Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 3

Ok Ooty such a nice place 😆
K ive just caught up with your parts gr8 job 👏

Omg in your FF alka cha chi and her daughters pooja wowwwww. 😆 😆 😆 Atleast their is no poojas mum in your ff. So Divya & Kasturi sisters thats kul.

Becahri Kasturi thought she was alone in the world, well guess shes got Robbie now.
Now update the nxt part soon.
Cnt w8 2 read it
XxXx
👏 👏

Ooty is beautiful !!!!
@ jaanu - deary read the upcoming part...ur surprise lies there
@ manveen- Thanx a lot buddy!!! Yah I too love that line!
@ Princie- Thanx deary just continue reading...

Awesome.. kool they bumped into an each other... luved da last line.. wat a way to meet.. cnt wait to read da nxt part!!

This is it...

(PART 5) NEWLY FOUND!!!
Kasturi could feel the mixture of feelings churning in her heart...Alka chachi had thrown kasturi out of the house...out of her life forever...Kasturi should have been crying her heart out..on the contrary she was beaming with supreme gladness...she had newly found a freedom ...a freedom which no person on earth could snatch from her...she had to inform divya. Divya would be delighted!!!
Suddenly it stuck kasturi..how would she live these few days. 'Few days' I say bcoz kasturi had applied for a job and was expecting her call letter but till then what would she do??? She could stay in the outhouse her father had constructed for her after she had received her 12th board results but then the other daily necessities...how would she afford them?!? She needed an immediate job...a short-spaned one. A voice crashed her plane of thoughts..."Kasturi dii inti raat gaye aap kya ka rahe hai?"
She turned to face the speaker.
Kasturi- Are chotu!!! tu hai!!! Kuch nahi yaar alka chachi ne ghar se nikal diya.
Chotu-Magar di kyun?
Kasturi- Main ghar mein de pahunchi isliye!
Chotu- Ab tum kahan rahoge?
Kasturi- Mere bauji ne jo ghar mee au divya ke liye chod diya tha wahan!
Magar mere paas khane peene keliye paisa nahi hai....nahi hai....Agar J.P.Chawla ko pata hoa ki unki beti ko aisa din dekhna padega....
J.P.Chawla had been the third richest man in ooty..He had everything in life...except one thing-"PROBLEMS"! His two daughters were brought up lavishly and never lacked any thing in life be it materialistic or love!!! Due to an unfortunate accident he passed away leaving his children in the care of Alka-a witch in sister's disguise! His will declared that all his property was to be equally shared between his two daughters but they could take legal authority over their property only after BOTH of them were assured job security. A clever and tactful father...he didnt want his lovely daughters to become lazy bumpkins who lived off their lives on their father's money. He wanted them to taste the sweetness of sweat, the delicacy of toil, the rapture of effort! And cunning Alka had seen to i that they were never offered jobs...she infact didn't allow them to fill their job application forms....and this had resulted in Divya's running away from home determined to make somehing of her life...But alka didn't let kasturi ever take any job...thus barricading their way to their rightful property coz one of them-Kasturi didn't have a job. Things had taken their own turn today...adding to Alka's anger at kasturi's late arrival was the xerox of the job application kasturi had sent secretly...and the unexpected result o this anger was instant dismissal from the house.
Chotu-(dimag ki batti jal gayi) Kya tum kuch dino ke liye guide ban sakte ho?
Kasturi- Kya?
Chotu- Ek naya admi aaya hai..brantwood mein reh raha hai...usse ek aisi guide ki zaroorat hai jo professional nahi hai...jo usse ek customer ki tarah nahi balki ek dost ki tarah ghumaega...
Kasturi- Haan magar..
Chotu- no if's and but's its done. Kal subah tum mere saath aana ....
Kasturi- theek hai raat bahut ho gayi hai main chalti hoon
Chotu- Bhulna mat di jaldi aajana

Kasturi silently creeps into the outhouse and without wasting time plunges into the icy waters of sleep....
The sun playfully hides in kasturi's room and she opens her eyes to its sizzling warmth...Her father had constructed this place beautifully..
Wanna see Kasturi's place??? Here take a look...

Vague pieces of last night's conversaion wih chotu flashed b4 her..She dashes through her daily chores and presented a glad face b4 chotu in his tea stall. He eyed her sternly
Chotu-Di aap late hai!
Kasturi- Ab jaldi karo ...plz!
Chotu- Theek hai chalo

Robbie slept fitfully ...those breath-taking pair of eyes were a source of constant trouble...Morning knocked on robbie's window and he awoke to a thrilling(I am predicting the future in dis word) Reality!
A knock greeted his ears and he went to open the door.....Some mind-based intuition kicked him"You are opening the door to your troubles"....The heart based intution piped in.."You are opening the door to the best thing ever gonna happen in your life!"... With unsure,shaking hands he opened the door...
His eyes viewed a beaming Chotu and then....a pair of breath-taking eyes!!!!
He gasped aloud "Tum!!!!"...and at the same moment she said "Aap!!!"
First collision of bodies...then eyes...and now voices!!!.......Would their feelings also collide or was it destined to become one ,shared feeling!?!?!?

👏 Wow you write so well!! Good play of words.....you totally set the scene....with the descriptions and pictures 👏 👏

RoKa have finally met......waiting to find out how their hearts meet! 😉 😃 😃

Kay

Absolutely amazin part... cnt wait to read da nxt part.. wen dey actually will be together... really interestin!!!!!

yaar such few responses!!!😭 😭 Is it really so boring?

Hey
No of course your FF is not broing dnt ever say that gain 😆
Gr8 part sorry im replyin l8 just caught up with your last part.
Wel Alka cha chi kiked kasturi out 😡 wel guess thats her key to freedom away from her so thats gud. Wel The house is so beautiful luky 4 kasturi that her father kept her a house. So awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i hope Kastrui and Divya (thats kasturis sis right?) 😆 😆 meet soon.
Wel now that Kasturis going to be Robbies tourist guide its going to be fun to read. They'll be sweet moments between them.
So ab jaldi se next part post karo 😆 😆 😆
O and gr8 part once again 👏

no yar its amazing con't wait continue soon
by the way when r u posting next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
post as soon as possible

Pallavi.........finally I caught up op on your new FF! I have just read Part 1. It was FANTASTIC!!!!! 👏
The entry you gave Robbie Sabaharwal was mind-blowing!!!!! And the slam book idea..........very original 👏 👏 👏 awesome dear!!!!!
This entry was even better than the other one and you used IPL as the background, very nice!!! 😆
I am going to catch up on the other parts and comment soon........