Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 8

Originally posted by: nrasheed

OMG pallavi, so sorry, how did i forget to leave my comments, i'm a complete duffer...😡

it was a beautiful part, i luved that song from JWM.. and i could totally imagine robbie singing that...👏

this ronauk is trouble for kasturi or what???

so robbie is taking kasturi with him yipeeeeee. i cant wait for them to start falling for each other... simply a very intersting part, yaar, you have magic, it takes me such long parts to write to get any interest genereated, but you in just the right length, covey every emotion and keep the reader coming back.. totally impressive Pallavi.. simply luv your writing...

continueee sooonnnn.

luv robina diiiii👏👏

di you kill me with your FF dont make me blush so hard I am not used to it😳!!!

hi

i am regular reasder of ff and i love it but i think this time to forgot to post the next we all r waiting for the next part plz post the next part sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

yippe guys I am back !!!! Ma eggjams were smashing!!! I will serve you the update hot and cispy tomorrow I have to cach up wid all ma serials 😆
will be back soon!!!

here is the update sorry 4 the delay it was cause of ma exams!!!


Kasturi's house was tastefully furnished..
Kasturi-Robbie make yourself comfortable I'll freshen up and be back
Robbie-Sure
Robbie was delighting in the small intricate designing of the house...His eyes fell on a diary...
Curiosity driven he was soon flipping through the pages of the diary..
Her high school snaps had been pasted...she was quite popular he observed...all the guys had an eye on her. Her snaps revealed that she was a big hotshot....and had her own gang!
Some more snaps were glued...her prom night (she looked stunning in a navy blue knee length halter neck dress)...She being crowned Best photogenic face, Most popular teen events organiser, The biggest sports-addict...
Her frequently fluctuating likes and dislikes had been scribbled in her pearly handwriting at the beginning of each new week...(way to go man!!! she always updated her likes)
Her First crush-Aazaan Khan(soccer club president)
Her First date-A big faliure coz the guy was a study-worshipper and bent on drowning Kasturi in an ocean of chemical equations and physics derivations not to forget biological specimens and mathmatetical theorems(Robbie could imagine that million dollar expression of Kasturi's!!!!)
Her first gift-A sack of shopping lists behind which a dozen sher's and shayari's had been scribbled by some nerdy admirer...
Robbie was raking with laughter Kasturi sure had an interesting life...
Kasturi-Looks like I have to begin a teaching my new friend some basic manners...
Robbie was startled at being caught in the middle of a big laughing fit with Kasturi's diary in his hand...
Robbie-I am sorry just got tempted far...
She had changed into a pair of creamish cargoes and a reddish tee-shirt...she looked ravishing..
Kasturi-It's okay after all you are ma friend...
Robbie-Sounds very profitable!!!
Kasturi- I can still remember those days of high school...we were a terrific gang...and Ridhima,Armaan and me were the life of the entire school...college days were also smashing...well I must say God packed my life wid loads of fun and friendship....but all this was before the menace called Alka chachi came barging into my life....I am so glad that phase of my life is over!!!
Robbie-So wats up wid you and Raunak....???

The students of 'Ooty Great heights'(this college is my creation it doesn't actually exist) were chewing their nails and moods wid high excitement levels. Their academic schedule had been disrupted due to the upcoming youth festival and tournament which included three other prestigious colleges- Gurukul, Idea front college and Riverdale International(Guys borrowed the college from Mr. Weatherbee or rather archie andrews...any objections? )
Kasturi had taken up charge and organised a big welcome party for these reputed institutions. Girls were looking forward a change in boys...Gurukul consisted only of Boys and so all the girls of OGH eagerly awaited the arrival of Gurukul students but to their dismay Gurukul students would be the last to arrive...Never mind they decided to enjoy the delicacies of Riverdale and Idea Front till time was ripe for hotter dishes. The tournament consised of several competions and was mainly aimed at creating a niche of friendship amongst the students...a way of promoting exchange of ideas and opinions and flavouring each other with new blends.
Kasturi and her gang consisted of
Armaan-Handsome,humourous and the unrivalled prankster

Ridhima-Understanding,Fiery and cutely naughty

Aalana-Showy, pompous and yet trust-worthy
(same as in the show)
Preet-Life of the gang,cheeky and adorable

The 6th place in the gang was temporary Kasturi's current boyfriend usually occupied it and at that time it was a cool guy named Shabd.
This gang was envied for its unbreakable bonds of trust among themselves, their depth of friendship and most importantly the fact that they would even give up their lives for each other..
No people weren't over-exaggarating when they said the last thing it was A UNDENIABLE TRUTH AND AN UNDEFIABLE FACT!!! This gang worshipped TRUST and amazingly it wasn't a friendship that lasted till some particular timimg it was a rippling relationship that reverbrated and unleashed everlasting melodies....
Their motto was engraved the wrist bands they wore F2...'FRIENDS FIRST!'
The youth festival was an outlet for this gang cause all the academics had been sucking out their lives.Kasturi was a genius...she had an inborn and natural flair for Arts be it anything...infact she was so confused as to which stream she should pursue cause everything seemed alluring...
The rest were satisfactory leaving aside Shabd who was a wizard at Sports and Brilliant at academics.

The welcome party had begun and students were mixing up ....It was a big event ...
Ridhima was looking stunning in a black halter neck top and cream knee-length skirt. Kasturi had donned an off the shoulder black dress...she looked ravishing. Aalana had looked pretty with but she had overdone her make up...kasturi repaired the damage but too late all he boys had been taken up and so poor Aalana stormed away to her room. Preet was dressed in casuals and a white tee shirt with wonky designs(He had buttered Ridhima to scribble with different colour pens on thw plain white shirt...he wanted to go 4 d trendy look...but shot past it to the clowny look!!!)
Armaan was packaged as a style bomb in grey cotton shirt and black denims...
Kasturi was enjoying herself thoroughly wid shabd who looked smashing in a black outfit which would have made anyone else look like a weirdo!!! He was really handsome Kasturi had to admit cause the girls of Riverdale were eyeing him longingly as if he were a piece of candy...poor kids! Kasturi thought.
Her cell buzzed and she excused herself 4m the merriment and walked outside in the tranquility of the secretive night to attend the call...It was from Divya who was away on a holiday(she studied in the same college but she had got permission from the Principal to skip the Youth festival and instead go holidaying and working on her journalism...she was very focussed!)
Kasturi- Hi!
Divya-Di! I am really missing you! It is dead boring out here...
Kasturi- Divya why dont you pack your bags and come back by the next flight it is really brimming with fun here..
Divya-Wish I could do that di but it is impossible I met Andreas McMaster he is a top journo hre and has agreed to give me tips and suggestions in improving my journo abilities!
Kasturi-That's great! I promise when you get back here I will compensate for all the boredom you are facing there...
Divya-ok di gotta go! I love you!
Kasturi-Love you and take care!
Kasturi and Divya were close sisters but above that they were thick and inseparable pals!!! Kasturi sighed...she missed her lil' sis(she was a few months older than divya!)
It was really dark and suddenly she crashed into someone...their voices clashed
"Hey! watch out you brat!!!!"....."Mind your step you poor sighted Pig!!!"

Kasturi came back to present Robbie was looking at her amused..
Robbie-Was that Raunak?
Kasturi-yah who else?
Robbie sniggered ..."what a intro!!!"
Kasturi loved his laugh ...it was downright sexy...She recalled tha night when he had saved her ...so romantic...he snapped his fingers and cut through her reverie...
Robbie-Phir kya hua?....
Kasturi wanted to blurt out "I fell crashing in love" ...the image of her in robbie's arms fresh in her mind.....she resisted and continued her narration.....

hope you guys liked it...plz do comment!

Pallavi Pallavi Pallavi....

Tell me one thing "I fell crashing in love" was it supposed to be with Ra as she is dreaming Ro.....😆 And Divya as Kas's sis......IMPOSSIBLE...😆 and the gang is superb cool man..esp with Preet and Allu....My two favs...😳 So so so the Gurukuls are the para inthe path nah...Hm we'll see and Kas looked more than dashing with a crown ok

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CONTINUE SOON...😳

jaanu

Originally posted by: GAPS

Pallavi Pallavi Pallavi....

Tell me one thing "I fell crashing in love" was it supposed to be with Ra as she is dreaming Ro.....😆 And Divya as Kas's sis......IMPOSSIBLE...😆 and the gang is superb cool man..esp with Preet and Allu....My two favs...😳 So so so the Gurukuls are the para inthe path nah...Hm we'll see and Kas looked more than dashing with a crown ok

and

👏 +

NOW

CONTINUE SOON...😳

jaanu

Kasturi was about to say that coz she had been dreaming about Robbie and herself...but surely if she said it aloud ...to Robbie's ears it would have sounded as if she fell for raunak instantly🤢....she was just comparing both the first meetings in her mind😆!!!!

chalo jaanu...u want me to drag you in again😉? I will be glad to do so😆!!!!

and thanx 4 liking it😉!!!

awwww palavi... it was such a wonderful part, i luved the description of the Gang!! they seem so close knit, brought back some memories of my school days.. awww... 😃

Robbie reading kasturi's diary, very nosy of him😉 but all is fair in luv and war.. right!!!

take riverdale int. school had me from the archie comic books, that had me😆 very cleaver of you..👏 and i died laughing at the line when kasturi and Ronauk bumped into each other fantastic.. man your humour is awesome...

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🤣 you nailed it.. cant wait for the next part jaaldi likhoo please..robina di