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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its something new keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hii guys thaxs for such response u know this inspiration motivate us to write more

RECAP :mukti left prem forever


In the morning at bajaj house

Prena is preparing for the breakfast then only mr bajaj comes fromhis room to have breakfast . doris ,tushar,kuki and sneha and kasak olso joins
Prena: call Tanya where are u please come down and ur lunch u will late for school

We see a small girl about three year coming down she has blue eyes brown hair and a fair complexion (with her feature it is clear she is daughter of tushar and doris)

Tanya: gud morning dadaji and hug mr bajaj
Mr bajaj : gud morning sweet heart
Tanya go and sit next to doris who gives her break fast but Tanya doent seems to like it but doris is very firm that she should have her break fast so Tanya looks her father tushar was about to say something but with doris looking her angrily tushar was't able to say anything
Tushar: princess I think u shuld have ur brak fast nahi tp tumhari ma hume kha jaigi school drop karte waqt mein tumhe choclate de dooga
Doris doesn't seem to like this was about say but is stop by sneha
Suddenly mr bajaj ask prena prem kaha hai
Prena : mujhe nahi pata kaha hai waise bhi kal raat der se lota that office se mein to ab iski adi ho chuki hu
Mr bajaj have a tense look on his face

Then kasak says : pata nahi kya ho gaya hai bhai ko jab se who hadsa hua hai tab se jeena bhul gaye hai
SNEHA: u r rite kasak jab se mukti gayi hai prem ne apne aap ko kaam mein inta busy kar liya hai lagta hai uski zindagi kuch aur hai yi nahi
PRENA: iska zimedar who khud hai mein aaj tak nahi bhul payi us massom ladki ke asu
TUSHAR: par apko nahi lagta mom prem ke kiye usko use kahi jaidya saza mil chuki hai
MR BAJAJ:tushar sahi keh raha hai prena waise kaha hai who
PRENA: mein bulati hu PREM

Than we see a room full of muktis picture having every emotion happy sad etc
In center prem and mukti pic which was taken in pachmeshwar

Then we see a man working on his laptop having a thick chain and rings in his hand he is wearing a suit and having spec then we see he none other than our smart UD yani prem working suddenly there is knock on his door
PREM: come in(prem share very gud relationship with her niece)in the whole house he is closet to his niece TANYA in fact there are best friend
We see Tanya is entering in his room
PREM: (very happy seeing her)hello my princess how are u this morning
Tanya: aap khana nahi kaoge friend
PREM: ha bas thoda kaam hai dost abhi ata hu
TANYA: nahi abhi chalo
PREM: acha dost chalo
PREM CARRY HER AND COMES DOWN
PREM: gud morning mother India and every body
They all having breakfast

ON OTHER HAND WE SEE BEAUTIFULL SITES OF SYDNEY tAND THEN WEE SEE A CRUCH AND A WOMEN(she is wearing a churi dar suit and her hair are open till shoulders) IS PRAYING THERE

SUDDENLY A VERY SWEET GIRL OF THREE TO FOUR YR RUNNING TOWARDS women and shouting MOM MOM
THEN ONLY WOMEN TURN AROUND IS NONE OTHER THAN OUR MUKTI WEARING THE SAME SPEC WITH SHE USED TO WEAR BEFORE HUG THAT SMALL GIRL)
MUKTI: how many times I have to tell u too keep quiet in church JYOTI
JYOTI : sorry mom
MUKTI turn aroud and says sorry to father on behave of JYOTI
Turn arund and ask jyoti how she came her
JYOTI tell her amit uncle drop her
Mukti and jyoti comes outside of church and we see a man wearing suit is waiting beside his car and turn around after hearing his name (AND IS NONE ONTHER THAN PLAYED BY AMIT SAREEN SHITIJ OF KKUSUM) smile

MUKTI: are aap koi khas kaam tha
AMIT: haa office ke bare mein that ghar gaya to maya ne batay ki aap church gayi hai isiliye yaha a gaya aur isne zid ki ise bhi le aya
MUKTI: mein office hi aa rahi thi acha to chale
They all left that place

After droping jyoti to home mukti goes her office where she had to attain a imp meeting…………
( here it is necessary to tell u all that AMIT RAI run a big event managing company which organizes event whole world )
About amit rai AMIT WAS ONLY 20 YEAR OLD WHEN HIS PARENT DIED AND HE HAD TO TAKEN CARE OFF HIS SMALL BROTHER KARAN AND SISTER MAYA WHO IS NOW BEST FRIEND OF MUKTI)
when mukti reach sydney she knew no place to go abut doris had a Indian friend in sydney named maya and after some day mukti comesto know that she pregnant with three months baby ,mukti became tatally broken(so we noe know jyoti is prem and mukti's daughter) but maya helped mukti her a lot to overcome her past and gave her job inher bro's office so only maya know everythinhg about mukti .amit and karan only know that she is widow and to overcome her past she came to sydney

and at india only doris know about mukti where is hse and etc but prem is contunously searching for mukti but is unable to find her

precap: AMIT TELL MUKTI SOMETHING TO MUKTI BUT MUKTI IS VERY SHOCKED AND REFUSES TO DO
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fantastic!!! i love where this fanfic is going!! u have done a superb job!! plz do cont. soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was really sweeeet.... hoping to c wat prem says wen he knows tat he has a daughter when he himself looks like a kid!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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RECAP : mukti and prem daughter jyoti levis with her mom at Sydney

At SYDNEY {we see a office named as naina ltd }we see a cabin where MUKTI is working on her laptop she so busy that she doesn't relizes that maya is knocking on the door

MUKTI: come in

MAYA(none other than played by MEHAK of kahin to hoga} GOOD morning mam kya baat hai bhout busy ho

MUKTI: nahi yaar who aaj un American deligates a rahe mmilne so I working on their project ,they want to organize their event next weak but I amm not clear where they want to organize

MAYA: ohhhh well I amm here to call u that bhai ne aaj subheboard meeting rakhe hain to we have to attain it now

MUKTI: ohh but why he has kept the board meeting

MAYA don no( after seeing her watch) chal yaar meeting would be about to start and u know bhai don't like late comer

MUKTI: acha chalo

AT THE BOARD MEETING EVERY ONE HAS TAKEN THEIR SEAT BUT ONLY ONE SEAT IS VACCANT AND AMIT LOOKS ANGRY ASK HER SISTER MAYA

AMIT: maya where the hell is karan

MAYA: amit u know that karan is a late comer

(NOW WE SEE A MAN IS SLEEPING IN HIS GRAND BEDROOM AND LISTIONING SONG AND AFTER SEEINH HIS WATCH HE GET UP HURRY AND GET READY)

IN THE MEETING

AMIT: I think we should start the meeting we have minimum no of member to start

SUDDENLY A MAN COME AND GOD MORNING LADIES ANG GENTLEMEN

ITS KARAN (none other played by akshat of khain to hoga)

AMIT: karan….

KARAN: I think we are getting late to start the meeting

AMIT START THE MEETING

AMIT: as we know that our business is expanding in whole world we are getting contract from everywhere specially from India (mukti is shocked by listioning India named)

AMIT: at present we have about 50 contract of India which are about 100 cr project

And its not possible to control from here so I have decided to open branch of naina ltd at mumbai and I have decided that two of our member will be supposed to handle and they are miss mukti and mr karan

MUKTI IS TOTALLY SHOCKED HEARING THIS and says:sorry sir I wont go there handleing that branch u can choose another person

AMIT:very roughly : MISS mukti I request not to mix ur personal life with professional life I have made my decision and that's final

KARAN is very happy listioning it and saying MAYA(I was kind bored flirting here with girl now I have new types of girl wow………………

AMIT: mr karan we are talking about work so pls…………………………….

AMIT: that's all for the meeting

IN MUKTI's cabin

MUKTI IS VERY TENSE AND THINKING SOMETHING TO GET RID OF THIS THEN ONLY MAYA COMES
MUKTI: nahi maya mein wapas nahi jaougi

MAYA:kyu nahi mukti us baath kko panch saal ho gaya kyat u bhul nahi us bath ko

MUKTI: nahi mein bhul chuki hu(inside she know that she hasn't forgotten wat happen five yr before and not prem too)

MAYA: to phir kya baath hai kya tum nahi chahti ki tumhari ladki apne sankaar shekhe

MUKTI:mein chahti hu par

MAYA: ab mein samjhi tum ab tak use nahi bhula payi ho

MUKTI: shout maya mein bhul chuki hu koi meri zindagi koi prem tha

MAYA: nahi tum jhooth bol rahi tum abhi tak nahi bhuli agar bhul chuki ho I give challenge MISS mukti go and face ur past ………samna karo apne atteth ka kab tak bhagti rahogi ussse waise bhi mumbai bhout bada shehar hai zarrori nahi tum prem se mili jaogi waise it only three to four months time jyoti ki bhi yaha school mein holidays rahegi

MAYA: aur kya pata tum apnea teeth se bahar aa jao aur agar tum kaho gi to mein doris ko bhi nahin bataugi tum aa rahi waise use yeh bhi nahi pata hai jyouti is ur child she only know u are here

MUKTI: theek hai mein jake amit ji se pooch leti hu kab jana hai

MUKTI IS ABOUT TO LEAVE MAYA SAY: tumme aur bhai ak hi tarah ke ho tum dono apne atheeth ko pakar ke beithe hai bhai bhai ko nahi bhool pa rahe tum PREM KO

MUKTI GOES TO AMIT CABIN AND IS ABOUT TO KNOCK

AMIT: come in mukti

MUkti: apko kaise pata chala

AMIT: are bhai tumhare saath panch saal se kaam kar raha hu………………….

MUKTI: I amm ready to gio India kab jaana?

AMIT: may be next weak I amm searching for channel who will broadcast our events

MUKTI: pls bhagawan who channel btn yak ay channel naho pls plss

AMIT: mein abhi karan se bolta hu tum log ke jaane ka intezaam kare

MUKTI LEAVES THE OFFICE AND GET S PHONE CALL ITS FROM JYOTI's SCHOOL SHE WAS CALLED AT SCHOOL

AT INDIA WE SEE A OFFICE NAMED AT MUKTI LTD INSIDE IT IS WRITTEN CHANNEL CAF

As we clear about its name that's it our PREM office which he constitute four year before actually it's a collaboration of BASU AND BAJAJ whose CHAIRMEN IS PREM and MANAGIN DIRECTOR is SNAHA

Prem in his cabin working with some files just then sneha enters

SNEHA: I have some gud news for you

PREM: wat still working on his files

SNEHA: yaha ak nayi company khul rahi hai it's a big event managing comp named named………. Ha yadd aya NAINA LTD belive me prem jinte contract is waqt is forgein comp untne yaha kissi ke paas nahi and now they are opening their branch here agar inke saath humara collaboration hojata hai hum btn aur kay channel ko bhi peeche chor dege

PREM: I know kal hi main uske chairman mr AMIT RAI se bath ki I have only suggested them to open branch here and he keen to collaborate with us actuuly I know him I have met him once at London conference tab se I amm keen to have business deal with him and now we got a chance

SNEHA: that was fat prem and smile

PREM: I know well …………………… then only his secreatery comes and tell him there is phone call from Australia named mr AMIT RAI

PREM: wow ………………………takes a call yes MR RAI

AMIT: hi prem well we have decided and our two of member is coming there to finalize deal with you

PREM: that's fanastic so I will surely make all arrangement for ur office and ur stay

AMIT: ohh noo pls don't bother about our stay we are having our home their but yes I will be great full if u make our office arrangement

pREM: surely soo byee

SNEHA: wow tats grt

PREM: sneha kya tum unka office arrangement kara dogi

SNEHA: haa jarroor well who kad aa rahe hai

PREM: may be next weak

SNEHA : okk I will and ask kasak to acoomapny with me kyu as we know she is artitecture off our comp and goes from there

PREM: agar yeh contract mil jata hai tum tum dekhna mukti how far we will reach

Kaash tum yaha hoti to meoin tumhe bata pata

AT SYDNEY

Maya and mukti is driving at jyoti school

At SCHOOL

Princepals office jyoti is sitting all dirty

HER TEACHER: sorry miss mukti we have too call you actually we caught ur daughter fighting with a boy and beating him but whne we asked so she is saying nothing

MUKTI: looking at jyoti: I amm sorry

TEACHER: don't be t miss mukti but we shuld remind u that it shuld be repeated it again

Mukti takes jyoti from there and outside scold her a lot nad was about to beat her but was stopped by maya

MAYA: kya kar rahi ho mukti………………..

MUKTI: kya karu din b din she is getting worse

THEY REACH HOME ANS SUDDENLY THEIR NEIBHOUR MISS ROSE COMES THERE AND SAYS SORRY

MUKTI: sorry for wat mrs ROSE

MRs ROSE: ACTUALLY TODAY BECOZ OF MY DAUGHTER JYOTI WENT TO PRINCEPALS OFFICE THAT BOY WAS IRRITETING MY DAUGHTER SO UR DAUGHTER CAME IN BETWEEN

MUKTI: surprised looks jyoti but she ran in home crying

MAYA: thaxs mrs rose

MRS ROSE: nooo tomorrow only I amm going to princepals office to complain against that gboy

MUKTI: thaxs mrs rose

MUKTI: kamal hai maya jab koi yeh galti karti hai to chila chila kar ke karti hai aur jab koi accha kaam karti hai bilkul ape ……………and stops their and look at maya(remember about prem use to torture prena and how he saved sneha from her mother in law)…………………….and goes inside

MAYA: haa sach kaha bilkul apne papa pe gayi hai and smiles

IN SIDE THE HOUSE

MUKTI: to jyoti who is crying: I amm sorry…………………………………………..

JYOTI: u always misunderstand mee

MUKTI: I amm sorry beta wont repeat it again

JYOTI: its okay but last time and hugs her mom

Then only suddenly karan comes

KARAN: kya bath hai ma beti mein bouhut pyar hoo raha hai

JYOTI ran toward CHACHU……………………………….

Karan hugs her and carry her beat we have gud new aap humsha complain karte hai na mumy apko khai ghumane nahi le jati well wee are going to India this vecation next weak jab apka school band ho gaye ga ins't that grt

JYOTI: yes it is…………and kiss him

KARAN: accha mukti bhai ne ak channel walo se collaborate kar liya chnnel name is CAF and his chairmen name is……………………..suddenly mukti phone rings

MUKTI WAS HAPPY THAT IT WASN'T any off bajaj and basu soo she was glad

And talk to phone and after cutting the phone turn around ask maya where is karan so she says ki who jyoti ko leke ghumane le gay

MUKTI: tum log use bigar rahe ho

MAYA: off ohhhhhhhh well karan told me he talked to the company and today nite he is leaving for India

MUKTI: but who to mere sath jane wala than a

MAYA: haa but uske chairman ko kal ki flight se kahi bahar jaa raha hai so they wanted to sign the contract tomorrow aur wiase bhi karan jake waha sare arrangements kar lega

MUKTI: ohhh waise kya naam hai chairmen ka

MAYA: I dono but karan will handle itt and next weak I and u will go and start our work as early as possible becoz coming our event are in India only

MUKTI: yaa u rite well I amm afrain karan waha jaa raha hai kya hoga waha ki ladkiyo ka …………………….

Both of them smiles

PRECAP: AT airport where is karan is coming with jyoti and on other hand prem is olso coming………………….will they meet

Nooow guys I amm to tried so byeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 19 years ago
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just great this is how the track should have proceded in real KZK after they showed show many problems btwn mukti and prem. 😛 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
dat was great please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18

😛 wow nice fanfic 😛
cant wait till prem n mukti
will meet
😛 plz count as soon as u can 😛

ill be waitin😆

Edited by sweetazsugar - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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superb!! i loved it ! i loved it!! it was excellent!! thank u soo much for that long update!! 👏 👏 take care n cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's great
You should continue. 😊

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