a new fan fic(prem n mukti) - Page 4

Hey, its reallllly good. Pls be kind and don't keep us waiting for updates for toooo long 😃

sooo cool...i wanna now wot happends next plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

really good..but i get confused..can u please make the dialoge in english...i cant read hindi that well..its to confusing and hard..sorry but if u can plz try doing more english!!
thanx...great story..plz continue

hurry up wit da next update i wanna no wat happens. plz tell its
a really gud story and i mean it!!!!!! 😊

Continue yaar dying to read the next part and whn PM will come face to face jaldi karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hii guys sorry counn't udate yesterday i had some work to do well thaxs for such a magnifacant respone

recap :jyoti and prem met each other

AT THE AIRPORT

jyoti and prem are shainkg hand with each other suddenly karan comes with khusi

KARAN: jyoti beta wat the hell are you doing here

JYOTI and PREM turns around sad

PREM: heyy hii ur daughter his very sweet and cute

KARAN: laughs nad says its is true ki jyoti bhout pyari hai but ................

prem looks confuse

KARAN: but she is not my daughter my friend's and her mother is olso very beautiful

PREM: lagta hai maa pe gayi hai

KARAN: haa

PREM:beta where is ur father

JYOTI: he is.....................................

KARAN: ohh his father is no more

PREM:feel sad and sorry

KARAN: ohh noo not at all iski ma ne ise apne papa ki kami kabhi meshouse nahi hone di well hi i amm KARAN RAI

PREM: ohhhhhh hi i amm PREM BAJAJ i was waiting for u only

just then kasak came

karan was all suprised and kept looking kasak in mind he said wow ate hi ...............................itni suder ladki se mulaqat ho gayi lagta hai yeh mulakat interesting hone wali hai

KASAK: kuch kaha apne

KARAN: ohhh noo well hi karan rai

PREM: ohh she is my sister KASAK well apka office tayar hoo raha hai i think within two days it will get ready tab tak u can work in our office

KARAN: ohh no jab tak humhari creative head nahi ati we wont she will be coming next weak unhi ki beti hai jyoti

PREM: ohh to chaliye mein apko apke ghar chod deta hu

KARAN: nahi pehle contract sign kar lete hai then we can go home par in done ko ghar pe chod de ..................

KASAK: haa mein chod deti hu

KARAN: are nahi aap(look desapointed)

PREM's phone rings its mother india........................

PREM: yes mother india (karan looks confused)

PRENA: beta u forgot ur file at home shuld i send it

PREM: ohh no i will come and cuts the phone..................kasak u take him to the office i will drop them at my home tanya bhi kush ho jaigi anpe naye dosto ko dekh kar and afterwards karan will pick them up

KARAN: par.........

PREM: ohh its okk soo byee

JYOTI: d......................uncle

prem turns around and suprised to hear this name

PREM: yes beta

JYOTI : where are we going

PREM: well aat my waise bhi we are friends noww so now u can come along with me

JYOTI: yes and smile

PREM: okk karan byee

prem goes with both the girl

KARAN: kya naam bataya apne

KASAK: ksak bajaj

KARAN: too chale

KASAK: haa chale

they both olso leave

IN THE CAR

jyoti: prem uncle

PREM: listion we are now buddy so u can call me UD

JYOTI: u r rite

and both off them laugh

BOTH off them reach at home

ASS JYOTI ENTER THE HOUSE PRENA FEEL SOME THING AND TURN AROUD AND SUPRISED TO SEE prem with two sweet girls

PRENA: are yeh kuan hai prem

PREM: yeh humare naye partner ke bache hai ...........MR RAI KO OFFICE JANA THA SO I BROUGHT THEM AT HIME SO TANYA CAN PLAY WAISE BHI TANYA KABHI SCHOOL KE VACCATION HO CHUKE HOGE

PRENA: but tanya to apni mom ke saathghoomne ja rahi hai

PREM: its okay why dont bhabhi take them along

DORIS: okkk fine

JYOTI: d uncle who is hse pointing towards prena

PRENA: she is mom

JYOTI: turn and touch the feet of prena and says mom kehti hai jab bhi bado se milte hai unke par chuute hai

prena: achha akdum sahi kehti hai tumari mom and hug that gal

PREM: woh file kaha hai

DORIS: ohh here it is.............

prem takes the file and about to leave and turns around and give hug and kiss to jyoti and khushi and says bye to her.............................

AT THE OFFICE

PREM AND KARAN SIGNS THE DEAL

PRECAP: jyoti and prem are playing and mukti onther hand remembering prem

i luve ur story
this is my favorites fanfic out of all the ones that are out there.
plz plz continue soon. 👏

lovely story
keep it up
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dat was a such a sweet epi 😳
please continue soon
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