Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Pallavi.........finally I caught up op on your new FF! I have just read Part 1. It was FANTASTIC!!!!! 👏
The entry you gave Robbie Sabaharwal was mind-blowing!!!!! And the slam book idea..........very original 👏 👏 👏 awesome dear!!!!!
This entry was even better than the other one and you used IPL as the background, very nice!!! 😆
I am going to catch up on the other parts and comment soon........

yah dear waiting 4 ur comments and ur UPDATE😡

Hey just caught up with Parts 2 -5..... it was a wonderful reading!!!
Its amazing how you use so many different words........you have an excellent vocabulary of words, some of those words I have not heard in ages! 😃

OK, the characters are really good! Kasturi and Divya. But I am a little confused with your second part. You mentioned that Raunak gave Robbie the address of Brantwood place, but who is Raunak? Because I don't remember you introducing him....you had only introduced Girish as his best friend and manager!

I loved the pictures of Ooty and that lovely hosue on lake!! 😃 I have been to Ooty/Udhagamandalam! Its a great place.

Continue soon...... 😊

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Hey just caught up with Parts 2 -5..... it was a wonderful reading!!!
Its amazing how you use so many different words........you have an excellent vocabulary of words, some of those words I have not heard in ages! 😃

OK, the characters are really good! Kasturi and Divya. But I am a little confused with your second part. You mentioned that Raunak gave Robbie the address of Brantwood place, but who is Raunak? Because I don't remember you introducing him....you had only introduced Girish as his best friend and manager!

I loved the pictures of Ooty and that lovely hosue on lake!! 😃 I have been to Ooty/Udhagamandalam! Its a great place.

Continue soon...... 😊

hey thanx dat's actually a blooper😆. It is girish only who gives the address I am so used to thinking Raunak is robbie's only friend....gee thanx a lot!!!

And thanx alot for the appreciation!!! continue reading and enjoying

Phew... finally caught up with your fanfic.. wow, totally stunned yaar..okay

part 1. the intro was totally a chakha..or shall i say a sixer... luved the intro, luved the way you introduced robbie adn diya, i thought she was gonna be the robbie's luv interest.. .

Part 2...you still had me convinced that diya would be robbie's luv interest.. and also i really like how you described ooty... only ever seen it in movies... but its defintely a piece of heaven..

and finally Part 3 to 5 robbie adn kasturi meet, i luv they way destiny is bringing them together.. fantastic pallavi.. you've done a fabulous job... and i died laughing at AC, shes just bite the hand that feeds, by kicking kasturi out of the house, now kasturi can get a great job and regain her father's wealth...👏 the story had a little touch of cinderella.. very sweet, so now they meet adn kasturi will be working with robbie, sounds like fireworks are in the forecast, cant wait, toi jaaldi likhooo pleaseeee..

luv robina di

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Phew... finally caught up with your fanfic.. wow, totally stunned yaar..okay

part 1. the intro was totally a chakha..or shall i say a sixer... luved the intro, luved the way you introduced robbie adn diya, i thought she was gonna be the robbie's luv interest.. .

Part 2...you still had me convinced that diya would be robbie's luv interest.. and also i really like how you described ooty... only ever seen it in movies... but its defintely a piece of heaven..

and finally Part 3 to 5 robbie adn kasturi meet, i luv they way destiny is bringing them together.. fantastic pallavi.. you've done a fabulous job... and i died laughing at AC, shes just bite the hand that feeds, by kicking kasturi out of the house, now kasturi can get a great job and regain her father's wealth...👏 the story had a little touch of cinderella.. very sweet, so now they meet adn kasturi will be working with robbie, sounds like fireworks are in the forecast, cant wait, toi jaaldi likhooo pleaseeee..

luv robina di

Haila di! I never thought u would get time to read this FF😆😆 Well U r rite this is a cinderalla story!! Kas is cindie and robb is prince charming!!! Just hope it stays dis way..pray that I dont take out all my frustation abt wats going on in the serial on this FF!!!

Rightooo guys here is d update

(part 6) Hum Tum...
Robbie's jaw dropped..."tum!!!"
kasturi shocked at meeting him "aap!!!"
Chotu-Aap dono pehle mil chuke ho?
Kasturi- Is bhale aadmi ne mujhe girne se bachaya tha kal..
Robbie- Haan aap kafi jaldi mein the...[using and stressing on the aap as he was embarassed that he had already come into "tum" terms with her!]
Kasturi- Woh main..chodiye na!
Robbie- Kya tum mujhe ooty ghumaogi?
Kasturi- Haan magar mera fees...
Robbie- Kitne chahiye?
Kasturi- Do waqt ka khana aur raat mein ghar tak lift!
Robbie-Kya?!?
Kasturi- Kuch zyaada ho gaya kya?
Robbie- Nahi r u sure sirf itna!
Kasturi- Haan
Robbie- Aaj se kam shuru?
Kasturi- theek hai..
Robbie- Aur haan dost bankar ek guide ki tarah nahi...
Kasturi- Mujhe bachpan se hi dosti karne ke bahut craze tha by god!!!
Robbie-(amused) hi I am robbie sabarwal
Kasturi- Is nacheez ko kasturi kehte hai!!!
Robbie- tum aise hi ho yah aaj kuch special hai?
Kasturi- main to aise hi hoon!!
Yes Kasturi was a bubbly, chirpy and lively girl....her life was synonymous to pure mazaa!!! She was the sweetheart of the one and all!! Alka chachi had caged her nature and put a lock of unhappiness and agony to it....but now the bird was free....free to soar higher and higher in the blue surges of the zenith...
Kasturi- Tum abhi abhi uthe?
Robbie- Dikhta hai kya?
Kasturi- Haan kyunki kal jab maine tumhe dekha tum kafi fresh aur handsome lag rahe the...
Robbie-(taken aback by her free and outgoing talk) Tum he lagte hai ki main handsome hoon...
Kasturi- Koi shak?
Robbie- Thank you!
Kasturi- Uski koi zaroorat nahi maine tumhe yeh stunning looks nahi diye bhagwan ne diye hai...unhe thank u bolo...Tumpe koi bhi ladki flat ho sakti hai!
Robbie- Sachi?
Kasturi- Muchi!!! Ab tum jaldi jao aur nahalo main tumhare liye chai banati hoon!
Robbie- Theek hai!
He turns and begins walking towards his room...this girl had gained entry into his life without his permission ....hope so his heart wouldn't face the same situation!!!
Kasturi- Er, Robbie kitchen kahan hai?
Robbie-Us taraf(pointing the direction)

Robbie finished his bath...wiped himself dry and put on a greyish Tee-shirt(thank god it isn' black or white!). He stared at his image in the mirror...was he truely handsome?...and if he was he revelled in it for her... He looked out of the window and saw Kasturi setting the tea table....this girl was far from aware of what sensations she was creating, what feelings she was stirring up in his heart...

She saw him coming...and her mouth sagged on its hinges...
Kasturi- Hai Main maarijawa soniyo!!! Tu to bada dashing lag raha hai!
Robbie gave a dimpled smile which would have sent any other girl into a fainting fit of delight....but kasturi?
Kasturi- Tu mujhe yeh sona sona smiles baad me bhi de saka hai...hum abhi ek 'Out-Of-Season' Horse racing competition ke liye jaa rahe hai....chai jaldi peele warna thanda ho jayegi.
Robbie- Kya 'out-of-season' horse racing woh kya hota hai?
Kasturi- Meri ek achi dost Jaanu ne mujhe iske liye bulaya hai...kya hai ki mein thodi hatke se hoon isliye muhe ajeeb ajeeb cheez bahut pasand hai...is race mein gurukul college ke pass-outs hissa lenge...you know passion ke liye..koi betting-shetting nahi hogi magar bahut mazaa ayega kyunki wahaan sirf tum,jaanu aur main honge...sirf hum log!!!
Robbie-Theek hai
He smiled to himself and sipped the steaming tea...Kasturi's attitude was adorable....he felt..he felt...no way..this cant be happening...she was after all in her terms "dost"!

He drove to the race course wid kasturi inecting him with her happy-go-lucky disposition.
Kasturi- Tumhara Fav. hero kaun hai?Amitabh bacchan, Abhi, SRK...bolo na
Robbie- mera waise koi bhi evergreen fav.nahi hai magar abhi ke liye mujhe Aamir khan ki acting bahut hi pasand aata hai aur shahid kapoor ki looks!
Kasturi- Arre mera bhi fav. actors Aamir and shahid hai.....actresses mein kaun sabse pasand hai?
Robbie- Mujhe to sabhi acche lagte hai...
Kasturi- Oye hoi...tum to ek bade flirt ho!
Kasturi cheerfully interrogated his likes and dislikes...all the way and at last they reached the race course. Jaanu, Kasturi's friend was there in he stands...as soon as she saw robbie she screeched
Jaanu- OMG....kya main sapna dekh rahi hoon!!! Tum to robbie sabarwal ho!
Robbie- Haan
Kasturi- tum isse janti ho?[confused to the core]
Jaanu-(utterly delighted by meeting her fav. rockstar)I am pleased o meet u! 'Pleased' ek bahut weak word hai...I never imagined I'd meet you here o all places....Kasturi tum isse nahi jaanti?
Kasturi- jaanti hoon na yeh mera dost robbie hai!
Jaanu-Dost!! kis tarah ka?
Kasturi- Mera naya dost jisse main ooty ghumane wali hoon!
Jaanu- Pagli yeh India ka sabse bada rockstar hai!
Kasturi unable to digest the information faced robbie
Kasturi- Tum rockstar ho?
Robbie- Yah now u know me!
Kasturi- Shakal se to nahi lagta....
Robbie- Kya matlab?
Kasturi- woh maine kabhi nahi socha ki um itne famous aur jaane-maane honge!
Kasturi thinks for a moment..
Robbie- kya hua um ini chup chap kyun ho gayi?
Kasturi-tum to rockstar ho na?
Robbie- Ha
Kasturi- Tum gaate ho right?
Robbie- Right....
Kasturi- To aaj raat tum mere liye gaana gayoge..
Robbie- Isme kaunsi badi baat hai..
Kasturi-(really excited)Mere liye badi baat hai kyunki mere liye kisi ne ab tak gaana nahi gaaya...I like to have a taste of everything in life....
Robbie- tumh pata hai...tum bilkul paagal ho!
Kasturi- Koi shak? Ab race shuru hon waala hai..us pe dhyan do.
Robbie felt an emptiness filling his heart when he thought of the life he would have in Mumbai after he returned.......minus kasturi....
do comment! 😃

Kasturi is sooo similar to geet from jab we met... loll!!!! loved da update, robbie is already fallin for her... how vute... cnt wait for the nxt part!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Kasturi is sooo similar to geet from jab we met... loll!!!! loved da update, robbie is already fallin for her... how vute... cnt wait for the nxt part!

Main to ussi se inspiration le rahi thi but dont worry yeh woh geet nahi ban jayegi jo tut ke bikhar gay thi anshuman ke refusal se...my kasturi is a 20% geet character...uske aur bhi nature's hai...yani ki aur colours hai is rainbow mein maine to sirf Violet colour tumhe dikhaya!!!

WOW Pallaviiii, that was amazing, yaar, i luv really luv your depiction of kasturi, shes soo cute, sassy, funny and just happy go lucky... mujhe aasahi log paasaand hain, joi dil main hain woh muh pe wohi hain...👏 shes sooo funny the way she just takes charge.. robbie is literally falling in to step with her and in luv with her.. its soo cute...😳 nooo dont make robbie leave too soon, i want him and kasturi to get ultra close before he leaves..

and me too saw a little of geet from jwm, but like you said there are differences as well...

very refreshing storyline.. cant wait to see what happpens next.. i wonder what song robbie will choose to sing for kasturi

okay aub jaaldi jaalid next part likho please.eeee

luv robina dii

oh robina diii I am glad you liked it...well robbie is gonna leave or sure but dat doesnt mean kasturi and he will be ar way 4m each other...I can bear to par them 😳 well I revealed to you quie a bit...but read along to see....kasturi's other shades 😉