Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10

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Hi guys I am really sorry for not continuing my previous fanfic-tumse hi...well my monitor had gone for a sixer along with my processor...so I could not update or read any of ur posts!!!It was hell and finally the wait is over I am very much excited to see where all ur fanfics have reached!!!

I am back and I seriously hope I didn't miss much!!!!Well the show is going I dunno which way-good or bad...cant say..well I am confused totally..is raunak pretending or is he really a victim of memory loss...and why the hell is robbie feeling soooo muuchhh for raunak-I guess humanity's sake!!!!

chalo yaar main ek naya fanfic shuru kar rahi hoon kyunki I guess I lost watever idea I had for the previous fanfic's continuation...hope so like my previous fanfic you ppl give me ur much needed support...please do read and give suggestions!

PYAR KI DASTAAN.....

(PART 1) THUNDERING EVENT!!!!

Rapturous festivity is saturating the air ....ppl are bathed in enthusiasm and high-levelled excitement.......You are WELCOME to the live [Indian Premier League(IPL)] cricket match ensuing between the fiery kolkata knight riders and the unstoppable royal challengers bangalore....uuufff the energitic outbursts of activity were infectious.In India ,Cricket is another religion...you have devout worshippers of the cricket-god!!!!This game is an integrating force that binds the country together in a unbreakable bond of togetherness....a true example of unity in diversity.

And to add more glamour and glitz to the starry night ....bollywood ke sitaroan had descended ...sach mein taare zameen par!!!!

Taare...did I say?Yeah stars ....from all walks ....filmstars,superstars,Teledom stars and...ROCKSTARS....All were here to unleash their passion for his irrestible game!

India's most popular hosts were scattered amongst the audiences asking questions and receving mind-blowing or rather ming boggling answers.

Nikhil-(to a certain man)From which place do you hail?

Man-I stay in New York.

Nikhil-You have travelled all the way to view this match...wow you must be crazy about cricket!!!

Man-Oh no!I am not much interested in the match...well I am interested in another match..

Nikhil-I cant get you...

Man-You see in this vast gathering I am hoping to find a handsome and well to do Hindustani hunk for my girl's marriage...I feel this is one place you get to find suitable ppl...wat say?

Nikhil-(Amused to his fullest) Well happy match-making!

The vivacious and pretty Roshini chopra in another part of the gallery.

Roshini-(addressing to a very old granny)Maam apne cricket khelna kahan se sikha?

Lady-Cricket-shicket mujhe nahin aati main toh woh Dravid ko dekhne ayi...woh munda bahut sona hai...

Baffled by the reply she moved on to another person...

Keith looking very excited himself is standing in front of a banner that reads..'we are not here to see the players or the match but to see the actors and dancers!'

Shruti Seth looking extremely lovely is struggling with a bunch of giggly girls.

Shruti-Aap sab kis team ko support kar rahe ho?

Girls-Pata nahi hum to yahaan sirf ....ROBBIE SABARWAL ko dekhne aye hai!

Suddenly the entire stadium quietens ans swoons into an impenetrable(4 d moment!) dead silence ... graveyard type....Then the ice breaks and loud wolfish-whistling and girls hyperactivity drowning in fainting fits...

"haila yeh ladka to kamaal ka cheez hai...","Waah rab ne usko mardalne waala looks di hai....main to marjawa!", "sach me crazy kiya re!", "Robbie,We love You!","East or west Robbie is the best!"

Robbie Sabarwal....the theme of many wild fantasies,the heart throb of millions,the most promising and popular figure of the decade....

Robbie Sabarwal,a rockstar earning recognition both in the homeland and abroad...

Let me personally introduce you to Robbie's interests and dislikes.....

ROBBIE SABARWAL'S SLAM BOOK ENTRY...(when he finished 12th)

Name-

Robbie Sabarwal

Pals call me-

Robbie

My location on the globe-

Mumbai(India)

I dropped onto this planet on-

I wanna grow up to be-

THE BEST ROCKSTAR EVER!!!

A few my kinda ppl-

I am original piece....there is no one like me so gotta be I,Me,myself!

I hang around with them-

my seaside house where only I am allowed.

My hunger hunt ends with-

ne junk stuff!

One person I wanna lock up and throw away the keys-

Prof. Chadda(chemistry teacher)

Most embarassing moment-

you expect me to remember it ,relive it....and uppermost disclose it!!!!No way....you got that!!!

describe your soulmate-

good looking, lively with a great sense of humour,in whose presence I forget myself...yaar I cant describe but when I see her I'll recognize right away!

A addiction you cant overcome-

Racing..especially bikes and horses

wat you feel abt yourself?-

Well in 4 small words-

I am the best!!!!!!!!

Autograph-

zINDAGI ROCKS!!!!!

Robbie-THE ROCKSTAR!!!!

Date-

13.10.2004

Yeh tha robbie sabarwal....char saal pehle aur ab woh sach me 'the ultimate,the best rockstar' ban gaya hai!!!!!

He looked sinfully handsome,the brilliance o his dark eyes gave the onlookers the unnerving sensation of sinking, a light stubble shaded his jaw giving him more strikingly stunning looks and a captivating smile played around his lips which sent the heart of every girl fluttering wildly…

Soon he reached his place (lucky seat!!!Many girls were crooning) and the match began…

wat do u think guys?kaisi lagi?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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me first 😃
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so sad i was waiting 4 tum se hi nxt part😔 but dsnt matt u started a new one😃 wiv fresh ideas😉

lv da part 😳ummmm so yeh tha robbie sabarwall 4 yrs ago 😆hmmm robbie's slam book is nyc😳

continue soon😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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whoa where r all of you?sirf ek reply....
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presenting part two

(PART 2) ONE MORE TO ADD...
Cricket no doubt was one of Robbie's favorite sports but at the moment all his interest for the game had evaporated into thin air..He was busily observing the girl seated by his side.
Introducing you ppl to Divya Chawla



She was gifted with pure loveliness and bordered on the 'Most Beautiful' line but she was surprisingly unaffected by Robbie's charismatic presence. Even more amusing was the idea that she was weilding a pen in one hand and a notepad in another and was furiously scribbling away the highlights of the match with sound-surpassing speed.
Robbie-Hi! Robbie...naam to suna hoga!
Girl-(For the first time giving him some attention)Hi...U are Robbie-the rockstar?
Robbie-Sahi pehchana.
Girl-Hi...main Divya hoon.
Robbie-(turning on his full charm to impress)Maine tumhe kahin dekha hai..
Divya-(well aware of this outdated trick)Nahi ....aur main kissi ki behan nahin hoon nahi main kissi parties attend karti hoon.
Robbie-(to himself)yeh try to flop hona hi tha akhir yeh Robbie ka original patane wala style to nahi hai......(aloud to Divya) Tum kahan ki rehne waali ho?
Divya- Mumbai ki
Robbie-Tum yeh highlihts kyun likh rahe ho?
Divya-Main ek journalist hoon aur mujhe is openening match ke baare mein ek article likhna hai
Robbie-Highlights to tumhe internet pe bhi mil jayenge..phir itni taqleef kyun utha rahe ho?
Divya-Apne aap highlights likhne me kuch aur hi mazaa hai.
Robbie- Kya tumne kabhi mere baare mein article likhi?
Divya-(Laughing a clear crystal laugh)Nahi ...main tumhe pata hi doon ki main tumhara fan bhi nahi hoon?
Robbie- But why?...I mean kya mera kam tumhe pasand nahi?
Divya- Maine sirf tumhari first concert attend kiya tha...and it was not mindblowing mind u! After all tumhara first impression kharab hogaya....and u know First impression is the last impression.
Robbie-Aur first aur last ke beech jo impresion hain woh to theek ho sakta hai na?
Divya-Sach main tum insan bure nahi ho...magar ab mujhe yeh match follow karne do warna mera boss mujh fire kar dega!!!
Robbie-Sure go ahead.
Robbie turned to face Girish,his best best friend and manager
Girish-Mujhe poochna padega....or u can read my mind?
Robbie-Yaar take a chill pill! Mere next show ki ek ticket hai tere paas?
Girish-Haan magar woh meri behan ke liye hai.
Robbie- Teri behan ko main khud free entry dila dunga tu muhe ticket de.
Girish-Yeh sab zaroori hai kya? Afterall its just the matter of one girl yaar jaane bhi de.
Robbie- Girish life main mera ek funda hai....'You should never deprive yourself of anything!' Aur yeh ladki agar mujhse impressed ho gayi to mera hi faida hoga ....why should I deprive myself or rather my treasure trove of fans of a new addition....every person counts girish...always remember 'Little drops make the mighty ocean.'
Girish-Tu apni yeh bakvas philosophy apne paas hi rakh...aur yeh le ticket
Robbie-Thanx
He handed the ticket to Divya
Divya- Yeh kya hai?
Robbie- Mere agle concert ka ticket.
Divya- Magar kyun?
Robbie- Kya tum mujhe ek bhi chance nahi doge apne aap ko proove karn ke liye?
Divya-Tum to itne bade star ho..aur main....well I am insignificant.
Robbie- Please mana mat karna...I am really hoping to see u at the show
Divya- U r impossible!
Robbie- Woh to main hoon....
The match was nearing is end and now robbie decidd to bestow upon it his undivided concentration...and by the end of it he was literally on th edge of the seat...jubliation was diffused in the air...The Kolkata Knight Riders were the ones going back satisfied....The threatening crowd switched on to its'Out-of-control' mode.
After a lot of struggle Robbie and girish fished out of the maddening crowd ...
Girish- Chalo jaldi se gadi main baitho
Robbie- Are we going all the way to Mumbai?
Girish- Yah is there any change in plans?
Robbie- Mujhe ek holiday pe jaana hai...
Girish- Kya? Tum sach main pagal ho gaye ho! Parso tumhari concert hai!
Robbie- Theek hai magar concert ke baad main holiday ke liye jaa raha hoon aur no frendz and family ...I wanna go alone his time
Girish- jaisi aap ki marzi! I will handle all that right now you concentrate on the concert .
Robbie- Agar tum nahi hote to mera kya hota?
They drove all the way to Mumbai...having fun along....
Robbie Sabarwal ka doosra naam MASTI!!! He could never be serious!!! He was arrogant and stubborn but had a very tender heart underneath. He was an active volcano of attitude..and erupted violently .....Nobody messes with him!!!!
Time turned pages and the concert nite arrived...the crowd was menacing....a great event...Robbie was feeling nervous....for the first time in his entire career graph!!!! What would ppl say if they got to know that robbie,the great was feeling nervous!!!
Time was ripe and robbie made his appearance on the stage....seeing the vast mulitude a feeling of familiarity gripped him...it replaced his uninvited nervousness..
Loud cheering greeted the sound of his richly tuned masculine voice ...his voice boomed...a pleasure to the ears...'Pehli nazar mein kaisa jadoo kardiya.....'
His eyes soon caught sight of Divya amongst the crowd...she had a calculating look in her eyes...his eyes sent the message-Kaisa lag raha hai?
Her thumbs up assured him the new addition to the FAMILY OF ADMIRERS !!!
Concert ended as a great success...
"could it have had any other ending?"Robbie thought to himself....His bag were packed and car was loaded...
Robbie-Waise tumne bataya nahi ki main akhir jaa kahan raha hoon is holiday ke liye?
Girish- Ooty...
"Ooty be ready here he comes!!!!"

PS- those who do not know..Ooty is a lovely hillstation in southern India. People from all walks of life visit it and interestingly ppl settled in ooty are rarely natives!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Pallavi

how r u?

Jus read your 2 parts
wel OMG I love it.

Robbies the rockstar in this FF thats so kul. But Divya huh is that going to be Kasturis sis 😕 😕 😕 Robbie giving her Girishes sisters ticket now i wonder who his sister is?

Update the nxt part soon & yh i lykd d lil part bout Robbie which they said 4 years ago 😆 😆 😆 Oh and Robbie singing PEHLI NAZAR MEIN omg i can so imagine him doing that 😳 😳 😳

Wheather its any one Robbie can impress them with his majic. 😆 😆 😆

Update the nxt part soon. Cant w8 2 read it.

Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kitna acha hai yaar its totally awesome gr luv it!:)
priya!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar where are You ppl? Plz tell me should I stop?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Great FF! was waiting for you to update the other one but never mind....this ones equally gripping! 😃 😃

Loved how you described Robbie 😳 .....his Slambook was cool...really good answers in it 😆 👏

But ye kya?.....whos this Divya girl Robbies interested in? 😆

Will RoKa meet in Ooty? 😉 😳 😳

Update soon! 😃

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏👏 really so good yaar.And why shd Divya come in.😕And yeah i have been to ooty and is going ooty probably next week😳 So i hope i can meet Robbie when i am out there😳

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Whoa I really hope you meet Robbie in ooty...but robbie has told me that he'll meet you only on the condition that U continue reading my FF...so wanna meet robbie? 😆

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