Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 6

Wow Pallavi.........that was a very very good part!!! I absolutely loved the way Robbie said.."speedy shaadi"!!! 😲 I swear I was shocked and then I burst out laughing!!! 😆 😆 😆
That was too good!!! 👏 👏 👏
And as you said, even I am surprised that Kasturi did not retort, toh usspeh bhi Robbie ka jadoo thoda chal gayaa?? 😉 Awesome!!!!

OK, one statement confused me...........3 spectators and 8 racers.......why 3 spectators only? Why is there no other audience?
And I absolutely loved the way you introduced Raunak Mehta 👏 👏 😊 ......so unexpectedly and then so much suspense around him!!!
I cannot help but ask, what is with him and Kasturi???? 😕

When is the next update??? 😛

Oh and the race course looks amazing..........so picturesque!!!

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Wow Pallavi.........that was a very very good part!!! I absolutely loved the way Robbie said.."speedy shaadi"!!! 😲 I swear I was shocked and then I burst out laughing!!! 😆 😆 😆
That was too good!!! 👏 👏 👏
And as you said, even I am surprised that Kasturi did not retort, toh usspeh bhi Robbie ka jadoo thoda chal gayaa?? 😉 Awesome!!!!

OK, one statement confused me...........3 spectators and 8 racers.......why 3 spectators only? Why is there no other audience?
And I absolutely loved the way you introduced Raunak Mehta 👏 👏 😊 ......so unexpectedly and then so much suspense around him!!!
I cannot help but ask, what is with him and Kasturi???? 😕

When is the next update??? 😛

Oh and the race course looks amazing..........so picturesque!!!

Oh thanx a lot pagz di I am glad that u liked it...waise sif teen spectators the kyunki yeh koi real race nahi tha...only sum pass-out students 4m gurukul college were racing for their own fun ....jaanu who was raunak's friend was d only one who had been invited ...she had in her turn invited kasturi who luved anything out of normal and anything which involved fun...actual racing in ooty takes place during a particular season...I was trying to portray dat this race is out of season...

Next update will be on thursday😃

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hey pallavi
hw r u?
lolz what a gr8 part
Just read it Racing huh
i loved it kasturis falling 4 robbie although she dnt knw it lolz
Robbies sense of humour will never stop huh lolz dts sweet
BTW u knw what Raunak huh a race driver thats interesting whats going to happen nxt lol.

Pallavi.........its way past Thursday!!! 😉

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Pallavi.........its way past Thursday!!! 😉

oops sorry I forgot I owned an FF here also😆!!! I was busy updating my other FF on the KDMHMD forum!!! Gee thanx 4 d reminder😳 well I'll do it tomorrow I guess!

Hey Pallavi lolz
Ok will be waiting for next part 2morow dn lolz

Hey pallavi ...just finshed with all parts ...one word come in my Mind ...Mindblowing 👏👏

Hey dear u are just 15 ..itni choti ho tum ..lekin u are very talented 👏....I love everypart very well written 👏😳

main next part wait kar rahi hoon ..jaldi update karna 😳

Manpreet

pallavi when are you updating your next part, please do it sooon. 😃
waiting anxiously..
robina di

PALLAVIIIIIIIIII !!!!!!

actually what shall i say my dear dearest buddy..I think i read it 4 times to make sure i read it right..PHEW i almost forgot to breath.Superb track dear ..and Raunak and Me friends..🤣 Man u make me laugh so hard dear. OK true i too love races esp Car racing.😳 and Horse racing..hmmm sounds yummy.and last week when i went to Kodai, I went on a sweet lil horse. Hmmm so Now i am back here on horse racing wow..OK dear lemme calm down now after such a gr8 gr8 suprise and sorry i forgot to say this...

Er.. UR Robbie and Kasturi are really so "Horsey"😆 esp the lil pony Kasturi😉

OK so update soon and really soon......

Jaanu

Originally posted by: nrasheed

pallavi when are you updating your next part, please do it sooon. 😃
waiting anxiously..
robina di

yaar main kya karu main tumhari tarah itni talented nahi hoon di😳!!! I have to do three FF's at one go😕!!! I am really tired but I am planning to update this one today I guess I kept ppl waiting too long!!!