The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 11

Originally posted by: btkr

Our weekend treat! Your update and the days JB are spending remind me of a beautiful spring afternoon, lazy, peaceful, a few birds chirping here and there, relaxed siesta-like atmosphere, close to perfection...Mera BP kam ho gaya 😉

Bani patiently letting him set the pace, just loving him like she promised to.

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bt

I love the scene you ahve described! I want to be there too!
thanks sweetie😃

Originally posted by: rooj-i

hey armana!!!
im reading it soo far and loving it!!!
but dont have time to finish it coz of the awards show... 😆 😆 😆
but i will be back to comment fully!!!
thanks!!!
rooj

Originally posted by: swathi

commenting on this part somehow this time you had some Jai moments thrown in. I really liked the way Jai is transformed into a normal human. somehow I feel that Jai behaves his normal self only with bani around. He seems to know that Bani is imp in his life but somehow just does not seem to realize the extent of her importance. Typical human reaction. If something does not happen the way you expect it to happen you tend to introspect and try to read between the lines. I am mentioning about Jai's thinking on Bani's apparent non reaction to his views on marriage. and of course the list continues....am not going to ask you how you are going to fit in angel and Roshni into the story plus the reason for Push & co re introduction. Let me savour the surprise while the story goes on.

Swathi

Originally posted by: j&b84

wow armana just finished reading this part.. as usually it was brilliant and congrats for writing more then 13part hehehe 😊 😊... and really hope u contin still 50part at least....

and as for the last sentence when bani said "All through my childhood my s…friend and I played board games. I am rather good at all of them," she finished with a demure smile" she wanted to say sister right..does jai catch this and ask her later...

pls update soon

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"All through my childhood my s…friend and I played board games. I am rather good at all of them," she finished with a demure smile

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana darling,

First with comments on the update.😃 Lovely and wonderful as always.👏

Loved the way you described the history of the house, and loved the names "Love Folly" and then "Janat. Aww...our Jai is so confused as he is subconsiously accepted her as a part of his life, like his ready acceptance of her doing pooja in the house, letting her order Tony for dinner and such, and consiously the is confused by her answers which are not like he want s them but are - am I making any sense - for example her not forcing or asking him for marriage though same to his wants as he does not want to be married but also wnating her to ask or hint at wanting to marry him.😃

Cant wait to read when realization strikes him to his true feelings for her, thast hes falling in love and that she is his Angel from the past.😃

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Love

Krishna

And the last line was about her sister and her playing board games.

Originally posted by: fsam

Armana excellent part. Loved the way J/B's relationship is evolving. Loved his reaction to Bani not pushing the marriage issue, perplexed. Yet Bani performing all the mundane duties of his wife, like deciding the menu for the day, performing the Puja and JW seeking permission to go to office. Among other wifely duties.

Beutifully shown the respect they have for each other besides the passion the share, loved the way he lets her decide where she wants to sleep.

Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: swatinarang

armana, great part.
so sweet that jw has already accepted bani as a part of his family, hope he will be able to give his feelings for her a proper name soon and will be able to interpretet them soon.

please continue soon.

swati

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

Armana,

I have to say that your FF is like reading an addictive novel! I just cant get enough! Your writing style is impeccable and your characters and storyline are flawless! I hope you continue soon!


Thanks,
Harveen

Originally posted by: punjabankuri

amazing part once again 👏 👏 👏 ,
Thanks

Originally posted by: nema123

Armana,

what a wonderful update... do you know how much pleasure you give us wth your writting.. ??Thank you so much. 👏 👏 👏

Not unless you write in and tell me!😛
you are very welcome.😃




I like your BANI completely.. in and OUT.. and all her actions.. Her love... her passion.. and main thing is she doesn't expect anything from her love... that is exactly love.. is.... Love is not about making a slave of the person you love.

Bani in your story is tooo goood...

Please Please please make her happy.. in the end...


I realy liked when Bani