Fan Fic-Prem Mukti-Updated 19 page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys i haven't really been here that much soo i was going to write a fan fic

so here it goes

Part 1

we see a huge house one by one were getting closer then we enter and we see prerna in the kitchen and mr.bajaj in the living room reading a newspaper then as we enter we go up stairs and we go into prem's room we see him sitting there with lots of toy and a kid laughing and playing.

Prem:good girl ab hum kya karen Amna
Amna(she is tushars and doris's daughter):hum ice cream ka sakte hain plzzzzzzzz
Prem:ok
prem and amna go for ice cream when they come back they see Mukti at the Bajaj Residence standing at the door with a angry face

Mukti:Prem aur Amna kahan gaye they
Prem:urm...um..
Amna:hum ice cream kane gaye they
Mukti:ICE CREAM aur is tund mein no no give me them
Amna:Aunty plzzzzzz humme kana hai plz(amna gives her cute puppy face)
Mukti:ummmmmmm ok but after this u r going to bed ok
Amna :ok(amna leaves also amna is 4 years old)

Prem: Mukti tum ek bache ko ice cream nahi kane they rahi thi
Mukti:tum toh bache nahi ho
Prem:ok
Prem:here u go(and prem and mukti hug)

well thats the end tell me if u like it
Edited by Mukti&Prem#1Fan - 18 years ago

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Manoj&Tina#1fan thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yeah me too but go plzz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
really nice!...plz cont.! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
thats really gud plz continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Part 2

Bajaj House

Prerna:Mukti tum is halat mein aise nahi kar sakti
Mukti:Choti Maa im fine i cam
Prerna:Mukti tu Maa baney wali hain to tum yeh nahi kar sakti
Prem:Mukti listen to Maa she is right ur not in the condition to do this
Mukti:ok ne ways its just 4 months i dont know why u guys get big spazes
Prem:Mukti
Mukti:Prem mein koy bachi nahi hoon jo har vaqr kaam nahi kar sakti
Prem finally gives in but say only on shartpar
Mukti:Kya
Prem:is din ka bad tum kaam nahi karo gi
Mukti:laughs and says ok
end
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
What no one liked it plz tell me i well stop writing
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
nonoo..please cont soon i luv it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Recap:Mukti:laughs and says ok

Prem and Mukti's Room
Prem:Mukti do u want a boy or a girl?
Mukti:what ever u want
Prem:i want a boy who well be just like me
Mukti:no it well be a girl just like me
Prem:no i think we hould have twins one girl and one boy
Mukti:yes thats a great idea but were not even sure
Prem:well tomorrow u have to go for ur daily check up ask
Mukti:ok only for u (and she kisses him on his hand)

Next Day(8:00)

Mukti wakes up and her stomach hurt like heck
Mukti:prem..Prem uto
Prem:kya hai
Mukti:mujhe dard ho raha hai...owwww
Prem:(gets upkya ab thak to tumhari dilivery to nahi hui hai
Mukti:owwwwww prem bohoth dard ho raha hai
Prem:ek min mein doctor ko bolatha hoon
Mukti:nahi mein ethni der nahi reh sakti mujhe laygou ow
Prem:mukti... mukti(mukti faints)

Hospital

prem is pacing around and has a worried look on his face
Prerna is sitting on the chair and everyone else is standing up
docter comes out
Prem:docter kya hua kya hua mukti ko
Docter:dont worry ab vo bilkul theek hai
Prem:thank god

end
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue please.i want to know what will happen to our mukti.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue plzzzzzzzz...but this time make it longerrrrrrrrrrr...i beg u

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