a new fan fic(prem n mukti) - Page 5

I LOVE the way you have so beautifully linked it all together!Man you should be there instead of Ekta! 👏 Wonderful!update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOn please

Plz update the story, this is also my favorite fan-fic, i can't wait till prem finds tht jyoti is his daughter plz update

u r amazing and the story is wonderful. i think u shd give ekta some tips 😉

😛😛 wooooooooow tht was soo luvly gd gr8 😛😛
😛 plz count soon 😛

as always it was awesome!! keep up the good work n cont. soon!!

plzzzzz continue!!! i wanna no wat happens really bad! 😃

AT SDNEY

MUKTI WAS LOOKING AT SOME PICS AND REMEMBERING HER TIME FIVE YR BEFORE AND IN THE BACKGROUD WHO LAMHE WAS PLAYED(from zehar)just then Maya came and saw mukti crying ans says kya hua mukti………………mukti at once turn the pages and start seeing jyoti pic

Mukti: kuch nahi bas jyoti ki pics dekh rahi thi bhout yaad aa rahi hai aaj subhah hi bath hue hai par phir bhi

Maya: tum jyoti ki nahi iski tasweer dekh kar ro rahi ho and she turn around the pg where mukti and prem pics was there

Maya: bhool kyu nahi jati paach saal ho gaye tumhe kab tak uski yaado mein raho gi ………….

Mukti kept on listioning her

AT INDIA

Prem was in his room seeing mukti pic just then anurag came to his room for some work and saw him

Anurag: prem kya bath hai

Prem: kuch nahi any thing u want

Anurag: bhool kyu nahi jate paach saal ho gaye tumhe kab tak uski yaado mein raho ge………… who kabhi nahi ayegi

Prem: who aye gi wo jazoor ayegi mein use acchi tarah janta hu ak din who jazoor mere samne ayage

Anurag: kab tak uska intezaar karoge

Prem : aap bhi to mother india ko nahi bhoole hai

Anurag: doen't say any thing and goes

Prena was listioning everything when anurag comes from prem's room he saw her doen't say anything and goes

Prena comes to prem room

Prena: tumhe itna yakeen hai ki tumne jo uske saath kiya who phir bhi ayegi

Prem: yeh mujhse jyaida aap janti hai ki who jazoor ayegi in paanch salon e sab ne kaha mein mukti ko bhool jao sirf apko kyuki aap bhi janti hai who ak na ak din zaroor aegi

Prena: jante ho prem tum akdum apne baap pe gaye ho pehle tum kissi ladki ka pyar bhara dil torte ho aur phir ……………………….jane do magar mujhe is bath ki sukun to hai ki jo maien nahi kar payi who mukti ne ka diya tumhe rishto ki samjh de di

JUST then doris comes with all the children

Prem heard jyotti voice and smile

Prena: kya hua muskara kyu raha hai

Prem: jyoti aa gayi bhout pyari hai pata nahi kyu ak ajeeb sa apnapan mahsoos karta hu uske saath

Prem and prena goes down and then karan olso comes to pic these two girls

Karan: hii prem

Prem: hi karan meet my mother and and my bhabhi

Karan says hello to them

Chale baccho

Prena: are nahi beta pehli baar aye ho khana kha ke jana

Karan: are nahi aunty

Prem: its okay waise mother India I amm going near the beech will come in an hour

Jyoti: beech I love beech

Prem: bends so y don't u come along with me

Prem and jyoti leaves

Kasak comes and says mom mein aur sneha are going to disc but will come by the dinner time

Prena: iff u r going y don't u go along with karan waise bhi prem to chala gaya and he is alone

Kasak doesn't like the idea but sneha says kyu nahi y don't u come along with us

Karan: (happily) r u sure

Sneha: yaa damm sure y not kyu kasak

Kasak: par

(actually while going from airport to office kasak came to know the flirt nature of karan and doesn't like and at office they had a little argument about some work since then they didn't seem to like eachother)

AT the beach

Jyoti and prem are playing with eachother and prem is building a sand house then he bought icecrean for her and jyoti seems to be very happy and seeing her happy prem olso feels happy and hug his daughter

At bajaj house

When prem return he was carrying jyoti who was fast asleep

Prena: are yeh kya soo gayi

Prem: haa khub kheli hai

Prena takes jyoti from prem hand and gave to doris who carry her to bed room where other girls are sleeping

Prena: bhout pyari hai jante ho prem mukti jab choti thi asehi dikhti thi

Prem: gets shocked but doesn't say and ask where is karan

Prena relises that wat she said but says they went to disc

By seing his sad face prena says tub hi kyu nahi chala jata

Prem: nahi mujhe nahi jaana

Prena: scold him kya bhoodho ki tarah ghar pe bhita rehta hai jaa

Prem: smiles achha ja ta hu

AT PUB

As prem enter all the girl run for him but prem seem doesn't take interest in any of the girl and start searching sneha and kasak

KARAN: are yeh ladkiya kaha jaa rahi hai who was flirting with a girl but she ran and karan became disspointed

KASAK: kyu apko koi problem hai

Karan: nahi par lagta hai apko bhout hai mera flirt karma

Sneha who was listioning everything and smile and say: jarror prem aya hai bhout din baad aya hai pub waise karan Mumbai saari ladkiya prem ke liye pagal hai aur yeh hai ki kissi ko ane bhi nahi deta

Karan: bikuul bhai ki tarah bhabhi ke jane ke baad to jaise toot hi gaye hai

Sneha: I amm sorry

Kasak: pata nahi ladkiya kyu bhagti hai ladko ke peeche pata nahi hai kya yeh lade kaise hote hai

KARAN: lagta aap bada janti hai ladko ko and both sneha and kasak start laughing

Kasak: shut up

Just hi guys kya ho raha

It was prem voice

Karan: ohh my fav hindi song is played and offer hand to kasak for dance but kasak seems to be not interested

Karan:pointing sneha may I?

Prem smiles

Sneha: ohh sure y not

Just then kasak friend came and she gone to dance floor with them

Prem was left alone and waiter came with a beer while drinking he remember how he used to dance and fight with mukti just then karan phone rang it was maya's

AT SDNEY: mukti was having dinner with maya at a restaurant

Maya brought her to change her mood

Maya: uff oooooooo mukti abhi jyoti ko gaye do din bhi nahi hue to such ke aadhi ho gayi hai agle hafte chal rahe hai naaaaaaaa

Mukti: smiles

Maya: accha loo bath kar le apni beti se and dial karan mobile and give it to mukti

On ther hand at Mumbai prem saw karan mobile ringing and was calling karan but he was busy dancing so he recived and said hello

Mukti: was shocked with a similar voice and said karan…………………………..

Prem: was too shocked and didn't say for a min………

But then karan came and prem gave mobile to karan

Karan: haa maya

Mukti: mein maya nahi mukti bool rahi hu

Karan: haa mukti bacche sab theek hai is waqt humhare partner ke ghar pe hai and they r having fun

Mukti: ohhhhhhh well karan abhi kisne ne phone recive kiya tha

Karan……….:are who mr ……………hello hello cant listion u talk to u tomorrow

Mukti: hello………… the phone cut

Maya: ohh gayi tasaalli abb khana khaye bhuk lag rahi hai

Mukti: haa butt she was still thinking whose was that

PRECAP: jyoti was going to prem room…………………………………..doris was all shocked

goshhhh this is JUST TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD please update soon!waiting so impatiently!!!!

wow wat a epi cant wait till da next epi
PLEASE cont soooon!!!!

i cant explain how nice is it plezzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon 👏