a new fan fic(prem n mukti) - Page 3

suspense se maar hi daloge kya anyways fab fanfic 😳

Just cought up reading all the parts and they are to good

ur story is sooooooooooo amazing plz plz plz i beg u do continue!!! 👏

Hii guys thaxs for that wonderfull response

RECAP: mukti agree to shifht her office to Mumbai and at same time prem finalizes deal with amit

AT SYDNEY ITS 7:30 in evening

MUKTI is wandering why aren't karan and jyoti return and at 1:30 karan has to catch the flight tooo

SUDDENLY DOOR BELL RING

MUKTI:lagta hai a gaye dono

Mukti goes and open the door

KARAN: mukti jaldi jyoti ke saman pack kar lo

MUKTI: kyu

KARAN: uff tum sawal bhout karti ho tumhari beti ko kidnap nahi kara raha hu bas I amm taking her along with me

MUKTI: shocked and says nahi yeh kahi nahi jaigi

JYOTI seems to disspointed

KARAN: are yeh akaili to nahi jaa rahi KHUSHI bhi jaa rahi hai

MUKTI: kya khushi kya amit ji ne permission de di usko

KARAN: nahi bhai ne nahi maya waise bhi khushi bhale bhai ki ladki ho par pala to maya hai use ma ki tarah

MUKTI: par

KARAN: par var kuch nahi tum bas iska saman pack karo uff oo kinta jhik jhik karti ak to is musibat ko apne sath le jar aha hu aur tumm after a pause and karan smile mein janta hu tumhari jaan hai par believe me

MUKTI: smiles achha theek hai mein abhi iska saman bhanti hu

KARAN sits in living room and reading mazines

MUKTI AND JYOTI ARE IN BEDROOM

While packing mukti while packing mukti start crying and jyoti notice and says

JYOTI: aap roo rahi hai u will be going to miss me naa

MUKTI: looks her daughter and kiss her

JYOTI: maa I amm now grown up

MUKTI STARt LAUGHING and says

MUKTI: haa baba mujhe pata hai kit u meri jyoti hai mere pyar ki jyoti mere prem ki jyoti and suddenly she relises that wat she just said tear comes in her eyes but is joti wipe it and give her mom her tight hug and both off them leave to living room

AT AIRPORT

MUKTI: lagta hai tum log ki boarding call aa gaya jyoti ka khayl rakhna

KARAN: I will

MAYA: aur khushi ke tear comes in her eyes

KARAN: uff ooo is tarah se kisi ko bye karte hai

MUKTI: yeh maya abhi to mujhe samjha rahi thi aura b tum

MAYA: okk theek hai byee

Karan and two daughter waves their mother and leave

MUKTI STILL WAVING HER JYOTI

MAYA: don't worry karan will take care off her

AT MUMBAI

Prem is sitting in his room and looking the pic of mukti tear comes in his eyes and sad version of ayo na(kyu ho gaya na) is played and prem remember times spend with mukti which include how he humiliated her

The song is like

Dheere dheere dil mein mere

Aa gayi tu chaa gayi teri arzooo

Raho mein nighao mere mein char zoo

AB hai tu hi tu music

Kaisa junnon kaise yeh diwangi hai

Ab mein khahu haal kaise

Mera dil meri jaan mera sara jhahan sara armaan tuu hai…………..

Dheere dheere dil mein mere

Aa gayi tu chaa gayi teri arzooo

Raho mein nighao mere mein char zoo

AB hai tu hi tu

Music

Dil ki kya dastan mein sunnane mehbooba mein aa raha hu

Dekh hai jo khwab meine tujhko dekhane aa raha hu

Chup mein kyu rahu ab kyu na kahu

Mere dil kay sukoon tu hai

Dheere dheere dil mein mere

Aa gayi tu chaa gayi teri arzooo

Raho mein nighao mere mein char zoo

AB hai tu hi tu

MR BAJAJ SEE PREM LIKE THIS AND LEAVES

MR BAJAJ in his GARDEN thinking something suddenly ORENA comes there ask and wat he thinking

MR BAJAJ: prem ke bare mein soch raha hu and tell her wat he saw in prem room

PRENA: who isi ke layak hai

MR BAJAJ: prena tum uski naa ho how can u talk like that

PRENA: mein mukti ki bhi maa bhi hu aur waise mein yeh nahi bhul sakti ki kahi isi duniya mukti hai jo sab she rahi hai aur uske paas koi bhi nahi mr bajaj aur jo prem ne kiya who to koi dhusman bhi nahi karta hai kaise us massom bachi ka pyar bhara dil usne baar baar thoda

MEAN WHILE ANURAG IS LISTIONING EVERYTHING

MR BAJAJ: kya prena tumhe mallom hai mukti kaha hai thak gaya huu dhund dhund kar agar kahi se bhi uska pata chalta hai to use yaha lake prem

pRENA: bas mr bajaj mujhe mukti ka pata nahi mallom aur agar pata bhi hota to use wapas prem ki zindagi nahi laugi

ANURAG: mr bajaj sahi keh rahe prena tumhe nahi lagta prem jinti saaza milni thi who mil chuki hai

PRENA: app dono ko prem ka dhukh dekh raha hai kyuki who aapka beta hai mukti ka kya

ANURAG: nahi prena accha chodo waise mein bhi mr bajaj ki tarah chahta hu prem ab shaadi kar le

PRENA: mein apne bete ko achhi tarah se jaanti hu who shaadi ke liye kabhi ha nahi karega bhaout pyar karta hai mukti ko aur maine inke pyar ko upper wale ke hatho chod diya hai

PREM's room sneha comes and saw himm

SNEHA: prem kab tak anpne ateeth mein jeete raho ge pls bahar aa jayo

PREM: bahar aa to gaya hu bas bhull nahi paa raha hu use shayad pehla pyar log kabhi nahi bhul pate hai

SNEHA: sahi kaha mein bhi kaha bhul payi hu shard ko

PREM: tummne abhi bhi mujhe mukti ka gunegar manti ho naa tumne mujhe abhi tak nahi maaf kiya hai

SNEHA: mein kuan hoti hu maaf karne wali bas bhul nahi pati jo tumne mukti ke sath kiya

Just then kasak comes bhai abhi meri mr AMIT rai se bath huyi there man is coming to finalize the deal with us kya naam that

SNEHA: mr karan rai and miss mukti

PREM: is surprised

SNEHA: relax she is MUKTI KAPOOR

KASAK : haa but tomorrow only karan is coming

PREM: well I think I and kasak will be going to recive them tomorrow and sneha u get the papers ready

SNEHA: wat time he is landing

PREM: I think tomorrow at 8 o clock

Theek hai

NEXT MORNING AT AIRPORT

Prem and kasak is waiting

Suddenly prem friend arjun says hi to him

arjun: hey prem how are you

Prem: hey karan I amm fine how are u

arjun: bas sab theek hu India ak deal ke liye aya tha soo aaj ja raha hu well one think is clear pure shaher mein tere channel ki hi charch hai not evn here but there in London too

Prem: thanks soo u are going

arjun: haa bas boarding call aa jaye

Prem: to chal ak coffe ho jaye

arjun: sure

Prem: kasak will u join us

Kasak: nope I will wait here or go to that book store

On other hand plane from Sydney is landing as soon the annocement is made kasak and prem comes at their place

KARAN and both the girls are coming out

KARAN: beta u both stand here and I get the formality done

Karan to a lady who is standing with her son: pls mam in ladkiyo kya dhyan rakhye ga

JYOTI : hey khushi u this boy he is teasing us

KHUSHI: yes I will complain to chachu about it

JYOTI: if he does this again I sware to god I will have to kill him

Just then prem turn and see jyoti who just said which prem used to say

Prem see that girl and and try to regognize her but cant

Her face looks familiar………………………….prem is thinking

Jyoti comes to him him same style in way prem walks and talk

JYOTI: uncle y the hell are u looking at mee

Prem: smiles at her innocence bend and ask AM I?

Jyoti: yes u are well my name is JYOTI kapoor

PREM: my name is prem bajaj and friends call me UD and I have something for u here it he takes a choclate from his pocket which he bought for Tanya and give it to jyoti

Jyoti: mom says don't take things from stranger

Prem: okk so will u be my friend and forward his hand to her

Jyoti: smiles and says okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

PRECAP: prem is playing with jyoti and tanya

😛 aww tht was rly gd 😛
😛 plz count 😛

oh thats great! continue soon and make mukti come soon!!!!
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its really wonderfull plez cont soon 👏

aaawww da last bit soo cute please continue soon

awww this is such an awesome story plz plz plz continue!! [=D>
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wow!! that was sooo good!!! rly nice! i like the way jyoti talks like prem! n yeah take care n cont. soon!