The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 9

Originally posted by: joa123

gr 8 part 👏 👏
loved it ....
waiting for next part
when will Jai find out that Bani is his angel
plzz update next part soon

thank you.
you will know when Jai realises since you will get to read it!

Originally posted by: pkbains

Wonderful part Armana! Such sweet and simple jestures. And he thinks
"never" is a truthful and reasonable response!
So I am waiting to see when he realizes how she relates to his past, and
when he realizes her identity with respect to her painting!!
Please continue soon!!

thank you sweetie.

Originally posted by: sun29

well armana a wonderful part again ,their silent acceptance of each other ..the room they have for each other in this relationship was beautifully expressed..plus ur explanation of the whole setting was comendable.....the name jannat ,the story abt the mansion.....the equation between jai and the boys.....everything was aptly conveyed 👏 👏 ...so we have a twin storm named roshni and pia brewing up 😉

thank you.
i like storms. they can be so useful!

Originally posted by: aashnaa5

That was such a pleasant surprise this beautiful spring morning. I was looking forward to this update from u. JW needn't have to justify his relationship to the world, it doesn't seem to matter. but what about Masi?. Once she returns, the equations are definitely going to change. Bani has definitely stirred some emotions in him. Atleast, both Bani & marriage are somewhere in his mind together.
That'll do for now.

your last line reminds me of the taciturn farmer in that cute movie about the pig- "Babe" i think i can't remember the title!
thank you.😊 How is Possession coming along?

Originally posted by: Garf

Hey Armana,

Perfect weekend treat...Fabulous, Oustanding, Amazing...I could come up with only these three adjectives right now... 😊 I love the whole story behind the house and I love the way you have potrayed the communication between them....and bani of course feels completely at home and I am so happy Jai has started to wonder about marriage...ummm really ur fanfic is just sooo delicious our appetite for it never satiates... 😊

Garf

thanks😃

Originally posted by: ash9

gr 8 part
👏

thanks

Originally posted by: simz99

Armanaaaaaa...... 😍 what a wonderful wonderful part!!!
I love the way how each part meets and exceeds the expectations that I set upon it....you truly have a great talent and when your first book is published, I will wanna pre-order a copy please 😉 😆 😆
I was wondering about who had planted those vines...and the history behind the house, so thank you for explaining that! Can't wait for the next part now....don't want this to ever end 👏

thank you sweetheart,
no book in the pipeline, sorry!
see, i have always told you that ESP (N) rocks!!! You did it in BH, and you're doing it again!😛

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Armana,
Fantastic part 👏 👏 👏 (doesn't this sound too repetitive )

The ease in their relationship is portrayed with so much elegance...
More than Bani's comfort I'm in awe of JW's comfort of having her in his house ...in his life...
Bani has accpeted everything without any questions... and I loved the fact that JW is not so comfortable with it...

Please update soon

Poo

welcome back.
thank you, i particularly cherish being complimented for portraying things with "elegance!" made my day.😃

Originally posted by: abhita

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME ARMANA....

👏

thank you. thank you. thank you.😊

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Armana

Just read the last two parts. Its heavenly, especially the way the relationship is being developed between the two.

Nice to see the more humane side of Jai.

GOod work, excellent must say. KEEP IT UP 👍🏼

thanks sangs😃