The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 10

Originally posted by: armana

your last line reminds me of the taciturn farmer in that cute movie about the pig- "Babe" i think i can't remember the title!
thank you.😊 How is Possession coming along?

Indeed!. It was from Babe(2). My son watches it every time he is in the back seat of my van. I know the movie by rote.

As far as 'Possession', it's coming along slowly. Maud and Roland found Christabel's letters. Then there was this mention of 'prowler'. Let's see how it goes from here. I wasn't kiddin when I said my reading took a beating after my kids. If I have half hour to myself at the end of day, it's a luxury. God!. how I long for a manicure.

I think it's very sweet of u to reply to everyone's comments in your thread. I really like that. thank u.

Take care

aashna

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Armana,

let me just say that I am a big fan of your writing, truly...

I just love the enigma, the romance, the easy affection, the simplicity a pleasure to read.

I love the development of characters, each of them built up carefully and methodically..the scenes are also depicted with so much care, it shows that you care a lot about writing.

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

tell you the truth ..............
you amez me every time with extra ordinary and exceeding my expecation parts.
from the first part to the fourteenth this is going as a book to me.
As you know i tresure this in my hard drive (as well as in my heart)
this is the best realtionship ..............
No expectations from each other
you are willing to give everything and not expecting anything in return is call love

Explanation of Sharing his Room was outstanding........
also about the intimacy (which is everyting and not everything) in relationship
I truly like this no strings attached relationship

and yes the once again this will be repeated over and over again Please continue soon.

pooja

Originally posted by: menal

hiii there i have been reading your ff but i am guilty of being lazy and not posting comments for your story .....and i must say u r a very talented writer and i can just visualize the entire picture in fron of me....excellent work keep it up and i like it when u update on sundays as the forum is usually so dull on the weekends!!!! u need a round of applause 👏

Originally posted by: india06

The story is sauntering charmingly tantalizing the reader(c'est moi).Like after first bouquet of fine wine,I'm urged to look forward to the rest that is on offer.

No part disappoints!!

Thanks.

Originally posted by: rivya

Armana...I am almost certain that Jai is falling if not already fallen...and thanks to Nach and Ran...he may even realize...

I think we need to bring in some jealousy...and then the effects will play out...

Cant wait for the next update...this one awesome...

Rivs

Originally posted by: nibbles

Finally caught up Armana!😛
hey sweetie, was wondering where yo had disappeared. Missed your bold, centered, blue presence!

Wow, you have been busy!!
given the amount of pestering and threats it's not surprising in the least!

'Jannat' sounds heavenly!!😳........Couldn't think of a better place for Bani to spend time with Jai........your descriptions as usual were amazingly prices and immediately brought the image straight into my head!!👏👏👏

Absaloutely love you for making Pushky and Pia work under Jai......I'm sure they've both been thrown into a spiral of thoughts regarding Bani's sudden arrival!😃

Nattu and Ranveer sound absaloutely adorable!!😆........

Their first sight of Bani was very powerful, and I adore JB's relationship!!😳

As usual, greedily waiting for more!!😉
see what i mean?😛
thanks and a big 🤗

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome part.
Loved it.
Like the way slowly and stead Bani making her way to Jai's heart without his knowlege.
It is so true never say never.
Ranveer and Nachiket are so sweet and adorable...can't leave JB alone 😆 😆
plz cont. soon.

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hi Armana

everytime I read your update,I fall short of words.I feel there are no words to describe your talent.I mean this from the bottom of my heart,that was truly fabalous.just beautifully written.loved how jai reassures bani abt staying in one room,to ranveer and nachiket's eagerness to know more abt there guest to pia and puskhar curiosty abt bani,just wonderful.the way you describe the history behind the name Jannat,simply superb.I am so eager to read the next part. 😊

preet 😛