a new fan fic(prem n mukti)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hii guys I amm back sorry couldn't continue my last story but now I think as debonita has entered the show she will definitely create problem for prem and mukti soo now I wont continue my story from kzk end today I will make it move forward here is my story hope u likes it

MY STORY BEGINS WITH A LEAP OF 5 YEARS

BEFORE FIVE YEARS THE STORY IS: prem falls for debonita and flirts with herand slowly and slowly mukti feels jealous but doesn't say anything .but on other side debonita thinks prem loves her but he only wanted get mukti jealous. debonita is chosen for the event and while mukti prem prepareing for event he continue flirting with debonita and making mukti jealous .meanwhile our so called mother India see this think prem is developing feeling for mukti becoz he starteded caring for mukti and on other hand prems dadi (whatever her name I forgotten)yaa mohini sees think that debonita nad prem would make a gud pair and talk to anurag but anurag knows the truth about prem and mukti and refuses so mohini directly talk to bajaj and he agrees . on other hand debonita get to know the truth about prem and mukti and get to know prem was not in love with her but only making mukti jealous so she decide that she have take away prem from mukti and started creating mis understanding between them and one day again break mukti heart very bitterly and insult her in front of everyone which break mukti and this happen on the success of event's party on the same party bajaj annoces prem and debonnita engagement which prem agree to show down to mukti. when mukti reach home she get to know that her father had been hospitalized and he dies ………………(guys I know I amm going bit fast but I was getting bored with current track so I think bring some change in it) . Now mukti is all alone with her choti maa and crying now mukti is totally heart broken and she tells her choti maa that she want to go PANCHMESHWAR for his father soul shanty choti maa let her go but along with her anurag and sam goes.mean while prena ask prem y again he broke mukti's heart prem say he wont marry that driver daughter and prena slaps him says u wont ever get true love in his whole life.after prena goes prem cries that he wont ever love anybody again……………………………

On other hand SNEHA gets to know about debonita reality and try to expose her infront of prem but couldn't able to do she and doris is trying there best to stop this marriage but cant …………………………….and on the marriage day mukti return and sees marriage preparation and she think that she lost everything and think about all movementof her life from when she met prem goes to her house where she sees prem sitting there he says in an insulting way why she isn't coming to his wedding as he always comes there and he olso ask her to do some work and suddenly he gets slap on his face(well deserve) and mukti tells him that the wort mistake was she done is she met him and blah blah……………..on the other hand prena and doris is listioning this and whren prem goes she and doris comes to mukti to console her mukti says she want to away from this place and want to start a new life prena tries to sstop but she doen't listion so prena agrees and let her go

And on wedding nite sneha and doris reveal the real face of debonita and sneha curse prem that he never understood mukti and his love and now has gone away far away from u and now she wont ever come back to u . prem relises his mistake run to mukti but she had left so he ask his mother India but mother India gives him long lecture and refuses to tell him but he begs for him so then she tells him that mukti has is going to australia forever with tonite flight prem runs to air port and here mukti is sitting in her flight and remember her olden days and on the baground (KAL HO NA HO MUSIC IS PLYED)

AFTER FIVE YEAR …………………..

PRECAP: in a church we sees a small girl(about three or four year old) running towardsa women and on other hand wee sees a room full of mukti picture)

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esha_cool_girl thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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how u like it guys hope u like it
keep gussing who was this liitle girl and whose room was it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww interesting well written 👏 👏 👏 plz do continueeee 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pLZ Continue was a superb story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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superb!!i am totally blown away!! so do cont. soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fast speed and great fan-fic love it!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's great. 👏 YOu really need to continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's very good.. keep writing 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its reli great yaar pliz continue we are impatienlt waiting 4ur update
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a reallllllllllly gud story pllllllllllllzzzzz continue. its way better
then wats actually going on now days in kasauti zindagi ki. 😊
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