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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats was gud plz conitnue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 9

Police:PUT UR HANDS UP

Komo debo shoroto r all shocked and prem and mukti r happy

Police:Komolika debonita and shoroto we have come to arrest u of threating the Bajaj Family
Komo:nut who ...who told u all this
Police:we dont know we just found out todayfrom this guy named Suraj Mehra

Prem and Mukti look at each other in relief

The police officer leave with them( u know who i dont like to keep writing there names over and over again)
Prem and Mukti help everyone to stand up and get them to sit down

Prem:maa yeh Suraj Mehra kaun Hai
prerna:mujhe nahi pata
Mukti:Mujhe kahin jana hai mein abhi athi hoon
Prem:mein bhi atha hoon kahan jana hai?
Mukti:nahi prem maine akayle jana hai yeh mera kam ha
Prem:Mukti Lekin
Mukti:mein ja rahi hoon bye
Mukti:prem take care of k.t
Mukti hands k.t to Prem and Leaves

end right now i had to finish it here because i have loads of homeworks but good thing tomorrows a weekend so ya but i have to get started hope u like it

Pre-cap:CRASH
Prem:MUKTIIIIIIIII
Mukti:pre..prem..i...love....u(closes her eyes)
Prem:MUKTIIIIIIIIIIII

what happened?why did prem say MUKTIIII? well ull find that out in the next part
Edited by Mukti&Prem#1Fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

thankzz for updating Jaan!😳....ur doin gr8!👏....plz cont. soon!😳😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Part 10

OutSide:
Mukti:TAXI

a taxi comes and pickes her up

Bajaj house:Prem:maa i think i should go with Mukti just to make sure she ok
Prerna:beta lekin mukti ne kaha
Prem:mein jaunga
Prem hands k.t to Prerna and he also leaves

Prem goes into his car and startes driving he sees Mukti
its a red light
Prem:mukti meri gadi mein au
Mukti:prem meine kaha tha ke meine akela jana tha
Prem:mukti tum dekh nahi skati itna traffic hai yahan pe

the lights turn green and she goes ahead Prem keeps following her

Taxi:

Mukti:could u drive faster
Taxi guy:ok mam

Prem comes and sees that there is a truck following them he keeps honking but the truck doesn't move out of his way. he goes ahead of the truck(finally)and trys to stop
Mukti's car

Prem:mein usko phone karta hoon

Prem phone mukti

Mukti:hello
Prem:hello mukti gadi roko ek gadi tumhara peecha kar raha hai
mukti:hello....helo...kaun bol raha hai mujhe avaz nahi a rahi hai hello
Prem:hello Mukti
the phone gets cut

prem goes and stops his car right in front of mukti car and the driver turns his car so that he wouldn't hit Prems car but as soon as he turned the car the huge truck smashed in to it

CRASH

Prem runs to Mukti
Prem:MUKTIIIIIIII(he holds her in his hands)
Mukti:pre....prem....i....love.....you(closes her eyes)
Prem:MUKTIIIIIIIII mukti uto MUKTIIII

Hospital:

Prems really worried and prerna and mr.bajaj and anurage and sam and also k.t is there to

Doctor comes out
Prem:WHAT HAPPENED TELL ME WHAT HAPPEND
Doctor:im sorry Mr.Prem but we cant say nething right now we cant respond to ne thing thats happening she is not moving neither breathing
Prem had the shock of his life right at that moment he fell down crying in his mothers lap
Prem:Maa aise kyoun hua meri Mukti ko aise kyoun saza mil rahi hai
Prerna:Nahi beta mukti ko huch nahi hoga
Tulsi starts to cry when Prerna goes to help her Prem stops her and prem goes there

Prem:kya hua tulsi tum ro kyoun rahi ho?tulsi dekh tumhari maa abhi ayegi aur kehegi ke "Prem Meri Beti Kyoun Ro Rahi Hai?" aur is seh pehle tumhe rona band karna hoga plzzzzzzzz(prem wipes his tear)

tulsi stops crying and prem hugs Tulsi(awwwwww)
then prem leaves the hospital with tulsi
Prerna:prem kahan ja raha hai tu yahan rokh doctor abhi ayega dekh
but prem leaves

Mandir

Prem wakes in with tulsi hes keeps walking he rings the bell and goes farther to the kali maa
prem sits down and puts tulsi on his lap and puts his hands together and says
Prem:Plzzzzzzz meri Mukti ko bachao meine app se kabhi nahi kaha lekin aj hi mein mang raha hoon plzzz meri mukti ko teek karjeya plzzz he starts crying again
he waits there with his eyes closed and his hands together
we see two scences one of mukti in the hospital bed and prem in the mandir

when the panditji blows the horn(i think thats what its called because im form Karachi so i dont really know)

and in the first scence we see Mukti get up and say "PREM" and then we see prem running back ther with tulsi in his hand

Hospital:

Prem:MUKTI
Mr.Bajaj:Prem Mukti ab teek hai
prem:thank god kya nein use mil saktha hoon?
doctor:han jaye

well thats all im going to write and can i just ask a question who else on this forums is from Karachia nd is fasting today?
thank you for all ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
i m from karachi i like ur fanfic 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
greatt!!! continueee soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
it's great...please continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
CONTINUE soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon....i love it..but its sadddd 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Part 11

Prem goes into Mukti's room and Mukti takes tulsi out of prems hand and kisses her all around her face

Mukti:Prem tum kahin gay the?
Prem:me noooo i didn't go ne where
Prem:Mukti u just had an accident rest ull be tired
Mukti:i kow everything prem where u went what u did and im fine
Prem turns around trying not to face Mukti

Mukti:u went to the Mandir and what did u do
Prem turns back around to face her
Prem:how....did.....u know?
Mukti just smiled and didn't tell him
Prem:ill be right back

Doctor's Cabin

Prem:doctor can i come in?
Doctor:yes come .... sit
Prem:can i take mukti home?
Doctor:not today u can come pick her up tomorrow
Prem:but...but never mind
Prem:ok

outside mukti's hospital room

PRerna:Prem can we take mukti home
Prem:no but u guys go home ill stay here with mukti
Prerna:teek hai

Everyone esle leaves leaving prem and mukti alone in mukti's hospital room

Mukti:prem where did choti ma go?
Prem: she went home and ill be staying here tonight with u
Mukti:Premmmmmm
Prem:ok ok
Mukti:(makes a cute face)prem can u sleep with me?
Prem:me oh ofcourse im ur husband

So they both sleep togther like a cute couple

Next Morning

Prem wakes up and sees mukti sound asleep

Prem gets mukti's stuff and gets a bag ready

sorry i have to go now bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Part 12

5 year leap

Mukti: PREM PREM U'LL GET LATE FOR WORK
K.T:Mummy what is office?
Mukti: beta office is where ur daddy goes to work thats his work place
Prem: Mukti why do u yell so early in the morning?
Mukti: Prem dont forget u have to drop k.t. off at school its her first day.
Prem: awwww my sweet princess is having her first day of school how do u think that'll be Tulsi?
K.T.: GREAAAT
Mukti: ok prem stop talking everything is ready eat ur breakfast and drop k.t. off at school and go to work and prem call me when u drop her off ok
Prem: Mukti take a chill pill everything well be alright
Mutki: how well evrything be all right im really worried

well i am really sleepy right now ill update tomorrow

bye and good night

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