Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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herez the update
(PART 3) DESTINY AT WORK.....
Robbie was woken up by the driver "Sir, hum Ooty pahunch gaye hai."
A sleepy Robbie looks at his surroundings....it was paradise and nothing less than that! Lofty mountains covered by mist...flowers of captivating hues peeping out and sipping the morning dew...plumaged birds chirping away cheerily...the whispering winds sharing their secrets with the dancing trees...butterflies fluttering about joyously making the most of their well-deserved freedom...leaves rustling and breaking the heavenly silence!!!!
He was in love with this place.....it was absolutely angelic!!!
He rummaged his bag and found the little slip of paper on which Girish had scribbled the address of the place he was gonna stay..
It read- Havelock road,lovelane,brantwood house
The owners of the house the Ravishankars were holidaying in Australia and had agreed to let Robbie stay in their house coz Girish was like their son.
He handed the driver the address and lazed back onto his seat...he was feeling very unusual...as though destiny was authoring his tale now....

On the lonely cliffs painted with rocks and patches of lush greenery a girl was seated on a bench. Her hair was open and the flirtatious breeze was teasing it...she a pure beauty ...eyes vividly sparking off the themes of her dreams...lips luxurious with the priceless treasure of a genuinely sweep-u-off-u-feet smile...she was busy making an entry in her diary
Dear Diary,
Today is a new day ....with a fresh hope. My entire life is feeding on hopes...please let this be the day unfolding a new chapter in the book of my life...
Destiny has set her wheels rolling girlie....
Robbie reached Brantwood....It was huge and lavishly arranged...everything was perfect!!!!
Robbie was so tired that he feel onto the lage kingsized bed and went rolling down into his world of dreams....He would freshen up later and unpacking...well that would be even later....right now it is dream-time baby!!!

She flipped open to the first page of her diary...the diary gave us her introduction Kasturi Chawla
She picked up a photograph that lay well hidden amongst the pages of her diary....It showed two girls..both good-looking ![No points for guessing ..yes it is divya and kasturi]
She murmurmed into the air "I miss you divya"
"Kasturi" a loud voice boomed .She screamed back"Ayi Chachi"
Poor kasturi...Alka chachi and pooja, her daughter were her only living relatives apart from her sister divya. They made sure that they left no stone unturned to torture the chawla sisters. Divya had got fed up with the daily torture and had run away from home leaving behind a lonely and tearful kasturi....She had contacted from Mumbai and informed that she had become a successful journalist...kasturi was very happy for her. Divya had sent kasturi a ticket to come to bombay but unfortunately Alka chachi had found it and torn it to bits....Kasturi was left heartboken...only hoping with her devastated heart that maybe one day all this will come to an end...but when? was the big question...........
Alka chachi(AC)- Kasturi tumne pooja ki shopping ki?
Kasturi-Yeh rahi uski nailpolish aur remover and here is the change...
AC- yelch! yeh kaisa colour hai? Tumhari taste bahut hi ghatiya hai!!!
Kasturi- Magar chachi this is the latest fashion...maine ek fashion magazine min padha tha...
AC- Tum aur Fashion!!! Impossible kasturi....
Kasturi could feel tears scorching her eyes....why did chachi hate her so much?
She glided out of the house to seek solace amongst nature...it was the only remedy and it washed her with relief!!!
Edited by livelygal - 17 years ago
TheLastCarnival thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no replies....is it really sooo boring???
GEETH20 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

🤗

and So Divya and Kastoo sis.👏.Wonderfull..my god Yaar pls..let Ro see Kas being bashed and love her a looooot..
UPDATE SOOOOON...

Jaanu

TheLastCarnival thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Thanx jaanu....it was really very encouraging!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: livelygal

hey Thanx jaanu....it was really very encouraging!!!

So plssssssssssssss yaar make me meet Ro by the Lake when i'm boating😳and U deserve more than an encouragement buddy😃

jaanu

TheLastCarnival thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sure...just continue reading my next 2 updates I assure You that you will meet robbie!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome ff, i jus caught up wid it... it absolutely ROCKS!!!! Cnt wait to read da nxt part!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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presenting

(PART 4) PEHLI NAZAR..

Robbie awoke just as the sun dipped into the distinct horizion...the point of tryst for the zenith and earth...He looked about...and then remembered he was in ooty. He would have to arrange for a skilled guide. In a short span of time he had freshened up and unpacked...this huge mansion was empty! He needed a helper...he would see to all that later right now he was in the full mood for a walk. He quickly clad a navy blue sweat shirt and black jeans and made an exit from that house. The view was beautiful! He could see young students of hotel management dressed smartly flood out of the hotel management institute Southern Star. He slowly walked enjoying nature's caresses...the breezy wind....fondly bushing his hair.....
[guys imagine a lone robbie in this surrounding...this pic is of a place in ooty]

Kasturi looked at her watch...She had been away too long now she would have to answer AC's irritating questions...
She broke into a run....
Robbie drank in the delicious silence...the chill was peircing. A small tea stall was there near by he walked towards it. The owner was a boy blossoming into teens.Robbie sat on a bench and ordered some hot and refreshing tea.
Boy- Saab aap yahaan pehli baar aaye hai?
Robbie-Haan
Boy- Aap kahan reh rahe ho?
Robbie- Brantwood house mein...tumhara naam kya hai?
Boy- Mera naam to Dev hai magar sab mujhe chotu kehke bulate hai.
Robbie- To chotu tumhare parivaar me kaun kaun hai?
Chotu- Sirf main aur meri maa..
Robbie- Tum mera ek kaam kar sakte ho?
Chotu- Bataiye
Robbie-Mujhe ek guide ki zaroorat hai kya tum woh arrange kar sakte ho?
Chotu- Saab aap to paisewale dikhte ho aap tourism office jaa kar kyun nahi dekhte?
Robbie- Woh kya hai na...mujhe ek aisi guide chahiye jo mujhe ek customer ki tarah nahi balki ek dost ki tarah ghumaega...uski is jagah se lagav hona chahiye...aur tourism office mein guides ka pesha hai ghumana phirana is liye woh mujhe sab jagah dikha to denge magar meri pehchan is jagah se nahi kar payenge....tum samjh rahe ho na main kya keh raha hoon?
Chotu- Haan Haan ho jayega kaam.
Robbie- Chalta hoon ....kal milenge!
Chotu- main intezar karunga!

Robbie decided to take one last stroll before retiring to his lonely house...Stars had revealed themselves on the velvety firmament...it was lovely....this place was dead-damn beautiful...He was busy looking at the dark sky swirling with its secets when he felt someone bump into him...

Kasturi ran..racing against the wind...Alka chachi would fry her today...Suddenly she espied a man walking slowly in his own sweet world of thoughts...she couldn't control her feet and bumped into he man...real hard...the gushing wind sent her hair flying over her face and she felt a firm grip around her waist preventing her from kissing the ground...

Robbie caught her in his strong grip...her face was hidden by the satiny silkiness of her richly black hair...then a pair of eyes...electrifyingly beautiful faced him...those eyes spoke volumes....liveliness, a unique cheerfullness was there but above all that was a thick film of distress..

She had no time to waste...she broke his grip and continued running after mumbling an inaudible 'Sorry' and 'Thanks'....
Her voice was a melody to his ears...there was a naturalness in her tone...Suddenly the words of his friend boomed into his thoughts..." There is no greater danger than beauty in distress!!!"
"Forget her!!!" His mind told....."But can you?" his heart questioned.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😍 my God i'm still dreaming baby..Excellent use of words...Simply and humbly marvellous...update soooooooooooooooonn...OK and er... kuch nahi...😛

Jaanu

Edited by GAPS - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwww da bst line ever "Forget her!!!" His mind told....."But can you?" his heart questioned. such a sweet line😳 so alka is kasturi's boss 😉 this is going 2 b a tuff job 4 kasturi😉😆 ooty seems a beautifull place😳

continue soon😊

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