Pyar Ki Dastaan...(New FF)Part 8on pg10 - Page 5

AMAZING! I LOVE your story and the way kasturi speaks is really enjoyable and funny! The whole story is rocking! Please update soon! 👏

Pallavi.........this part was so bubbly!!! I cannot believe how cheerful Kasturi is!!! Her dialogs and her sense of humor (which is actually your's ofcourse 😃 ) is very very cute!! She is like sunlight that spreads around! 😊

And she has completely taken Robbie in her stride!!! 😆 😆 While Robbie was the center of attraction till now, he is not anymore when she is around!!
I see you got our Jaanu, to meet up with the rockstar!! Kyun Jaanu, mazaa aaya rockstar seh milke?? 😉 😆

OK, looking forward for the horse race and the song!!! 😃

just caught up wiv part5 and6 😊 ur a wonderfull writer 😉 👏 i cant believe kas is just like kareena 😉 in jab we met 😳 nd seem u love jab we met 😉 me 2 😆 wat a wonderfull movie isn't
bk 2 da prt 😆 u rock girl 👏 are yeh kya jannu ooty me phunch gayi😲 waha paar akele akele robbie se mill rahi hai 😭 yahan aa abhi dekhti hoon 😡 😆
i dnt like robbie quite 😆 plz make him talk 😆 he just say one or two words 😭 not sentence 😆 plz make him talk 😉 😆
continue soon pallavi 😃

Originally posted by: *princess*15

just caught up wiv part5 and6 😊 ur a wonderfull writer 😉 👏 i cant believe kas is just like kareena 😉 in jab we met 😳 nd seem u love jab we met 😉 me 2 😆 wat a wonderfull movie isn't
bk 2 da prt 😆 u rock girl 👏 are yeh kya jannu ooty me phunch gayi😲 waha paar akele akele robbie se mill rahi hai 😭 yahan aa abhi dekhti hoon 😡 😆
i dnt like robbie quite 😆 plz make him talk 😆 he just say one or two words 😭 not sentence 😆 plz make him talk 😉 😆
continue soon pallavi 😃

woh kya hai na jab bhi robbie kasturi ko dekhta hai woh speechless ho jata hai...magar tere liye usse normal kar deti hoon! Jab We met is one movie that has seriously inspired me!!!!

Hey lively ...very beautiful starting 👏..i like Robbie slambook 😆

actully maine abhi 2 parts read kiye hai ..rest jesse hi Time lagega ..karungi 😳..both parts very well written 👏

ok tell me one thing ...yee Robbie kasturi ki FF hai yaa Robbie Divya ki ??😆

Manpreet

Pallavi..........where is the next instalment??? 😊

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Pallavi..........where is the next instalment??? 😊

tonight dear hopefully!!!

update hasir hai!

(PART 7) THE RACING....HEART!


This a view of the ooty race course
The race began and a ferocious struggle for velocity was taking place...
Robbie was mesmerized by the race...racing had been robbie's passion 4m childhood...the jockey numbered 8 was ahead of the others with the rider numbered 4 closely trying to overtake...
This was getting very heated up...she had said that it was just a race....but then a race is always a race....be it in the season or out of season...
Kasturi- Oh! wow look at him go....amazing man!
Robbie- kasturi tumhe racing pasand hai?
kasturi- kyun koi hai is duniya mein jisse pasand nahi hai?
Robbie- Haan..bahut saare logo ko nahi pasand...
Kasturi- Mujhe speed se jude koi bhi cheez pasand hai...
Robbie- ek speedy shaadi bhi?
Kasturi was stunned...and for the 1st time she had no reply to give...she was feeling weird..this man had managed to ask a question that had shut her mouth...kasturi chawla's mouth...!!!
Robbie teased her with the light hearted twinkle in his eyes...she was without a retort... a gud sign he thought
Kasturi managed a "r u serious?"
Robbie gave a fliratious laughter that sent kasturi weak on her knees...wat was wrong ? kasturi looked at him laughing..... and spraying a charm every where....this man...different......
gasping between laughs he said
Robbie-main mazaak kar raha tha...tumhara chehra ...jaise maine tumhe propose kiya...main to sirf pooch raha tha..if you would prefer a speedy marriage...
Kasturi smiled weakly..and gibbered..."race dekho..."
The race was cuming to a finish....the racer 8 picked up speed and lurged foward leaving the rest behind...he was tearing through he wind...velocity..unmatched...!!!
And he won....euphoria filled the air...only 3 spectators and 8 racers ....and celebration....
kasturi-chalo milte hai sabse...
But she didn need to walk all the way coz the riders reached there and were busily taking autographs and showeing paises on robbie.
Kasturi was pushed back...
Kasturi-(To her ownself)mujhe nahi pata tha ki ladko ko rockstars mein dilchaspi hai....unke liye to sportstars bhagawan hote hai!
She searched and finally found jaanu deep in conversation with a very gud looking bloke....she soon joined them
Jaanu- Oh kasturi! let me introduce you...
The guy turned around to face her...and she gulped in air...those expressive eyes...she remembered dem...and then a volcano of loathing erutped in her heart it was clearly visible on every line of her face
The guy who was smilingly carrying on a conversation suddenly felt a storm of bitterness raging in his heart...those doe-eyes...it couldn't be!!!
Jaanu- yeh hai meri sabse acchi dost kasturi...aur yeh hai Raunak Mehta!
Their eyes were locked...each pair was gleaming with hatred..who was feeling the emotion stronger it was hard to tell....
Raunak-(grudingly taking her hand in his..not to give away o jaanu da he knew dis ......dis disgusting girl) It's a pleasure to meet u!
Kasturi-(allowing him to take her hand reluctantly...) The pleasure is all mine...
Jaanu- Kasturi wont u congratulate him fo winning the race?
Kasturi-oh uh ...congrats
She should have known better....gurukul pass outs...then he had to be der..but it hadn't struck her...and the way he was racing atleast...she could have easily figured out he was he one...but she had been obsorbed in watching robbie...his intent concentration, the warming smile when a rider was getting ahead of others, the unquestionable passion for the sport...
And now after all these years....they meet again!!!

yessssss meee first For Once...😃

okay Pallavi, wow what a beautiful picture of the race track, wow, i stared at it for at least 5 minutes..took my breath away.. words fail me to tell you how beautiful Ooty is...😍

okay to the part:

i luved how you described the race it was like i was sitting there. the words you used were mindblowing..."the ferocious struggle for velocity..."👏

and when robbie asked kasturi for a speedy marriage my mouth dropped open, thinking OMG he's proposing only to be slapped down when he started to laugh...😭 but excellent conversation...fantastic...luved it...he shut katuri up😆😆

and what is this ronauk knows kasturiiiiii, ooooohhhhh khanani main twist.... cant wait for the next part please jaaldi jaaldi likhoooo.. ek shikayat hain, the part was tooo smalll... i wanted to keep reading adn reading... luved it Pallavi. fantastic..... keep it up kidoo...

luv robina diii

Originally posted by: nrasheed

yessssss meee first For Once...😃

okay Pallavi, wow what a beautiful picture of the race track, wow, i stared at it for at least 5 minutes..took my breath away.. words fail me to tell you how beautiful Ooty is...😍

okay to the part:

i luved how you described the race it was like i was sitting there. the words you used were mindblowing..."the ferocious struggle for velocity..."👏

and when robbie asked kasturi for a speedy marriage my mouth dropped open, thinking OMG he's proposing only to be slapped down when he started to laugh...😭 but excellent conversation...fantastic...luved it...he shut katuri up😆😆

and what is this ronauk knows kasturiiiiii, ooooohhhhh khanani main twist.... cant wait for the next part please jaaldi jaaldi likhoooo.. ek shikayat hain, the part was tooo smalll... i wanted to keep reading adn reading... luved it Pallavi. fantastic..... keep it up kidoo...

luv robina diii

I am glad u liked it...this was a small part I agree...I was doing an update for another of my FF's in the KDMHMD forum..dats why...but promise next part is gonna be interesting and longer!!!!