Fan Fic-Prem Mukti-Updated 19 page 18 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

69

Views

8.1k

Users

21

Frequent Posters

Mukti&Prem#1Fan thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Part 4

Prem:Kya mein use mil sakta hoon?
Doctor:Ji haan Jao
Prem:thank u

Mukti Hospital room

Prem:Mukti ab tum teek ho
Mukti:haan ab mein bilkul teek hoon
Prem:Tumne docer say poohcha ke lardki hogi ya larka?(starts laughing)
Mukti:Prem mein ithni dard mein thi mein poohchne bhool gaye sorry
Prem:its ok
Mukti:meine ghar jana hai plzzz mujhe ghar le jao
Prem:ek min mein docter say poohch kay atha hoon

Docters Cabin

Prem:Docter may i come in?
Docter:yes
Prem:Kya mukti ab ghar ja sakti hain
Docter:Mr.Prem yes but mae sure mukti takes better care of her self she is very weak.
Prem:ok thank u

Mukti's Hospital Room

Prem:ok mukti lets go
Mukti:Finally
Mukti gets up to leave but almost trips and falls but in the nick of time prem caught her and they sared at each other for aabout 5 mins later prem breaks the silence
Prem:So My Basanti Wife is haveing problems standing up i see (Prem picks up mukti and takes her to the car)

Bajaj House

Prem and Mukti Get ther and enter the hose and dont see ne one there.

Mukti:Sab log kahan gaye?
Prem:Mujhe Nahin Pata
Just then prem sees a note on the table
it says
"Prem aur Mukti tum log kabhi nahi rah saktey ek dosre ke bina lekin ek ko tho hum nahi ma saktey to isliya hum ne tum hari puri family ko kidnapp kar liya hum tumare jaan pechan nahi hain lekin ek baat bataunga ke unko jenay keliya hume 7 lakh chaye phir uske baad hum decide karenge kya karna hai"
Prem drops the note from his hand

Mukti:Kya hua Prem Choti maa kahan hain?
Prem:Maa...Maa(he breaks down crying)
Mukti:Kya hua (starts to cry)
Prem:Maa aur sab log ko kisi ne kidnapp karliya
aur vo 7 lakh mang rahe hain
Mukti:Kya(she is soo shocked)
Prem:Mukti Tum gabrao mat tum is halat mein nahi ho plz mein sab kuch samba lunga
Mukti:Haan tum teek keh rahe ho lekin humare pas 7 lahk kahan se ayengey
and it stops on prem and muktis face

i wanted to make it get suspenceful so sorry but its well get better soon
pm4eva thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#12
can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
Mukti&Prem#1Fan thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Part 5

Next Day in Bajaj House

Mukti Wakes up and goes to take a shower later prem wakes up and he doesn't see mukti

Prem:Mukti Mukti kahan gaye mukti idar ao MUKTI
Mukti:Prem Mein Shower Meiun Hoon
Prem:(reliefed)O god why didn't u tell me i was scared to death u know whats happening in the house
Mukti comes out:sorry
Prem:its ok ab mein jao
Mukti:ok

Mukti get a red sari on and is making breakfast for prem scince prem and mukti r the only ones in the house.Prem comes down stairs wearing a black suit and a red shirt.

Prem:Mukti what r u making?
Mukti:rice and chicken
Prem:mmmmmmmmmmmm sounds good
Prem:Mein abhi ata hoon
MuktiPrem kahan ja rahe ho?
Prem:Surprise
Mukti:acha jaldi ana
Prem:teek hai

10 mins later
Mukti:Yeh prem abhi thak aya kyon nahi
Prem:(surprise tone)Ageya
MuktiKahan gaye the
Prem:i had to go get the surprise
Mukti:ok now what is it
Prem:close ur eyes
Mukti does so and prem gets a huge teddy bear and puts it right infront of him
Prem:kolo
Mukti:OMG Prem yeh kya
Prem:Dekh nahi sakti yeh ek teddy bear hai
Mukti:its sooo cute
Prem:now can we eat im soo hungry
Mukti:ok
She was about to laugh but
Mukti:Prem choti maa well miss all this that happening i hope she ok
Prem:dont worry well fingd some way to get her back
Mukti:acha ao kana kahthe hain

Prem eats but Mukti doesn't
Prem:mukti tum kana kyon nahi ka rahi ho?
Mukti:meine brath raka hai ke jab thak choti maa nahi athi thab thak mein kana nahi kaungi
Prem:R U MAD u cant do that
Mukti:lekin prem
Prem:nahi kao abi isi vaqt nahi tho mein bhi nahi kaunga
Mukti:Prem meine brath raka hai
Prem:tho meine bhi brath raka hai
Mukti:Prem
Prem:Mukti

i think thats inough for today be cause of how many comments i got befor maybe nobody likes it
LoVeLyJyOtI thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#14
no i like it plzzzzzzz continued.............
Bookworm87 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#15
pls continue sn!its really gud!
afghangirl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey i like it. continue
👏
Mukti&Prem#1Fan thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#17
thanks u guys for such great comments
---Samaira--- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#18
its lovely!!!!
do count soon 😉
sweety567 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Groupbie Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#19
👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

👏

pm4eva thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#20
plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".