Fan Fic-Prem Mukti-Updated 19 page 18 - Page 7

awwwwwwwww that was soo short! but still great! update soon!!!! 😳

Part 16

They were in such a rush(but obviously K.T. was still in the car listening to her MP3 player)
so Prem just grabed Manoj and Mukti just Grabbed Kiran and they all headed for the door

Car:
Tulsi:Yeh saab kitne der laga rahein hain
Just then everybody quickly get in the car and
Prem:everyone ready
Everyone else:READY
So K.T.'s goes to her School her school's name is WestDale and Manoj and Kiran go to a school named Beaumont Elementary School

Car:
Mukti:Finally
Prem:Yaa Yeh teeno kitne der lagatay hain
Mukti:Prem c'mon lets go shoping
Prem:Mukti i have to go to office
Mukti:c'mon Prem Plzzz
Prem:ok wait

Twister Towers (this mall i just made up and lets say it has five floors)

Mukti:wow humne yeh mall kabhi nahi dekha en panck saalo mein
Prem:haan
so they go shopping and Mukti buys so many saris and tells prem to hold then and after that they go home

i g2g buh bye hope u enjoyed it

Part 17

Kitchen

Mukti is cooking and prem is reading a newspaper when the phone rings
Mukti:Mein uta thi hoon
Prem:ok

Mukti:hello
Principle:Hello Mrs.Bajaj
Mukti:yes
Principle:Um how do i explain this to u well when ur son was plzying out side he kind of threw up
Mukti:children always peuk whats the problem?
Principle:Well when ur child threw up there was blood there thats a kind of cancer
Mukti(shocked)KYA mera beta ke paas nahi yeh nahi ho sakta

Prem:(who was listening to all this asked)Mukti Kya hua Manoj ko Kya hua?

Mukti just broke down crying.Prem picked up the phone and put it on the receiver and asked again
Prem:MUKTI MANOJ KO KYA HUA
Mukti:Ma..Manoj ko ...ko...cancer hai...(she hugged Prem and couldn't stop crying)
Prem:KYA

Hospital(just to say i heard about this cancer i think in MBBS

Everyone was there Prem, Mukti, Kiran, Tulsi, and manoj was in the doctors room.

the doctor comes out and
Doctor:I'm So Sorry To Say That Ur Son Has Cancer
Mukti:Nahi doctor aap joot bol rahein hain mujhe abhi ise vaqt batao ke mere beta ke pas koi cancer nahi hain
Doctor:Mrs.Bajaj im soo sorry
Mukti:NO(she starts to hit the doctor)
Prem:Mukti apne aap ko sambalo MUKTI(he slaps Mukti)
Mukti:Prem tumne m..muj...mujhe dapar mara

Mukti just leaves from there

Mukti was just like a dead body just walking on the road and the sad versoin of Kasauti is being played in the background.She remembers the whole time she was with Manoj and how today he said:Mommy Jasper is chasing me
Then all of a sudden we see a car light coming form behind Mukti
When the car was just about to hit her someone grabbed her and pulled her away
The two land on the ground
(the guy is obviously Prem)
Prem:STOP IT MUKTI STOP IT STOP IT Mukti ager tumhe kuch hojata to mera kya (he start crying)
Mukti tries to move Prem realises what he is doing and gets off
Mukti:Prem ager mujhe kuch hojata to tum toh bohot kuch ho jatay na
Prem:Nahi aise kabhi nahi kaho(Prem just hugges Mukti saying sorry repeatedly)

well ill update later hope u liked it

Part 18

Back At The Hospital:

Mukti had calmed down and so Tulsi came to consol her mother.

Tulsi:Maaa i know ur sad about Manoj but u have to consider this that he has cancer
Mukti:Tulsi beta plzz kuch karo na plzz
(Its a Mother daughter Moment)

Prem comes and sees this and starts to cry but stops cause the doctor came out
Doctor:if u want u can go see ur son


well i have had a tiring day i got to go to sleep but ill try to update more next time

realli kul<<yar< 👏 👏 👏

wow thats really gud plz continue soon 👏

👏 👏 👏 awsome Job Jaan!....keep up d gud work! 😳

rest of part 18

Prem and Mukti go to see Manoj

Manoj:mommy Daddy what am i doing here
Prem:nothing u just have a cold
Mukti:No Prem lets tell him the truth
Manoj:what truth
Prem:Manoj Beta u have c...ca..cancer
Manoj:what cancer?
Mukti:its when...when

Just then the doctor comes in and tell manoj everything about cancer(she tells him in mute voice)

doctor:U can also die with cancer.
Mukti:doctor can u come with me
Doctor:sure

Doctor's Cabin

Mukti:Doctor how much longer well he live with out treatment
Doctor:About a year
Mukti:and With treatment
Doctor:Alost his whole life
Mukti:how much well the treament cost
Doctor:about a million dollars
Mukti was shocked
Mukti:What
Doctor:yes do u have enough
Mukti:Yes but where well we have to do it?
Doctor:in india

Part 19

Mukti:In India?
Doctor:yes
Mukti:ill have to talk to my husband about this then
Doctor:ok

Mukti is walking and remembering all the times spent with Prerna

Prem sees her and comes and asks

Prem:Mukti what happened well Manoj be okay
Mukti:Yes but in
Prem:but in where
Mukti:In India
Prem:....ok
Mukti:ok what?
Prem:ok we'll go

Mukti was happy she well get to see her Choti Maa again

At the Airport:

Airhostest:everybody who well be going to India please enter there flight

Kiran:papa is that our flight?
Prem:yes it is
Kiran:yeahhhhhhhh

They reach India and settle

Mukti:Prem mein thodi der kiliya bahar ja rahi hoon
Prem:acha

Mukti goes out and catches a taxi and tells him to go to the Bajaj House

Bajaj House

Mukti slowly walks towards the door and gets a nevous feeling in her stomach but ignores it

Mukti walkes inside and

Mukti:Choti Maa
Prerna heard this voice and runs down stairs

Prerna:Muktiiiiiiiiii

well thats all ill be writing today buh bye

👏

awsome Jaan!....absolutly luved readin it!👏

can't wait for d next part😳