill prem juneja with her bare hands!!!!!!!!! LOL cracked up like crazzy!!!! and of course our favourite aryaan! "appy sary massi!!!!!" now thats what i call "ccchooooooo chhhwweeeettt!!!!!!!!!!" and i also loved how raaji bhabhi and nihaal bhaiya were gonna kill prem fr making heer cry!!!! its just sooo great to see everyone having soo much love towards each otherrr !!!!!!!!!! :)))))))) its ok...ill take any comment you can give...im not picky...but just keep in mind i like your comments 😛😛😛...ya...i came up with this concept way before Chahat was even part of the Premeer picture...and i love Sonny...isnt he adorable...i just love him...he gets more adorable...trust me 😉 and of course...aaryan is just dreamy! he's gonna be heart breaker 😳😳😳...

newayss...i gtg noww

please keep me posted on when u update

and keep writing fabulously (sorry..still havent looked into a thesaurus :P) lol...ill PM you when i update...sometime soon...ahem ahem...long comment next time? 😉

lots of love

Sammy baccha

P.S. when's prem's misery gonna end?? ya phir when is the truth gonna unravel!!!! i can't wait to read about it..altho i actually don't mind the stretch either...i LOVEEE ALL THE FLASHBACKSSS :DDDDDD trust me...everything will come out in due time 😉...just wait for it 😃
😉

Originally posted by: zaibun

omg the suspence is killing me yaar great update and keep it up

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

awesum update

loved it

thankz for pm

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

very nice

stillwondering why heer left

update soon

and thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeeee

great part

loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Cess-

*reserved*... will be back if i dont drown in my own tears.... *dramatic muh*..... 🤣

Originally posted by: Amitoz

simply amazing!

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice n lobg update thanks for pm plz update soon

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey u asked how i know the ending of dis ff from me 😊 actually my sister has read dis fanfiction in kuch is tarah forum , u wrote it on ranbir kanya so she told me and i recognized it so thtsy i know😊

hiba

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hiiiiiiiii awesome update i want to wat happened to heer y prem is crying and y he is in pain

plz update soon